Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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prishna_fan

@prishna_fan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Very nice update

Love the sweet and bubbly Rachana

So romi and Rachana are childhood friend how sweet ... Romi seems to be very attached to rani

RagNa is truly destinated to be together despite these circumstances

Happy their 1st meeting, and this call had to come god !!!

So exited for the next part ... Hope with full oh RagNa

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Nice update.rachu antics so cute:-)

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Very nice my dear hope they become one soon. Please update soon

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Roshna

@RoshnA1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Awesome update Vish... So they are connected with each other frm childhood.. Nice... Really loved it.. Continue soon

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: fairylover

Sorry Priya.. But I assure u that there is more to their meeting... It was just introduction and day dint end. I will try my best to give a good scene... I had to wrap it up there as I want to write a full fledged scene between them and that i can't do in such hurry. Hope u understand.

Yes Yes I understand now please update😆

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: shonali164
first m late for cment on part 4 😔 sowie
part 4 so touching update. Nyc to see rach hapy as well as painful past. Lv sis bro relation, n lv rach parents.

Part 5
finaly rach n rags meet n first step hd taken.
Lv rach anticts, to avoid granny's scold.
Yeah finaly its clear dat rani is none other dan rach. So excited for start of deir story.
Amazing update vishu

Sorry for the late reply Shona... N it's ok being late.. No need to apologize. Thanks for liking both parts..

I hope I will be able to write this romantic story as u know how unromantic I am.😉

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: appyK
Vish darling.. Fabulous update🤗
Loved Granny and Rach... Also the way Raghav is attracted to Rachana... Its just beautiful...
Wow.. Rach is Raghav's Rani..😃that's great..
Oh yeah and the poem was also beautiful..👏

Thank u so much dear.. I am glad u liked it.

N u liked the poem... Whippy!!!😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Vish fabulous update again. I love the way you introduced both old best friends' emotions. Their souls are linked somehow. I love the way you always describe Romi's feelings and reactions to Rachana's presence. So, Rachana finally got to know that she had a best friend in her childhood. 😃👏 Also I loved the part where Rachana is playing with kitty & Bruno,and is mischievous with Granny. It was touching the way you described selfless Granny.😃
I am loving it so much, and the best part I can't even attempt a guess at what maybe coming next! 😆😛 That's how good you are. 😃👏

n I loved the poem you wrote, it was fabulous. Please do not under-rate yourself. You are a good poet and an author. 😃👏

Thank u Charu...M speechless... So much praises in one comment... M on cloud 9 now. 😊 i can't thank u enough for motivating me as this writing is the only thing which makes me happy. 😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
I know, you have to delay it to proceed with the story or it will end soon. No, you are not horrible in writing poems. You are quite good. Just that you don't know it 😉

Thank u dear... M still trying to improve. 😊