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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Nice emotions containing update dear,

you described raghav's inner turmoil ,his fear,his happiness for a moment..in a proper manner..he did not want to suffer again from loosing people whom he love..he feared from it..nd on the other hand he did not want to be the reason of kalpi nd gauri's sepration or any kind of distance btw them...he did not want to let kalpi suffer from any pain just coz of him..

nd in the office kalpi is also shocked to saw sudden change of her cabin..

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Heyyylooo dear..

It was too good n superrr one!

At d first raghav's POV was really good n intrestng bt then it led him to sadness n his mind-heart convo was nyc n m happy dat he made up his mind to talk to her n clear d MU..

So d jealousyness in him s nt reduced yet as he changed kalpi's cabin more near to him.. dats very good to read..

Waiting to read more jealousy scenes lyk dis lol..

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Ohh Raghav now trying to avoid her! His feelings were beautifully described! And Kalpi poor thing has all come to office to face Raghav again?? !!! Poor Raghav!!!

Hmm now how will he steal glances of his Kalpi and will Kalpi too miss him looking at her. Oh no! Misunderstandings again!!! When will this end?? Cant see my Raghav suffering any more. Hope Kamla informs Kalpi that Raghav had come to apologise and Kalpi gets to know soon that he is not the culprit as she thinks!!!

Very nicely written arpi! Now update soon!!!😊

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Res;)

unres pls😆😉

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: fairylover
Awesome update... Loved it. Though short but u justified the kiss and now I understand the fear in Raghav due to which he wanted to claim his right for Kalpi,.. His childhood was troubled... he was scared of losing her. N now he realized that it was his mistake.. He feels Kalpi loves her but somewhere her closeness with Prem is affecting him. He is ready to let her go for her sake. Little he knows that same feelings are dwelling in Kalpi's heart.
I loved Gauri here. She understood Raghav so well... unlike typical moms she dint bother him with questions but gave him the much needed space...

I am waiting for the sweet confession... u r always awesome in that part. Please give an awesome confession like the way u did with Aryan n Kalpi.

accha khaasa reply type kiya tha and my bro closed the browser😡

anyway thanks for liking it... i had less time so just typed this much ..

about gauri .. i wanted her to be a nice mom in ema but cvs ruined everything😡

now atleast i want to make her a nice momma.. also kammo..

aww .. glad u like my confession scenes.. so sweet of u to remember KaYan confession... will try my best to give a nice confession scene.. 😃

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: niru04
Nice update

thank u dear😊

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: abxetz
Hair appy I am a great fan of urs or ap ki sari ff bhi padliya mainai 😛 my favourite one is ragna ashna love

this is my expression on reading your comment

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reading that fan word is making me go on cloud 9😳

love ws my first ff and i'm glad u liked it😃

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Awesome update when these two will confess really waiting

thanks a lot dear for liking it..

some more time for confession as some emotions and things need to be sorted out😛

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: lolor
awesome update...

thanks a lot dear..😊

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: sunyy
Awesome update. So rags is trying to distance kalpi from himself. Hmmm interesting can't wait to see how well that works out. Continue soon

Glad u liked it sunyy.. 😃

surely will continue soon

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