RagNa(AshNa)FF:That's called revenge. link to thread 2 added - Page 63

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Nice emotions containing update dear,

you described raghav's inner turmoil ,his fear,his happiness for a moment..in a proper manner..he did not want to suffer again from loosing people whom he love..he feared from it..nd on the other hand he did not want to be the reason of kalpi nd gauri's sepration or any kind of distance btw them...he did not want to let kalpi suffer from any pain just coz of him..
nd in the office kalpi is also shocked to saw sudden change of her cabin..


Thanks a lot ritu... Glad u liked it...😃
Raghav has started caring for kalpi a lot.. I'm happy that u liked tge emotions etc.😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

Heyyylooo dear..

It was too good n superrr one!
At d first raghav's POV was really good n intrestng bt then it led him to sadness n his mind-heart convo was nyc n m happy dat he made up his mind to talk to her n clear d MU..
So d jealousyness in him s nt reduced yet as he changed kalpi's cabin more near to him.. dats very good to read..
Waiting to read more jealousy scenes lyk dis lol..


Thanks a lot vaishu(can i call u dat??)
Glad u liked it... His jealousy would keep increasing with his love.. And idk whether u read it wrong or i did.. Raghav has changed kalpi's cabin and now its away from his as he wants to keep distance from her due to his fears...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Ohh Raghav now trying to avoid her! His feelings were beautifully described! And Kalpi poor thing has all come to office to face Raghav again?? !!! Poor Raghav!!!

Hmm now how will he steal glances of his Kalpi and will Kalpi too miss him looking at her. Oh no! Misunderstandings again!!! When will this end?? Cant see my Raghav suffering any more. Hope Kamla informs Kalpi that Raghav had come to apologise and Kalpi gets to know soon that he is not the culprit as she thinks!!!

Very nicely written arpi! Now update soon!!!😊


Thanks a lot priya.. Glad u liked Raghav's emotions' description😃 there'll just be one mu till the end about Raghav being villain in kalpi's life others will get clear soon..
Raghav's suffering is gonna end soon..😉
About kamla .. Sorry i didn't make that part clear.. Kammo-kalpi convo in next part...

My cousins are at home plus diwali and all so less chances of update but will surely try to give one soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks a lot dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesoem update hai appy dear🤗🤗
so emotional hai dear😭😭
loved it 😊
im waiting for my ragna confession .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Firstly srry for late cmmnt...read last 3 parts ...superb updates
lik sammy & gauri's convo
Loved how raghav said 'ours' when Kalpi asked whose kids lol...n kalpi blushed
Omg raghav in jealously kissed her...even if it is forced one loved Ragna first kiss yaar😳
Kalpi fighting her inner turmoil n feeling guilty for falling in love wit enemy...u beautifully expressed kalpi's emotions
loved u showed raghav's inner turmoil ...his pain of being alone frm childhood n his fear of loosing kalpi if he expressed his feelings ...u justified his urge to kiss n claim his right on her
Gauri is lovely here she understood her son n gav him space
awww he put marigold in front of bappa idol...but he changed Kalpi 's office to distance himself from her...dekte hai kab tak avoid karta hai raghav kalpi ko😉
M loving dis raghav's jealousy track n also want ragna moment before party n a full ragnalicious update in party n if possible shw jealous kalpi too it will b fun😉😃...I knw m greedy n kuch jyaada demand hogaya par kya kare missing ragna badly
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If i'm gonna get such long comments then i'd love them to be late😆 Glad u loved the first kiss.. It was not only RagNa's but for me too it was first time I wrote such scene..
Feels great to know u liked emotions too..😃
RagNa moment before party... Hmm..🤔
Done
Yes dear.. Jealous kalpi too is on the way...
Demands toh bante hai dear.. This is only way we get RagNa now😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

awesoem update hai appy dear🤗🤗

so emotional hai dear😭😭
loved it 😊
im waiting for my ragna confession .


Thanks a lot dear.. Glad u loved it😃
Thode aur updates and then RagNa confession.. Bechaaron ko jara apne emotions toh sort out karlene de..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK


Thanks a lot vaishu(can i call u dat??)
Glad u liked it... His jealousy would keep increasing with his love.. And idk whether u read it wrong or i did.. Raghav has changed kalpi's cabin and now its away from his as he wants to keep distance from her due to his fears...😊


Yeahhh u call me vaishu..😃
And yeah thnx fr correcting me as I thought kalpi's cabin was more near to his cabin..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Raghav POV was amazing
I like how he got all happy thinking about his feelings for Kalpi and he found love
But then it turned all gloomy which I can understand. It's hard for him not to fear and who can blame him after everything he been through...
Gauri understand Raghav unspoken words was awesome. They starting to bond all over again and I love it. Raghav deciding to set things right and talk to Kalpi is nice but then again I want him to take a chance and talk to Kalpi about his budding feelings.
Superb update, I love it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Raghav POV was amazing
I like how he got all happy thinking about his feelings for Kalpi and he found love
But then it turned all gloomy which I can understand. It's hard for him not to fear and who can blame him after everything he been through...
Gauri understand Raghav unspoken words was awesome. They starting to bond all over again and I love it. Raghav deciding to set things right and talk to Kalpi is nice but then again I want him to take a chance and talk to Kalpi about his budding feelings.
Superb update, I love it


thanks a lot natasha.. glad u loved it..😃
Raghav will talk about his feelings but right now he is drowning in his fear to lose her ... so he needs a push for confession.. that push will be soon and then the confession😉

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