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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover



Thank u Sho...🤗

Here comes my bestie with her super duper comments... Ohh!! Leave the feedback aside... 1st tell me do u know magic?? How come I feel so close to u in such short span of time... Love u sweetheart... N m straight. So love u as frn only.😆

As I told u this story as different portrayal of relationship... It's about a couple(RagNa) who doesn't know what went wrong in their relationship.. A husband(R) who committed a mistake but wants to rectify it. A wife(K) who is not ready to forgive him but a mother who is ready to do anything for her daughter. A daughter(Ria) who is suffering coz of the complex relationships around her. A selfish sister(P).. A mother(G) who left her son for his selfishness and A father(V) who loves his daughter but his ego is too big to forgive her mistake. The story is about the complexity of relationship between them. As i said all characters are grey and no one is negative.

I do not know why I said all this... But this may be related to the comment u made on Vitthal. U knw m crack.😆


vishu 🤗 u cnt blieve it aftr reading ur cment i literaly hd tear in my eyes n smile on my lips😳
oh all character are grey bt i just loving the way u potraying each character, with each update u show so much emotions n different shade of each character u showing.
Ha ha i knw ur antics😆
love u too darling
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Posted: 10 years ago
vishu as per ur decision. I m enjoying dis story n i didnt feel dat ur dragging. Yes u r going smoothly as per stories requirement. U r showing kalpi's pain n her lonelyness first, n yes der is ltl cnfusion y kalpi taking such step, bt i knw wen u reveal it evry1 undstnd her pain. Bt i must say there is tym to reveal dis suspence. Varna kahani me maja ni.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vish, I understand all of that!! You didn't fail at your writing skills!! But the thing is, I understand Kalpi's greave and hurt!! But it's not like raghav didn't acknowledged her?! And it's not like she doesn't see how much he needs and want her in his life?! Maybe because of the person I am, I'm taking this to personal!! Honey, you continue writing as per your plan! I appreciate you trying to guide us accordingly!! Will just read!! I am touched by the dept of this ff!! I hope you wouldn't let the divorce happen cause what is life without the one you love? And the times they shared doesn't that mean anything?!
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Posted: 10 years ago
pls pls pls go with the flow I love this update so ff do donot need to rush up pls go with the flow.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vish your decision will be the best as you are the writer... Just go according to the flow and then it is sure to turn out beautiful ya! You are such an awesome writer I trust you to reveal the things at the right time!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
The FF is going in a steady flow only.

But as the FF started with the divorce case,we are unable to control our curiosity to know the exact reason.

Please take your time in expressing the major blows in Ragna's life and Ria's illness.

But pls don't delay in giving us the updates.

That's the imp request from my side.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thank u Appy... m really feeling happy on hearing that my romantic scenes are good too.

As i said in few previous updates... Kalpi dint took the decision to walk out of marriage all of a sudden... The changes in her life was quite responsible for it... M planning to add a note regarding this. it will be more clear after that.

I have introduced Sammy in 2nd/3rd chap. Mentioned that Kalpi is uneasy around him but never told the reason... The only thing known about him is he is 8 years younger to Kalpi and a professor in the college where Pakhi studies..

Thank u dear... M glad u r liking it. More emotional parts to come... keep ur hanky ready. 😆


@bold 😆😆 guess so 10-15 rakhne padenge..

thanks for adding that note part.. it was much needed .. now won't pest u with doubts...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz write as or heart say coz I think b4 u write any character u feel that person ,which EMA fail so dear Plz flow wd ur cv
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Posted: 10 years ago
pls go ahead as per ur story flow...no hurry pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vish u r really true Moving ON in life is better said than done. U mentioned if first chappy of ur FF as KalpI's POV "now ppl in black coats will decide our fate? Whether we r going to be together or not? This itself shows subconsciously yet she doesn't wanna come out of this relationship whatever may b the reason. The question here is where the love has gone frommarriage? And if it has evaporated should such marriage continue in pretext of duty and future of children?
Probably marriage for men is just a station n not destination, where as its THE DESTINATION for women. Thts why how much ever qualified or professionally successful being Foundation of home n perfecting all relations is her topmost ppriority which is followed by expectations of attention n appreciation n pampering from spouse which is not wrong either. Lack of fulfilment in this creates lacuna and loneliness in their lives, and those who are bit realistic take a step like Kalpi albeit with great pain.
however moving out of a relation or after moving out getting in to other relation can fill up lacuna? May be Yes May be not. What shud be done then? As Charu or someone mentioned yes most of the women spend their lives ( yes I mean spend n not live) just like this, just being in relation without emotion. And they think they r fulfilling their duties but the inner dissatisfaction does reflect in lives of everyone as u hv shown inspite of perfect mother, perfect woman Kalpi is Riya is suffering from grave illnesses.

Well since u hv come up with the problem u will surely hv ur solution to it n will like it to see it unfolded. But I guess there is no standard solution of this complex problem n it will vary from couple to couple and context to context. But surely this FF has put the thinking cap ON. Brilliant job dear for giving words to this hidden and mostly ignored problem.
sorry if it has bored u or irritated u.

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