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mattieram

@mattieram

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Please hurry with update, can't wait!!!!!!

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: AmbroseFever

You know what I meant by Tom, Dick and Harry , though in case of Pakhi it's ok since Pakhi is a she- man...lol. But could spell trouble for Kalpi 😉

Thank you for giving me credits for motivation and since I make the muse extremely happy, don't you think I deserve an update? Check it with your muse... 🤗

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Both chapters was superb
I like that Aria and Kalpi cant stop thinking about Rammy
Although Aria dislike Sammy there is an attraction that's pulling her like a magnet ;)
As for Kalpi she is a goner, her mystery savior is on her mind 24/7
Celia is a nice lady, I like that she is there for Kalpi and Aria
Omg! I can't stop laughing and did a little victory dance when Raghav was making love to Pakhi but imagining Kalpi lol... Isnt that something
Wow! RagNa changing room scene was hot
Damn Raghav has the hots for Kalpi and vice versa
Aria staring back as Sammy and answering him back was awesome
These two are cute
Beautifully written chapters

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hathway

@hathway

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Awesome chapters Raza!!

Everytime Kalpi's thoughts go back to one minute touch of hotel stranger!!Raghav is also having the same feeling, he is not ready to come out of doe-shaped eye.He is thinking of kalpi even when making love with Pakhi😡. I was spellbound with your writing when he could only utter "me too" and finish it off for pakhi's response.I like your writing for this, you don't use many words to express the feelings or emotions only a word or two will have great effect on us we readers.Like "it had begun","typical"

I really felt bad when kalpi tell pooja "No man can love her" as she is such an innocent soul . I'm really waiting for this Raz has to how you bring her out of this fear. And to mention change room scene was hot!!Both surprised!! Is Sammy getting attracted to Aira? or is it he just wanted to hurt her?

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: mattieram
Please hurry with update, can't wait!!!!!!

WIll update soon! 😳

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

You know what I meant by Tom, Dick and Harry , though in case of Pakhi it's ok since Pakhi is a she- man...lol. But could spell trouble for Kalpi 😉

Thank you for giving me credits for motivation and since I make the muse extremely happy, don't you think I deserve an update? Check it with your muse... 🤗

LOL! Trouble for Kalpi? 😉

Lol, you sure as hell deserve an update but a wee bit busy at the moment. However, will update asap. 😊 Muse has gone to sleep but is due to wake any minute. 😃

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Both chapters was superb
I like that Aria and Kalpi cant stop thinking about Rammy
Although Aria dislike Sammy there is an attraction that's pulling her like a magnet ;)
As for Kalpi she is a goner, her mystery savior is on her mind 24/7
Celia is a nice lady, I like that she is there for Kalpi and Aria
Omg! I can't stop laughing and did a little victory dance when Raghav was making love to Pakhi but imagining Kalpi lol... Isnt that something
Wow! RagNa changing room scene was hot
Damn Raghav has the hots for Kalpi and vice versa
Aria staring back as Sammy and answering him back was awesome
These two are cute
Beautifully written chapters

They indeed can't, just how Rammy can't stop thinking about the two sisters. You think attraction is only for Aira is Sammy also attracted to her? 😛 Kalpi and Raghav are both goners. Raghav can't seem to get her out of his mind and she cannot get rid of him. Celia is definitely playing the mother-like figure for the two girls and she is their greatest support who has taught the two sisters everything.

Did you really? LOL. You're the first that did a victory dance at the whole Raghav thinking about Kalpi while making love to Pakhi. Some can't seem to look past Pakhi and Raghav in bed together 😆😆, which is completely understandable.

Changing room scene I had fun writing 😃😃. Glad you liked it!

Sammy and Aira are a lost case. Lol.

Thank you!

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: hathway
Awesome chapters Raza!!

Everytime Kalpi's thoughts go back to one minute touch of hotel stranger!!Raghav is also having the same feeling, he is not ready to come out of doe-shaped eye.He is thinking of kalpi even when making love with Pakhi😡. I was spellbound with your writing when he could only utter "me too" and finish it off for pakhi's response.I like your writing for this, you don't use many words to express the feelings or emotions only a word or two will have great effect on us we readers.Like "it had begun","typical"

I really felt bad when kalpi tell pooja "No man can love her" as she is such an innocent soul . I'm really waiting for this Raz has to how you bring her out of this fear. And to mention change room scene was hot!!Both surprised!! Is Sammy getting attracted to Aira? or is it he just wanted to hurt her?

Thanks chica!

Wow, never has anyone really taken an in depth look at my writing and I thank you for that comment. Yes, sometimes it is best to go with simplicity to have the greatest impact on the audience rather than going for fancy and archaic vocabulary.

Let's see how the whole story will pan out and I am so thankful to you that you are liking the way it is going so far. Sammy and Aira..I feel like their a gone case 😆😉.

Take care!