Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec) - Page 19

first m late for cment on part 4 😔 sowie
part 4 so touching update. Nyc to see rach hapy as well as painful past. Lv sis bro relation, n lv rach parents.

Part 5
finaly rach n rags meet n first step hd taken.
Lv rach anticts, to avoid granny's scold.
Yeah finaly its clear dat rani is none other dan rach. So excited for start of deir story.
Amazing update vishu

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Hey, I commented before I got your pm. 😉 Rachna is so naughty. Poor granny , she can't say anything as she loves Rach a lot. Rachna playing with kitten was cute. Romi wondering where the photo is. He doesn't remember keeping in the diary. Rach at the same time not recognised her childhood friend. Nice poem, explaining her thoughts well. Romi in the rehab. Obviously they are going to spend more time with each other. He will know she's the tattoo girl. Will they recognise each other? Hope Maya doesn't know about all this or else John will come to know of Romi's feelings towards his target.

Vish darling.. Fabulous update🤗

Vish fabulous update again. I love the way you introduced both old best friends' emotions. Their souls are linked somehow. I love the way you always describe Romi's feelings and reactions to Rachana's presence. So, Rachana finally got to know that she had a best friend in her childhood. 😃👏 Also I loved the part where Rachana is playing with kitty & Bruno,and is mischievous with Granny. It was touching the way you described selfless Granny.😃

Originally posted by: fairylover

Kiara.. 🤗

Glad u got pm this time.

Romi was so lost in Rach's diary that he doesn't remember where he kept the photo and Rach was too small to remember her friend. Yep they are going to spend more time together as they both need each other to fulfill their aim. Rachana's tattoo is on back.. so Romi can't see it so easily.😆

Recognizing each other?? Let's see... But if they will recognize each other so soon than how will my story progress?? Romi is a player re.. Maya n john are out of focus as of now.

M glad u liked the poem as i know how horrible I am at it. 😊

I know, you have to delay it to proceed with the story or it will end soon. No, you are not horrible in writing poems. You are quite good. Just that you don't know it 😉

Raghav and Rachana finally meet
I like that Raghav can't stop thinking about Rachu
Wonderful update

Good update. Waiting for Toni to find out she is his girl. Update soon

Superb update

It just one week but I'm feeling after a long time I'm reading ur ff. nice update heart touching poem highlight deep bonding.

nice update so its a childhood connection...
waiting to know what will happen next