res unres
Firstly i start off with me appreciating the title ..its not d word 'Respect' that made a difference..instead its the '?' mark put later. Initially when i started off, i wondered about the title's significance ...but by the time i reached the end ..it was crystal clear !!
I dont know why i liked this update in particular. This 1 was a perfect blend of all emotions like desire, lust , self-respect , the wish to remain loyal inspite of the extreme covet ...
The actions & the reactions of every character in the update were highly justified & logivcal.
The Raghav Kalpi encounter was too good , but what caught my attention was
"Belle.
Kalpi's eyes snapped open when she heard the name in her head. The name that defined her real identity. Her throat constricted as the painful reminder of what she was came back to her. "
This was the highlight of the entire update where she had unknowingly transformed herself from belle to kalpi. & those words got her back to realisation...
& samaira ...what shud i say ??
I loved the strong aira of this update ... the way she gave sammy an earful was awesome 👏👏
"Sells her body. The words reminded Aira of who was like thousands of knives piercing her skin. Aira's eyes flashed with anger before she let her faade of Stella slip in place.
"Yeah I sell my body, but why do men like you buy it? You rich and high class businessmen look for pleasure with me, why?" She asked as she moved closer to him. Sammy could only watch as she smirked and moved closer to him.
"You know why?" Aira asked, leaning close to him and whispering in his ears. She pressed her body against his, letting him feel her softness against his muscled frame.
"Because you crave for me. You see this young, lithe body and you want it,"
though the above mentioned words intended to teach sammy a lesson ..but if understood its meaning carefully ..they are something more. Especially "Yeah i sell my body , but why do men like u buy it?" ...it somewhere expresses her pain of being unwantedly pushed into this business (for xyz reasons which u might disclose soon)..but then what can she do ?
I loved the later transition as well where her words become bolder & actions more stronger to deal with sammy.
Dont mind me admitting it ..but i was too much in daze in admiring the above portions dat i just couldnt concentrate much on the Kalpi-Paakhi encounter or the sister's bonding...well now , isnt dat a compliment ??
Too much of seriousness ...on a lighter note
'The brothers gotta be more careful of these two sisters who are driving them crazy'😆😆
Hush ...finally done...
waiting for ur next update patiently
eager to know when & where & how belle meets raghav ...& ofcourse samaira.
& also a small lil thing from my side ...Paakhi's character is -ve in this ff , so it wont be tough to accept ragna when u put it. But Maya ?? ..she's a sweet soul ...though i love samaira ,but sammy dumping maya ...atleast i wont like it dat much😭. Hope u wud have a logical way to tackle with dat ...as always 😃😃
& last but not the least ... Idk bout the brothers but this ff is surely gonna prove to be "A sinfully beautiful addiction "for me 😉😉😆
Keep writing
MARUSHKAA
Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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