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Beautiful beautiful beautiful update. So emotionally charged. It's sad that they had to face so much hardship. I hope that the journey ahead shows better times.

I was dying to read this. 😃 🤗 Such a lovely update, though painful. Aira finally met Sammy, but how! 😭 Wondering now how Raghav will know that Kalpi is an escort. One had a heart-break and maybe other's too is on way. Painful, but reality it is. Hats off to you for pulling off such a subject with such grace! 👏 It was wodnerful, and now please don't take such a long break? Its a request. 😃

Hi Razy!!!!!

Raz!!!finally you updated!! Hope you don't take as long for next update! What an emotional scene with Sammy and Aira!! The things he told her I can't help but feel he will understand her after! That scene was damn awesome! From elevator to the door way, Kush witnessing everything that was said to Aira just awesome!! Kalpi on the other hand have to remain strong mentally and emotionally just to support Aira! Not wanting to show her that she too also feel what Aira feels!! This is heart wrenching!! It's just sad to see how two girls have to struggle in life just to make it on their own! Love it!! Your story is amazing raz!! Update soon ok? And plz pm me when you update! Thanking you in advance!!

Welcome back Raz, I hope you feeling better now
Aria felt something when she saw Sammy. She was actually excited
Omg!!! Sammy saying all those horrible words to Aria was very emotional
He really hurt her... I like that she slap him ;)
Aria going home and breaking down was sad
Poor Kalpi she has to be strong for her sister and herself no matter how badly she too want to curl up
I hope their sufferings end soon and happy days come knocking on their door
Both sisters deserve to be happy... It's about time...
Beautiful update, wonderfully written

beautiful update.welcome back.plz pm me

Hi Raz! Back with a bang! I can see...What an awesome update 👏 Finally Aira and Sammy saw each other. His appreciation for her looks turning into distaste the moment he knew who she is. It would have taken her all her strength not to break down then and there. She slapped him when she couldn't take his insults anymore. He deserved it for judging her. How can he blame people like her for destroying relationships when men themselves come to her. At home she breaks down completely, the harsh reality of her life striking her. Kalpi was upset seeing her like that. Loved how she pacified Aira and put her to sleep. While Kalpi is still thinking about Raghav and his touch , Aira had to suffer Sammy's wrath. It's funny how fate had planned for their meeting two brothers! I think heartbreak is on the way for Kalpi too when Raghav comes to know of her.

I am loving this concept. Its is very intriguing. I want to see how you make them fall in love and all the social taboos.

Welcome back 😊😊 Hope you feeling better now 🤗 it must be emotional times for you 🤗

coming to UD ...its as good as always 😃😃 both Belle & Stella met their respective Mr.Strangers 😆 😆 now kalpi can piss Aira how she met Mr.Stranger 😆 😆 but in her case she had a "Angry meet " 😛 she disclosed everything in first meet 😛😛 ... & made poor Sammy angrily shocked 😛 ... Aira-Sammy first meet was more happening & blasting one comparatively to Raghav-Belle 😛😛 But Sammy indeed went too mean & harsh on Aira ... He indirectly held Aira responsible for everything ...He deserved the slap from Aira 😡😡 ...He has to realise the fact it was his friend Kush who had called her , she didn't came on her own will 😕😕 ...Kush deserves equal moral lecturing from Sammy ... poor girl felt bad for her 😭😭... Hope she is able to overcome this 😊& Sammy realizes what he has done

heyyllooo raaz..