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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sb1234

That was awesome !!!

Kalpi and Raghav meet again .. yay !!! Loved how they can't seem to think anything else apart from each other .. Love blossoms :)
N Aira and Sammy .. hmmm .. finally they did get attracted towards each other
So looking forward to the next updates !!!


Thanks! Yes it seems to have blossomed but winter is coming...
Sammy and Aira are a gone case. Lol.
Will update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you sweets!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

More than double bonanza its Couple bonanza 😆😆 as all couples met in the UD 😛😆😆 Raghav-Paakhi ; Raghav-Kalpi ; Sammy Maya ; Sammy Aira 😆... except for Sammy-Aira all other have been lovey dovey 😆😆😆 Lol! It has been a couple bonanza indeed. But sooner or later it had to happen. Sammy and Aira are a gone case. Those two love to battle.

Seeing Kalpi's too much effect on Raghav wonder how long he gonna stay around Pakhi 😛😆😆...specially after another "close" encounter with Kalpi...😳 😛😳 now Raghav must not be regretting this shopping trip 😆...but his brother must be 😛😆 as he get to meet Aira once again 😛😆😆 Hmm...is Raghav going to stay around Pakhi or is Pakhi going to stay around Raghav? I wonder..Lol. He better not be. I went through lots of pains to get him into that trial room 😆.

Even kalpi might be happy to meet her hotel stranger once again 😛😊😊...just enjoyed their trial room confusion ☺️ 😳 ...waiting for their meet at somewhat similar close(r) encounter seminar☺️😉 😳 I bet she is extremely happy. Let's see what happens at the seminar because as far as I have been informed by the muse, all hell's going to break loose!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abxetz

Omg a romantic update raz you are great or paki vs raghav 😡


Thank you! Lol. Don't worry. it is a RagNa FF.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Raz , you are back with not one but two fabulous updates. Double bonanza as in like a Diwali treat!!!!!! Loved it! Thanks!

Kalpi flinching when Kunal touches her though she is used to it now. Her thinking ' it had begun ' is proof of how difficult and mechanical it is her for. Feels so sorry for the poor soul.

Celia wanting to know what happened with Khush. She can see that Aira is upset over something. Aira can't forget Sammy's words and it hurts like hell . Kalpi is still thinking of the stranger she met at the hotel. She can't get him out of her mind. Hmm. It does seem as Cupid had struck both of them. Although one is annoyed with one brother and the other can't stop thinking about the other brother.

Both the sisters invited for the seminar. Kunal invited Belle to make his ex-wife jealous whereas Khush wants to make it up for Sammy's insult and also to prove to his parents that he is not gay. But doesn't he have a girlfriend Piya whom Sammy had mentioned? Why can't he take her instead? Lol. I just told Pri the reason why that happened. Lolz.

Of all the people in the world, you had to put Pakhi as Raghav's girlfriend! Seriously! !!!!! Any Tom, Dick or Harry would have sufficed. To top it all you wrote a love making session between them! It leaves such a bad taste in your mouth ! I hate her 😡 You could have written he was not in the mood or something 😉 Don't kill me. I had to. It's more fun when you have the authority to bash the person you despise and for me it is Pakhi. Tom, Dick, and Harry, eh? That would've sufficed but unfortunately if Raghav was gay then what would happen to poor Kalpi? 😆 Ahahahaha. Whoopsie daisy!

Raghav can't stop thinking about Kalpi. Loved that he kept thinking of her while making love to Pakhi. He couldn't bring himself to say 'I love you ' to her and his 'me too' was forced when she said those three words to him. To quote my man, "Mausam badal raha hai, pasan badal rahi hai"...the winds of amor have changed.

What is wrong with Sammy? Can't he mind his own business? Khush is the one who went to Aira but Sammy thinks it's her fault. His hatred for women like her is too much that he is not thinking straight. Considering that his family was ruined due to an escort I would say it's okay to an extent but then at the same time this is what leads him back to Aira over and over again 😃😉

Sammy was in for a surprise when Maya came to meet him. He's in love with her and is happy to see her. Is he really? 😃

Aira is excited for shopping. So like me!!!!!! Loved her enthusiasm on seeing the dresses. Loved Kalpi 's talk with the shop lady. She is disappointed and tells that no man can ever love her as 'Kalpi'. Ah yes! To be honest, that is one of my favorite lines and I patted myself on the back when I wrote them 😆. I felt as if it really tied everything together and specially why Kalpi felt the way she felt.

The dressing room scene was awesome. It really set the temperatures soaring. Raghav went to Kalpi's room unknowingly. He couldn't understand why he kept having this sexual pull towards Pakhi as he didn't know it's the girl who comes in his dreams now. He didn't recognise the voice or what? I think he was busy ogling at her bare back to notice it's not Pakhi Bingo! . Will their encounter result in a kiss? Did you really have to stop it at that and leave us hanging there? Ahahahaha! I have this old affair with cliff hangers. Ask the people in the QH forum. They all know about it and yes they get annoyed with me for it but where's the fun when you don't leave your readers wanting more? 😛

Sammy and Aira have also met. Both are angry with each other. She's trying hard to keep her facade of strength. I think Sammy is getting affected by her as well but pretends otherwise. You my dear, are the person who sets my motivation bar soaring and your comments end up making the muse extremely happy. Naturally, happy muse means more updates so thank you darling. More importantly, thank you for reading and appreciating my bakwaas. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Raz thanks for double bonanza. 😃 Loved the updates. Though was tough to see Raghav-Pakhi lovemaking scenes Sowwie sweety . You can understand why, but I understood it is necessary and in a sense good for their love stories. Sammy & Raghav met both girls in different circumstances A common theme that might turn slightly uncommon. One started hating the girl and ended up being physical with her. Would it be the other way round for Raghav-Kalpi? Let's see what happens! The muse has something in mind but the information isn't coming to me yet. They are attracted to each other, ended up being physical accidentally and when Raghav learns her true identity, what'll be his reaction?I feel sad for Kalpi and Aria, being forced to do this for their living. Not everything is happy and lovely.

Loved Ragna trial room scene so-so much,actually that is my favourite part. Really? Still wonder how is the love story of a famous business tycoon and an escort possible? Especially when she must have slept with most of his acquaintances? It is intriguing, sad, interesting and different. All in all love it. 👏 Thanks Charu! Love your comments and always look forward to reading them! Trust me, the love story might seem impossible but when Raz is here, then why fear?

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Firstly srry for late cmmnt...Read last three parts...Wonderful n emotional updates No worries!
Finally aria n Sammy confrontation ...lik d slap n how she stood for herself wen Sammy was insulting n calling names
Kalpi has to b strong for her baby sister n she can't openly express her pain That she can't. If she breaks down, then who will support Aira? That's the way Kalpi thinks.
The way u expressed kalpi's feeling wen she was wit kunal was awesome
Aww kalpi could still not forget raghav's touch 😛
Lik dat aria is exited for shopping n loved both sisters smiling n having good time together
Raghav too thinking of kalpi while making love to pakhi shows his attraction for her
The trial room scene was awesome...still blushing😳 Lol. I enjoyed writing it 😃
Sammy n aria both r angry...think sammy is affected by aria You think so? Let's see what's up with these two.
Wonder wat will b raghav's reaction wen he wil know that Kalpi is an escort Let's see indeed.
Continue soon Will continue soon! Thanks so much for commenting! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aru18

nice story..continue soon


Thank you! Will continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DimpleAggarwal

Nice update...loved Kalpi-Raghav trail room scene n Raghav imagining kalpi in pakhi


Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I enjoyed writing the trial room scene too! Lol. Thanks!

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