Ragna ff :deewana ch15 pg 36

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi to everyone I am basically a reader but now I thought to write a story on rahna \ashna it will be a story of a weak lover ,a psycho brother and strong girl should I Conti. All types of ideas are welcomed .

Index:-
Introduction - pg 1
Part 1:page 2
Part2: Pg 4
Part 3 - pg 6
Part4 :pg 8
Part 5 : Pg 10
Part6 page 13
Part 7pg 16
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for ur comments this is a short introduction
Introduction
Kalpana is a 22year young and enthusiastic girl with lots of potential . She lives every moment of her life she is youngest in her family that's why is pampered most . She works in a construction company as marketing head . Her life was wonderful she had everything most lovable and supportive parents and also love of her life Raghav singhania but what happens when a psycho ,obsessed lover enter in her life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishiba

Thank u for ur comments this is a short introduction
Introduction
Kalpana is a 22year young and enthusiastic girl with lots of potential . She lives every moment of her life she is youngest in her family that's why is pampered most . She works in a construction company as marketing head . Her life was wonderful she had everything most lovable and supportive parents and also love of her life Raghav singhania but what happens when a psycho ,obsessed lover enter in her life.

Sounds interesting... continue soon 👍🏼
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Sounds interesting...continue...😳
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Hey guys sorry for updating so late so as we all know the characters are almost same as the show :
Kamala jadav:mother of kalpi
Prakash jadav:kalpi's brother
Aarti jadav :kalpi's bhabhi
Gauri singhania:raghav's mother
Reenu Mehta:raghav's bua
Sanjay singhania:raghav's elder brother
Part 1
Then sun was shining bright and with a refreshing mood kalpi woke up and looked out of her window thinking that today after 4days she is going to meet hi.kamla entered her room with aarti Ki thali and gave her aarti and called her downstairs for breakfast.Prakash and aarti were already on dining table .after 30min kalpi joined them
K:hello Bhai sap kaise hu aur aap kaise hai Bhabhi
Aa:with a fake smile said good come have breakfast
Pr:ya come kalpi my princess how r u feeling this morning
Aa is thinking Lu phir shuru hogaye yeh Bhai behen .
Kamala came and gave them breakfast. As the clock stricked at 9 o clock kalpi quickly goes of the table and get ready and says to kamala :aii main jaa rahi hu mujhe kaam ki lite bahut late hu raaha hai .
Ka :aacha beta dabba toh leti jaa
But kalpi didn't stop as she was getting late
Kalpi's pov:arrey yaar kalpi aaj toh tere khair nahi woh toh aaj tujhe maar he dengi char din ke baad mil rahe hai aur woh bhi late hogayi he must be waiting for so long .
She reached to a garden and searching for someone and then a man holds her through her arms and said I was waiting for u.
She turned and got relief to see raghav there
K:you scared the hell out of me raghav and sorry for coming late (she says by holding both her ears)
R:it's ok but next time I won't wait .i will find some other girl who is punctual
K:aacha dhoond ke toh dhekayu mere alava tumhe aur Kai jhel nahi sakta
R:(smiling)woh toh hai
They both hugged each other
Precap:kalpi is shopping in a mall and someone get into her way.
Sorry for grammatical errors and I am new at this so sorry if u don't find it much expressive.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear.. Wow RagNa is already a couple.. Cute😳 Kalpi's bhabhi is 😡🤢
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: appyK

Nice update dear.. Wow RagNa is already a couple.. Cute😳Kalpi's bhabhi is😡🤢

Continue soon..

thanks appy your words means alot to me 😊
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Originally posted by: sharanya0011

wow nice update..

continue soon

thanks shyrana ur words really boost me up try to update as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting but do a longer update. This is too short.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting.ragna already love each other.cntnu soon

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