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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly srry for late cmmnt...Read last three parts...Wonderful n emotional updates
Finally aria n Sammy confrontation ...lik d slap n how she stood for herself wen Sammy was insulting n calling names
Kalpi has to b strong for her baby sister n she can't openly express her pain
The way u expressed kalpi's feeling wen she was wit kunal was awesome
Aww kalpi could still not forget raghav's touch
Lik dat aria is exited for shopping n loved both sisters smiling n having good time together
Raghav too thinking of kalpi while making love to pakhi shows his attraction for her
The trial room scene was awesome...still blushing😳
Sammy n aria both r angry...think sammy is affected by aria
Wonder wat will b raghav's reaction wen he wil know that Kalpi is an escort
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...loved Kalpi-Raghav trail room scene n Raghav imagining kalpi in pakhi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

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OMG!!!!! OMG!!!!!OMG!!!! Raz you made my rotten day wonderful!!!!! Love you da!🤗

I'm glad I was able to! Love ya too!

Ok firstly I love your banner!!! And secondly the words on them that she turned me into an animal that wanted nothing more than to devour her!! Sexy line!!! Who wrote this line!!! Awesome!!😳😳

That line..lolz..I wrote it. 😆 Thanks 😃

And the title of the update - Invitation from above! First when I read that I was like OMG who is gonna die!!!??? 😆 But then once I finished reading I understood that it is indeed an Invitation from above!!!!😉

What? LOL! Nobody's dying. It's too early. Lol. Yeah. I had to make sure my title was something related to the chapter.

And then the thought for the updates 😆

Never open the door to a lesser evil, for other & greater ones invariably slink in after it.

How true Razy!! But yet to figure out in whose context is this thought for! The sisters or the brothers!!! 😉

It's up to you however you want to make it.

Ufff how well you described what the sisters go through when they attend their clients!!! The disgusted feeling when the clients touch them shows how their souls are still pure!!!

Not every escort enjoys what they do. It had to be shown that it wasn't an option. They have to do it.

Aww Kalpi could still feel Raghav's touch! ☺️ She misses him and he misses her!!

😃

Aria was right Sammy did check her out when he saw her coming out of the lift! Men can do anything and if a woman is used by many men then 'she' is the s**t!!! Poor men!!! Urgh!! Hate men! But I am so loving Aira!!! She is not giving up in front of Sammy! Even though she was hurt with his words she stood for herself and Kalpi giving her strength was commendable!

Obviously the woman faces more prejudice than the man. He can check her out and he will not be called anything but if a woman checks out a guy then all hell breaks loose. I wanted to show the sister's bond as well.

Ewww Khush is with Aria to prove to his parents he is not gay???? Which means he is? But I thought he already had a girlfriend whom Sammy was defending!!!??😕

Yup. Piya doesn't live in India and his parents don't believe him when he tells them about her so Aira is the only way he can prove that to his parents.

Guess Kalpi wants Aira to escape from this world! She wants someone to fall in love with Aira so atleast Aira can lead a happy life! Aww Love Kalpi as a sister!!

You know how Kalpi is. Rather her suffer than let the people close to her suffer.

Hmmm Both sisters cant get the brothers out off their heads!! 😉

But obviously for two different reasons. One is annoyed with one brother the other is feeling all hot for him.

Hmmm Aira so excited for the shopping!!! Sisters shopping and having a good time! Love to see them smile!!!

Me too 😃

Chapter 5:


Oh I am so excited!!! Butterflies in my tummy...Stolen encounters??? Really so Kalpi Raghav gonna meet? Yipppeee!!!

f all the world hated you and believed you wicked, while your own conscience approved of you and absolved you from guilt, you would not be without friends

Oh Raz such a beautiful line and how how very true!! If you think what you are doing is right then somewhere you are not wrong because God has created all of us with conscience! And if we do something wrong we are the first ones to know it! What may seem right to me may seem wrong to you and vice-versa.

Well said! 👏

So for me nothing is right or wrong! Who decides what is right or wrong? The ones who did were also human right? And if I can err couldn't they have been wrong? So the above line makes so much sense! And I guess Aria believes in it completely!

Sorry but you could have named Raghav gf as anybody but Pakhi! It kind of leaves a distaste!! yuck!!! Their bond seemed so superficial to me! Raghav is just attracted to her thats it! So he is straying here and there even though he will deny but I can vouch for it that his mind strayed when Pakhi was not with him.

😆😆😆😆😆 Trust me, I hate Pakhi more than anything and it makes my blood boil but don't worry, my hatred won't have her stay for long. He is a man after all.

Hell!!! His mind strayed when he was making love to her?!!!!! See this is exactly what I was talking about!!!Fake these men are fake!!! They can think about another woman when doing the deed with their so called Gf but if a woman is an escort then she is a bitch because she sleeps with many men and oenly accepts it! Or do they have a problem that she charges for it! For I am so sure if it had been free they'd have been waiting in a beeline!!!

Reader's perspective! It's a bit of an early strike from Cupid in a way where he can think only about her even when he is with his girlfriend. I agree that it's wrong but since it's Pakhi I could hardly care less 😆.

And so he is guilty and is unable to say the three words to her?!! Hmmm

You really think it's guilt? 😊

What is Sammy??? Kush's daddy? mummy? Nanny? Leave him alone man I guess he is jealous of Khush for not having Aria all to himself! This man seriously has some problems!!!

He's the father of my kids 🤣. Kidding. Lol. Considering what happened in Sammy's life earlier, it makes all the more sense as to why he wants to keep his friend away but then again there's a certain limit. Ahahahahahaha. Let's see what's up with him.

Okay so Maya his love interest gives him surprises. Sorry but are Maya and Pakhi sisters too? I mean both have come down to give surprise almost around the same time. So Maya is a model too or a businesswoman?

Nope. Maya and Pakhi aren't sisters. They are friends because they are the gfs of the two Singhania brothers. Maya is a fashion designer so still in the whole glitz business.

Okay shopping time!!!! And the trial room confusion!!!☺️

I am still blushing! What was Raghav thinking going and knocking any door! and he did not recognise Kalpi's voice as not to be Pakhi's? Hmmm ufff I am still blushing!!!! Gawd!!!!did you really have to stop there???😡

Raghav has been out of it for a while so really why would he bother to check if the voices match. And plus he was knocked senseless at seeing Kalpi half undressed. LOL. Yes I did. I learnt it from you 😆.

And Whats with Sammy??? I thought he hated her and see this is it!!! Men will be men!!! He is more frustrated with himself and not her! He is angry with himself that the girl whom he had checked out whom he felt attracted to at the first sight turned out to be an escort!!!

Opposites attract no? Plus, what's a game without some fire? 😉

He then must have felt how wrong it was because it was a prostitute who had broken his family and yet here he was getting attracted to one!!!

Guilty conscience leads a man to do some out of the world things.

Ahaa! Caught you Sammy!! 😉

😆

And then like all good things come to an end your double bonanza update too had to end😭

Yup. It had to end otherwise it would've gotten too long.

Awww you dedicated it to me😳 Thank you! I so needed this! Your such a wonderful one raz!!!! My true soul sistaa!!!
I love you!!!! 👏 Love your writing skills mon'amie!

I love you more corazon!

Tu est tres bien!!!! Je suis tres impressionne mademosielle!!
Sa belle!!! J'aime tu beaucoup ma cherie!!!

Merci beaucoup mon ami! ❤️

mmmuaaah muaaahhh dont worry they are flying kisses and not french kisses!!!😆

LOLOLOLOL!

And now the million dollar question...
When will you update next????😃

Patience is a virtue. Why don't you be a sweet one and update LRR as a return gift for this double bonanza? 48 hours me thinks is up! 😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

You totally rocked it girl. Fabulous update . And double update to boot. Loved how rags can't get kalpi
Out of his mind. The accidental meeting of the 2 in the trial room was wonderful. Can't wait for the business seminar, update soon


Aww! Thank you! YUP! A double bonanza! Yes, just like how Kalpi can't get out Raghav out of his mind! Will update soon and yeah the business seminar will be a special night for all four of them. Will update soon!
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Originally posted by: mariee

again kudos to u for dealing with such a delicate topic with such perfection.

as always u hve left me speechless
& ty for that double update. that was something i did require...
continue soon


Thank you darling! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Your comments really push me to write more! Will continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you so much!
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Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Super hot update Thanks! 😉



Raghav and Kalpi both can't forget each other oops land up in trial room dim light😲 hmm what going to happen will they able to resist magnetic pull 😉Let's see what happens!
On the side Sammy and Aira fighting but there also some magnetic pull.These two are a gone case 😆
Hmm waiting to see what gonna to happen in business seminar party. All hell's gonna break loose!
Thanks for super bonanza gift You're most welcome! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

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Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Oh oh! I loved the double Bonanza it was awesome.

You have beautifully portrayed the emotions. I could literally feel the electricity between Rags and Kalpi. very nicely done. The way you described Kalpi's real feelings while she was with Kunal and the way she was forced to react was awesome.

I can't wait to know what happens next. Kalpi, Rags, Sammy, Aria they all seem such intense personalities.
I so want o read more n more.

ps- plz, I request, make the chapters longer. for me they are too short. You are actually that good. I found them to finish too soon for my liking.


Thanks Mimi! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm glad that you think they are intense personalities as I really wanted my characters to have a strong base. Oh lord! Make them longer? Lol. I try my best to make them long but there is a certain point that has to be a cut off. Otherwise IF doesn't allow it either! Lol. Thank you darling but I will try my best!
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Originally posted by: lolor

superb...thnx for double bonanza...

ragna getting connected & love Arya sammy argument


Thanks sweetheart! Glad you're liking it!
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Originally posted by: sonia_1

fabulous double update.


Thank you! 😊

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