Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Vish! I don't know, but this ff caught my attention becasue of its depth! You know, that strong bond between two lovers, yet there is this 'so called status' in life that keeps them apart! Still you haven't reveal to us why rags wants to divorce Kalpi! After all the support she has give him!! I know he loves his wife dearly and she him! I know from getting into business in order to get you have to give! It's a fact!! But I see the character you made kalpi to be is of standing for what one believe in and not having to change because of status in life!! She longs for him just as he her, and yet there is something so strong that keeps them apart!! What can it be?? Can one be so powerful and wrong at the same time?! Cause I'm seeing rags now, where he is the position he is in society is only becasue of Kalpi and he said so!! Now, how can he file for divorce from someone who made him whom he is today?! Then why the divorce? And now Sammy is in the picture!! What more you have for us?! I can't help but think that something happened with maya and rags!! Don't know if I'm reading too much into this but for me I feel there is so much you still need to reveal!! All the emotions are there, the support, the care, the need, the longing and yet this one thing is holding them back!! This is really deep vish!! I really love this ff!! It's gloomy also especially when you describe the house and it's contents! The distance is there, but they are still seeing the love for eachother!! It's truly amazing! Hats off to you!! I do intend to read your other ff!! In time I will but for now you have gottene undivided attention with this one!! Truly awesome!! In love with it!!
Di... First of all i am lucky that u got time to read my FF as i know u r trying to read almost all Ffs of the forum.
I guess i failed to convey tht it's Kalpi who filed divorce but everyone in the city thinks it's Rags. The story is proceeding towards their issue... I think a person can't end a relation just over a simple reason or mistake but it's the situations which led him/her to take this decision... The updates are hinting towards the first crack in their relationship... The opportunist businessman Raghav was not Kalpi's Raghav and there she started driving away from him... Then he started giving less attention to her and it was the second blow!! More reasons to come.
May be u r not reading too much... Something is there which is unpardonable but is it from Raghav's side or kalpi's... Deffo Raghav's side. So just wait for 1-2 updates and the whole story will reveal.
u made me super happy by ur comments... M really happy that u r loving it, This one is my fav as well as it's close to reality... All my other FFs are far from realities and full of twists n turns. U may not like them much.
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago