Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07 - Page 43

Lovely updates. Missed them due to work. Had been waiting for the updates . I wish you had made Kalpi more' 'strong-willed '! I am not liking her being made into 'clay' in Raghav's hands . She should show Raghav that she can beat him at his own game.

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Oh my charu!! What an amazing update! I so love this teasing raghav! Reminds me of myself LOL.. When she said he was good looking that was to funny (icing on the cake) 😉 hmmm love his VIP lounge!! Kalpi did think she was there becasue Rags wanted her all to himself LOL and she told him she didn't think that 😆 the girl knows what she wants from him, what she craves for and still she tries to deny it!! She knows she wants him but still shes angry with herself and also at Rags!!
I loved that way he measured her! I love the measuring tape 😉 the way he used it 😉 DAMN!! He's verse in measuring Kalpi 😉 perfect measuring! And I loved the way he was cracking up when the numbers were being called out! That was awesome!!
It was so sweet of him and his mom to send the idol for her!! His actions was different! The kiss on the cheek! I'm sure she wasn't expecting him to kiss her in the cheek, LOL knowing him 😉 and his statement used after was so genuine, the way he said it "his good luck kiss" too too sweet!
Amazing update charu! Hats off to you for your originalty Nd creativity!! Loved this update 👏 I salute you!!

Originally posted by: premap

Lovely updates. Missed them due to work. Had been waiting for the updates . I wish you had made Kalpi more' 'strong-willed '! I am not liking her being made into 'clay' in Raghav's hands . She should show Raghav that she can beat him at his own game.

NOTE: -

You guys have been my strength, my motivation, my reason to keep going, to make myself happy, to do what I enjoy doing, which is writing. It was you all who made me feel loved, who also helped me in feeling love, in living it in this way, to re-kindle what isn't in me anymore, or maybe is stored somewhere deep down. But lately I have begun to feel that I am unable to do justice with all of yours love and expectations. Maybe I am unable to portray what I want to rightly; or maybe I don't know anymore which is the right balance or right proportion which will be for the betterment of this Ff, peace and happiness of all. Is it Ragna moments, is it story, or if at all I am able to show why certain characters are doing what they are doing. Ragna is separated in most of my FFs, so it is sad you people don't get what you want; and if I show their reunion too early it would simply ruin everything. I had never done so intentionally, it just happened. The only FF where I can show some normal Ragna moments is "Celebration of Fates" and maybe in that too I am unable to explain my viewpoint clearly, to show how and why Kalpana and Raghav are this way; what they feel, amidst maybe other more questions and doubts. I am just tired of thinking now and my attempts. So I have decided to go on an indefinite short break. It would be a short one and I will not sit idle. I will try to work on storyline and on updates side by side. Maybe it would give me continuity and space to work out things in a better way, or without pressure at least. I wrote because it made me happy, when I see you all happy I be happy and content. But then I must owe up to many responsibilities also. I know maybe I would still work out the storyline as I had originally intended them to be. Maybe nothing would change because somewhere wider outlines were always planned, I may not be able to do some changes to them. But still, I don't know I need this break. I promise I will return soon. I miss it already, so the break maybe as short as two days, or a week; or maybe longer! I don't know, it depends on how I am satisfied with myself. I will be giving at least one update of "The Marriage Story", and I will continue writing its parts as soon this FF shall also be uploaded on FB and I need to keep my bank of updates ready. But I may not upload them so soon.

I do not promise but maybe "The Glass Wall" too may get update; though not sure of it. It was a shorter FF and so I don't worry about it much. I am sorry if I hurt someone. But I don't want to hurt myself and you all more by compromising on quality, when I don't feel right at all.

P.S.: You may get surprise updates in-between, as this is the only thing I know to keep myself sane. I know I will miss it.One things more, I will reply to the comments surely, those which I haven't replied to yet and those which will come later on. As I said I'll continue working on FFs so hope you all don't be too disheartened; and that I am not sure of my break-it may be very short, or it maybe longer.

Promise to be back soon, with lots of love.

Charu

P.S.: I request you to kindly keep giving me suggestions of what you like and what not, or simply what you'd like to see. I don't promise, but keeping in the boundaries of planned story-line, I will try to inculcate and use them. 😃

Hi Charu, I'm sooo sorry for commenting so late but I can't help it with me want to sleep all the time with that stupid meds that I'm taking 😕 enough of my ranting now coming to the update
It was outstanding, it shows RagNa fun side lol
Both do things or I should say Kalpi without realizing what she just said ;)
I love that she can't stop thinking about Raghav and who can blame her after that sizzling romantic dance that stuck in her head. It's good that Kalpi decided to hang out with her BFF before things get more crazy. She get to be loose for a little
OMG!!! Raghav knows exactly how to push Kalpi buttons like calling her to his office for customs fittings, that was the perfect excuse ;)
Kalpi giving Rammy the most brilliant idea for their product and how to market it was fabulous
I love how she blurted out that Raghav is famous and good looking lol that really fly to Raghav head with him smiling away and smirking at Kalpi
Wow! Love their cozy moment in this entertainment room, it was hot and the best part is Raghav taking Kalpi measurements my God... He is good lol
Aww I love how Raghav came and wish Kalpi for her first day at shoot and also his special way of greeting her. Kalpi being in shock was awesome lol
Superb finish to the chapter. U wrote so beautifully, every detail was well expresses
Oh no how can I forget Kalpi jealous, I love that part the most. For someone who claim to dislike Raghav is surely jealous thinking he touch other girls so intimately;)

Ok so I just read your note and I understand your pov
But for me their is nothing lacking in your writing
All your stories are amazing and the plot is going accordingly
I enjoy reading all your work
I hope you don't take a long break

yes charu ... u shud say a sorry !! coz u have hurt me a lot. How cud u even think u arent doin justice.to fates. Atleast for me fates is my fav ff amongst the 3.

Your all ff are going smoothly and u are doing full justice to your ff I am really enjoying reading your ff.you can go according to your flow

wonderful update charu dear😳😳😳

Wonderful update