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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover



Di... First of all i am lucky that u got time to read my FF as i know u r trying to read almost all Ffs of the forum.
I guess i failed to convey tht it's Kalpi who filed divorce but everyone in the city thinks it's Rags. The story is proceeding towards their issue... I think a person can't end a relation just over a simple reason or mistake but it's the situations which led him/her to take this decision... The updates are hinting towards the first crack in their relationship... The opportunist businessman Raghav was not Kalpi's Raghav and there she started driving away from him... Then he started giving less attention to her and it was the second blow!! More reasons to come.

May be u r not reading too much... Something is there which is unpardonable but is it from Raghav's side or kalpi's... Deffo Raghav's side. So just wait for 1-2 updates and the whole story will reveal.

u made me super happy by ur comments... M really happy that u r loving it, This one is my fav as well as it's close to reality... All my other FFs are far from realities and full of twists n turns. U may not like them much.


Vish! This ff have caught my attention because of how its deep and like you said it's closeness to realty!! I wish I cud start reading it over when and if I get the time! I will be busy from today but not busy to read your update on this story!! Keep up the fantastic work you're doing;) eager for next update ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Important Note regarding story :
Guys I guess many of u feel that i ma not revealing the secret of divorce.So I just want to tell u my views on the story which I guess I failed to express by my writing skills.

I feel a person specially lady can't walk out of relation just coz her hubby commits a mistake.. no matter how big the mistake is... If someone has decided to walk of the 12 years long marriage than there has to be series of event which mad her feel unwanted... definitely the final blow was the trigger which helps her in taking such major step but we can't ignore the first crack of relationship and the event which hurted her deeply.

Here Kalpi has filed for divorce... From past 5 years of her marriage she was feeling lonely... Raghav whom she loved deeply has changed after achieving heights in life... He climbed the ladder of success alone leaving a dejected Kalpi behind... That was the first blow on her love..Her heart was scratched. Than Raghav came home drunk and they fought... this was the first crack on their love... Eventually she lost the love and Raghav's time which i have shown at many places like them not eating together... Raghav busy in files while drives and all... This all are the foundation for the reason of divorce... She felt unwanted in Raghav's life but was not able to take a major decision and finally something happened which helped her in taking a strong step which i have not revealed yet...

Before revealing the final blow i wanted u guys to go know the pain that Kalpi went through. I want u to know every crack of their relationships so that u can understand Kalpi and her pov. i hope m not dragging it. If u want I can cut the next part and reveal the truth but I think i should explain Ria's illness before that. The choice is urs so please tell me what u want.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover

Important Note regarding story :

Guys I guess many of u feel that i ma not revealing the secret of divorce.So I just want to tell u my views on the story which I guess I failed to express by my writing skills.

I feel a person specially lady can't walk out of relation just coz her hubby commits a mistake.. no matter how big the mistake is... If someone has decided to walk of the 12 years long marriage than there has to be series of event which mad her feel unwanted... definitely the final blow was the trigger which helps her in taking such major step but we can't ignore the first crack of relationship and the event which hurted her deeply.

Here Kalpi has filed for divorce... From past 5 years of her marriage she was feeling lonely... Raghav whom she loved deeply has changed after achieving heights in life... He climbed the ladder of success alone leaving a dejected Kalpi behind... That was the first blow on her love..Her heart was scratched. Than Raghav came home drunk and they fought... this was the first crack on their love... Eventually she lost the love and Raghav's time which i have shown at many places like them not eating together... Raghav busy in files while drives and all... This all are the foundation for the reason of divorce... She felt unwanted in Raghav's life but was not able to take a major decision and finally something happened which helped her in taking a strong step which i have not revealed yet...

Before revealing the final blow i wanted u guys to go know the pain that Kalpi went through. I want u to know every crack of their relationships so that u can understand Kalpi and her pov. i hope m not dragging it. If u want I can cut the next part and reveal the truth but I think i should explain Ria's illness before that. The choice is urs so please tell me what u want.

dear go with u r flow..and i don't have any problem..its really good going..only hope that raghav not betryed kalpi or say like affair with someon like that...
but i like u r story so i don't mind about it...only 1 request plz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thank u dear... M glad that u gave an honest feedback.. i guess I failed in making u guys understand that the updates is showing the reasons for the divorce.. As i said to Di.. A person specially women can't break the relationship just for a mistake or single reason... There has to be series of events which leads her to take this decision. Please read the not which I am going to attach in some time. u might understand the reason.

N u dint offend me... i do not hesitate in giving the true opinions so i don't mind accepting them as well. in fct i prefer such opinions as it shows me the mirror and tells me where to improve. Thank u once again.


Thank u for understanding that's what make u an amazing person and writer
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover

Important Note regarding story :

Guys I guess many of u feel that i ma not revealing the secret of divorce.So I just want to tell u my views on the story which I guess I failed to express by my writing skills.

I feel a person specially lady can't walk out of relation just coz her hubby commits a mistake.. no matter how big the mistake is... If someone has decided to walk of the 12 years long marriage than there has to be series of event which mad her feel unwanted... definitely the final blow was the trigger which helps her in taking such major step but we can't ignore the first crack of relationship and the event which hurted her deeply.

Here Kalpi has filed for divorce... From past 5 years of her marriage she was feeling lonely... Raghav whom she loved deeply has changed after achieving heights in life... He climbed the ladder of success alone leaving a dejected Kalpi behind... That was the first blow on her love..Her heart was scratched. Than Raghav came home drunk and they fought... this was the first crack on their love... Eventually she lost the love and Raghav's time which i have shown at many places like them not eating together... Raghav busy in files while drives and all... This all are the foundation for the reason of divorce... She felt unwanted in Raghav's life but was not able to take a major decision and finally something happened which helped her in taking a strong step which i have not revealed yet...

Before revealing the final blow i wanted u guys to go know the pain that Kalpi went through. I want u to know every crack of their relationships so that u can understand Kalpi and her pov. i hope m not dragging it. If u want I can cut the next part and reveal the truth but I think i should explain Ria's illness before that. The choice is urs so please tell me what u want.

plz go with ur flow dear. Loving this ff a lot. I just hope the reason behind divorce is not infidility. I cant bear rags with any1 n vice versa
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Posted: 10 years ago
Do it on ur own way dear.. as nw I undrstud d whole plot.. I'm ready to read watevr d update would be abt.. and no need to rush to reveal d secret.. jus go on with ur thoughts on story..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear you go with your flow
your ff is really interesting
we know kalpi has lot of strength to bear things but if their relationship has gone till divorce then something must be serious we trust you
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Posted: 10 years ago
vish read d missed updates
flash back moments of ragna were just amazing
and passionate ragna dance wow
and loved d way she handled media was too good
HAttS OF TO U vish
i could feel their pains/emotions while reading it.(
yet their is distance...love,care,need support 4 each other )...
d way u describe every small thing it may be saree,dress or furniture just
perfect ...i culd visualize everything
and their is sumthng in your ff i cant express it exactly which drags/caught my attention
and go with your flow...
all i can say
just
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Posted: 10 years ago
and i will comment on remaing ffs of yours after reading them :)))))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Vish this was an emotional note, even though it was just a note LOL. But it touched me somewhere and I could relate to it. I very well know and understand how it feels for a lady and woman who loves her partner more than her life, and that person slowly-slowly starts ignoring her, starts ignoring her love, making her feel that she has no value or place in his life. She breaks bit by bit, like a slow poison, every pain, every hurt breaking her hearts in bits and pieces but still doesn't break her love and commitment for the love of her life. N here we are talking about the institution of marriage, where the bond is made even more stronger by marriage making her decision even more difficult. I agree, slowly, slowly she starts feeling lonely, cries in her heart alone. But then there must have happened something really big which broke her totally and finally, making her decision to go away easier. It is sad it is the reality of life, and many women, especially married one's are forced to live such lonely lives.

Here in this case and most of the cases I think a s a girl and women we forget to make our partner respect us, we continue taking in all the pains and that is not wrong. But then, he starts taking you for granted. Self-respect as a human being, as a girl first is a must. Only then your partner also wil realise your worth and learn the value of your sacrifices; and if he doesn't then he isn't worth all the tears. Until and unless like Kalpi, children are a big consideration in such matters.Still wonder though what must be that incident.
But as I have always said, you are the writer of story and you first know clearly the vision with which you had started this story. So, take your own call and go with the flow. or maybe if possible take a middle path. BTW you made me cry with this note.you write so good.😭

n sorry for long comment, I got carried away.😳
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago

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