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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Finally read all parts
update soon next part and do PM once update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Helloozzz... n finally My first comment🥳

Ohk. .. coming to update... 👏👏👏BEAUTIFUL👏👏👏
Its superb dear... 👏

Aira inquiring about kalpi's stranger😆 vry nyc..👏
but in d vry nxt scene she met his Stranger😉
Sammy n Aira loved their part... 👏
d way sammy said such harsh words to her😡 n she back fires him😡😡 lovely...👏

n d best one was d Slap😡😡

which was enough 4 him to understand he crossed his limits though he has his own personal reasons😭 his parents😭 but still I don't think it's justified...
well looking forward to their next meeting..
Loved d way Aira handle herself but wen she was back completely broken😭😭
she has to accept d truth but denying at d same tym vry well written dear👏👏 she kepta denying d fact what she is n giving reasons to herself only... awww I loved it...👏
Love d way how kalpi handled her baby sister n her every dialogue well not her but u loved it👏😊
D best one👏👏👏

The world was cruel and the only way to handle the cruelty was to turn cruel yourself. Anger masks the pain, poison masks the sweetness.

Ive only one word for this exceptional.. 👏👍🏼
so at d end of part 3 both sisters met their strangers😳
for kalpi: her Stranger's touch she couldn't remove from her mind😳
for Aira: she met the one who said such harsh words to her that she never forget
Vry nyc👏👏
A different concept
I just loved this ss . ..plz update soon... n pm mee😊
Edited by sugandhii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update .. Did not expect this to be the first meeting of Sammy and Aira .. but it was worth it .. can't wait to see how the love will start to brew now !!
Looking forward to the next part :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update... bit emotional😭😭😭😭😭...may i know wat sammy was doing when both girls was struggling...his friend is at fault...but Aira is blammed😡
ps: i expected their first meet to be fun loaded one 😆...may be i ll get in future😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great story raz atrue face of our world poor aita 😭 and our sweet little angle rachu 😃 I love ragnaaa 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
m waiting waiting and waiting
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Edited by AmbroseFever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!!!!! OMG!!!!!OMG!!!! Raz you made my rotten day wonderful!!!!! Love you da!🤗

Ok firstly I love your banner!!! And secondly the words on them that she turned me into an animal that wanted nothing more than to devour her!! Sexy line!!! Who wrote this line!!! Awesome!!😳😳

And the title of the update - Invitation from above! First when I read that I was like OMG who is gonna die!!!??? 😆 But then once I finished reading I understood that it is indeed an Invitation from above!!!!😉

And then the thought for the updates 😆

Never open the door to a lesser evil, for other & greater ones invariably slink in after it.

How true Razy!! But yet to figure out in whose context is this thought for! The sisters or the brothers!!! 😉

Ufff how well you described what the sisters go through when they attend their clients!!! The disgusted feeling when the clients touch them shows how their souls are still pure!!!

Aww Kalpi could still feel Raghav's touch! ☺️ She misses him and he misses her!!

Aria was right Sammy did check her out when he saw her coming out of the lift! Men can do anything and if a woman is used by many men then 'she' is the s**t!!! Poor men!!! Urgh!! Hate men! But I am so loving Aira!!! She is not giving up in front of Sammy! Even though she was hurt with his words she stood for herself and Kalpi giving her strength was commendable!

Ewww Khush is with Aria to prove to his parents he is not gay???? Which means he is? But I thought he already had a girlfriend whom Sammy was defending!!!??😕

Guess Kalpi wants Aira to escape from this world! She wants someone to fall in love with Aira so atleast Aira can lead a happy life! Aww Love Kalpi as a sister!!

Hmmm Both sisters cant get the brothers out off their heads!! 😉

Hmmm Aira so excited for the shopping!!! Sisters shopping and having a good time! Love to see them smile!!!

Chapter 5:


Oh I am so excited!!! Butterflies in my tummy...Stolen encounters??? Really so Kalpi Raghav gonna meet? Yipppeee!!!

f all the world hated you and believed you wicked, while your own conscience approved of you and absolved you from guilt, you would not be without friends

Oh Raz such a beautiful line and how how very true!! If you think what you are doing is right then somewhere you are not wrong because God has created all of us with conscience! And if we do something wrong we are the first ones to know it! What may seem right to me may seem wrong to you and vice-versa.

So for me nothing is right or wrong! Who decides what is right or wrong? The ones who did were also human right? And if I can err couldn't they have been wrong? So the above line makes so much sense! And I guess Aria believes in it completely!

Sorry but you could have named Raghav gf as anybody but Pakhi! It kind of leaves a distaste!! yuck!!! Their bond seemed so superficial to me! Raghav is just attracted to her thats it! So he is straying here and there even though he will deny but I can vouch for it that his mind strayed when Pakhi was not with him.

Hell!!! His mind strayed when he was making love to her?!!!!! See this is exactly what I was talking about!!!Fake these men are fake!!! They can think about another woman when doing the deed with their so called Gf but if a woman is an escort then she is a bitch because she sleeps with many men and oenly accepts it! Or do they have a problem that she charges for it! For I am so sure if it had been free they'd have been waiting in a beeline!!!

And so he is guilty and is unable to say the three words to her?!! Hmmm

What is Sammy??? Kush's daddy? mummy? Nanny? Leave him alone man I guess he is jealous of Khush for not having Aria all to himself! This man seriously has some problems!!!

Okay so Maya his love interest gives him surprises. Sorry but are Maya and Pakhi sisters too? I mean both have come down to give surprise almost around the same time. So Maya is a model too or a businesswoman?

Okay shopping time!!!! And the trial room confusion!!!☺️

I am still blushing! What was Raghav thinking going and knocking any door! and he did not recognise Kalpi's voice as not to be Pakhi's? Hmmm ufff I am still blushing!!!! Gawd!!!!did you really have to stop there???😡

And Whats with Sammy??? I thought he hated her and see this is it!!! Men will be men!!! He is more frustrated with himself and not her! He is angry with himself that the girl whom he had checked out whom he felt attracted to at the first sight turned out to be an escort!!!

He then must have felt how wrong it was because it was a prostitute who had broken his family and yet here he was getting attracted to one!!!

Ahaa! Caught you Sammy!! 😉

And then like all good things come to an end your double bonanza update too had to end😭

Awww you dedicated it to me😳 Thank you! I so needed this! Your such a wonderful one raz!!!! My true soul sistaa!!!
I love you!!!! 👏 Love your writing skills mon'amie!

Tu est tres bien!!!! Je suis tres impressionne mademosielle!!
Sa belle!!! J'aime tu beaucoup ma cherie!!!

mmmuaaah muaaahhh dont worry they are flying kisses and not french kisses!!!😆

And now the million dollar question...
When will you update next????😃
Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heyyllooo dear..
wow.. double damaka update..
it was superbbb n too intrestngg one!!
both raghav n kalpi remembering their frst encounter and couldnt forget each other which was too good.. as raghav couldn't be w/o thinking abt kalpi even wen he made love with pakhi.. this shows he is too attracted with her n this went same with kalpi too!! and d mall scene was really superrr..
I guess both belle n stella r invited to same business meeting in which even raghav n sammy ll be there.. and their encounter in dat would vry intrestng.. and in shopping mall.. stella's excitement was really good to read n fate has made sammy n aira to meet again.. n both were having cat fyt with each other bt their eyes seemed to convey sumthng else.. and in both of their part u left d situatn in d middle nt fair ya..
I'm curious to know wat happens next.. wen dey all ll be meet in d same meeting.. waitng fr it eagerlyy..!!
Edited by vasishna - 10 years ago

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