Ragna SS : There are no coincidences- Epilogue- Pg 125 13/2 - Page 90

Originally posted by: mariee

2 or 3 matlab ??😕

U didnt expect kamla to be aise ??

hehehe...i knew it ..i knew it ...u see i love to do unpredictable things ...i bet , i wud take the story aise , kisine socha bhi nahi hoga ...& thats what shud happen .Story predictable ho & readers already know whats gonna happen ...then whats the fun ??😉😉

ur request ka answer... i hope u have got it on page 125

& last but not the least ...main abhi kuch aise kehne wali hu ..jo maine aur kisi se nahi kaha

I LOVE & ADMIRE KAMLA BAI !!😆😆

~ The negation of the abv statement 😉😉

MARUSHKAA

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Marsh pg 118 Ka reply 😭

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

hiii MARSH... ur most late commenter is here to give her feedback for coincidental couple.😆 hope this time i have right to get myself happy for unresing my all comments...finally 😆...ab toh haan keh do ki mujhe haqq haiii...mujhe haq haiii (khush hone ka...lol marsh...coincidentally i said the lyrical song lines from vivah😆)

coming to update...
part 17 a : so sweet of malhar. she is finally back in her all time happy mode and advising, guiding as cupid for lover boy who don't know the meaning of saying "hit the iron when its hot "😆
raghav saying "malhar apology done, kalpi realizing love ending" 😆 lol marsh,, still he is thinking like a business man like which project has accomplished and which project has still in amidst to get its work done.🤣

loved caring raghav for kalpi who was rubbing her back and again "she pushed him away". poor raghav pissing like wheat in btw pull and push...🤣 pulling from raghav side and pushing from kalpi side🤣.
inn dono ka kuch nai ho sakta...😆 ...haiyiii😲...ho sakta hai when our marushkaa is here 😉




part 17 b : so now kalpi is not uncomfortable with raghav or keeping herself close to him. for the first time she came close to him of her own without any fighting with her mind and fear of loosing her close one. this time she did not pushed raghav away from her instead she came closer and made herself comfortable in his embrace. this time her mind didn't overtake her heart but this time she took a small decision from her heart to stay near to raghav.
kalpi was behaving like a child in his arms keeping her ear on raghav's heart and listening its heartbeat like she used to to with her baba. and no doubts she found her peace in that very moment after long gap of time of her baba and dada's demise.

may be this single night had done that miracle that she shared her most painful moment with raghav crossing her barriers and raghav like a caring husband providing her all balmy caressing.

malhar and sammy part was as usual superb.



now lets talk about ur writing changes...😆...r u talking about presenting deeply described emotions of kalpi and her state of mind with raghav? if thats so...then it was superbly expressed and well presented that i could feel myself connected with this new kalpi. no matter what, u have a creative mind and it always work.
and about ur question of incorporating these changes in ur other story...i know i m super duper late and u have taken ur decision...but phir b 😆 i would like to say YES😆

Originally posted by: priya_remix

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Tee hee!!

Unres

Awwwiiieee!!!!

What an epilogue!!! How sweet that Malhar could get a father and mother in Raghav n Kalpana!

And I loved it that she started behaving like a normal kid now!!!! Such a sweet epilogue just as sweet as my Chakuli!!!!

Ha Ha Ha

Loved it!

But I am gonna miss it tooo!!!!😭

Chal all the best for your assignments dear!!!