RagNa(AshNa)FF:That's called revenge. link to thread 2 added - Page 104

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Resss!
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Heyylioo dear...
Though there is no ragna.. update became intrestng with the revenge part.. with all the planning, tymng n all.. the revenge part is gonna end soon.. and nw suddenly wat happened to raghav dat he strtd ignorng her.. 😕 cuz of dat prem scene kya 😛 and I wanna knw who ll confess frst n hw.. ,,😳😉


Thanks a lot vaishu.. glad u felt the update was interesting😃
Answer to ur question in next update😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: WonderQueen

The perfect planning... U said u dnt knw about business n laws but I felt the planning was flawless and u dint left a single loophole.. They are soon going to destroy Kapoors. Ho gai taiyar RagNaarmy.😆

I always love Kalpi and Gauri's bonding in this FF. I like the way they talk to each other and share their problems... Gauri's advise was correct.. They need to talk. I hope he confesses soon.


Lol RagNa army😆
was writing revenge plan with reader's pov(as I'm majorly one) .. and you think its flawless matlab meri mehnat rang laayi😃
Confesses se yaad aaya.. thank god u came back coz I had almost starting to think that you won't be there to read the confession scene which thanks to your reminder of making it as good as KaYan confession turned out to be nice.. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by appyK

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Awesome update oh so the team is ready for revenge
Hope the two stay together n no misunderstanding between them
Update soon

Thanks a lot dear.. Glad u liked the update..
Its gonna end soon so no misunderstandings or extra drama😉


really 😭 wish it would continue some more more
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiaraah

Awesome! Arpi, nobody will believe that you are a med student. You are one totally smart business woman. Revenge plan is full on. But why is Raghav ignoring Kalpi? Because he saw her with Prem? Or is he trying to put distance between them to protect her now that he's planning revenge ?

Loved the bonding between Kalpi and Gauri. There will be no question of mom in law and daughter in law not getting along 😆


No dear! I haven't ditched 'my Raghav'. He will remain my favourite, no matter how many other Raghavs or Prem will come ...


This time you have your answer just beside your question..😉
Mom in law and Daughter in law milke Raghav ke against ho jaayenge.. Mr.Singhaania is gonna have hell lot of tough time after marriage😉😆

Oh hoo... 'YOUR raghav' would certainly be happy on reading this😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

coming soon😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Originally posted by appyK

Originally posted by sweet1308

Awesome update oh so the team is ready for revenge
Hope the two stay together n no misunderstanding between them
Update soon

Thanks a lot dear.. Glad u liked the update..
Its gonna end soon so no misunderstandings or extra drama😉


really 😭 wish it would continue some more more


I too kind off wished so but dear it had already surpassed its predicted length and there's no point in dragging it to the end when readers would stop reading it ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Compensating for the previous No RagNa update.. As I said earlier.. Its looong... And with many typo mistakes.. Sorry for not proof reading.. No time..

Please point out if there's any mistake other than typo..

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"What happened Nitin dada?? why did you ask me to come urgently??", Kalpi asked while trying to catch her breath.. Minutes ago she was almost asleep as Raghav's thoughts had finally left her mind but just a moment later her phone rang.. Nitin (Raghav's driver) called her up asking her to reach Singhaania mansion as soon as possible..

It was almost 12 am which meant no transport but she couldn't care about that as Nitin's panicky voice made her worry about Raghav and she immediately rushed out of her house..

"Ma'am.. actually .. Raghav sir.."... "Speak fast dada.. what happened to him??", Kalpi ushered but before Nitin could say anything a painful cry came from Raghav's room.. Without wasting another moment she rushed past Nitin and ran to Raghav's room..

Raghav was lying on his bed moaning in pain while the back of his shirt had prominent stains of blood..

Tears threatened to spill out of Kalpi's eyes on seeing his state.. she immediately went near him.. Nitin too had followed her," I came back to keep the car keys before leaving and Raghav sir was sitting near the bar drinking .. While getting down the bar-stool he slipped and hurt his back.. I tried calling Gauri ma'am but her phone was unreachable and the only other no. in the phone diary was yours..", he explained narrating everything in a sjngle breath...

Kalpi nodded and moved towards Raghav," Bring the medicine box.. its in that drawer..", Kalpi instructed Nitin while helping Raghav get up... Nitin immediately follwed her instructions and handed over the box..While Kalpi was busy removing stuff out of the box Nitin said in a low yeg audible voice," Ma'am.. umm.. can I leave??.. its very late and my father is unwell and alone at home..", too occupied in finding the meds Kalpi just nodded..

After removing cotton and other dressing material from the box she placed them on the side table and made half-conscious Raghav sit up properly ... She was holding his shoulder and made him sit properly while he continued murmuring something and moaning in pain simultaneously..

Before discharging Raghav, the doctor had instructed that if incase he hurts himself at the place of injury and it starts bleeding then which cream should be applied and what should be done.. Kalpi went to the bathroom and got a mug of hot water..

Hesitating for a moment she started unbuttoning Raghav's shirt with her eyes tightly shut.. the shirt was perfectly fitting so she had no option of cleaning the wound by just lifting it up.. After Kalpi was doneshe moved to get the cotton to clean the wound and Raghav again fell back on the bed with his back facing Kalpi..

Luckily the bleeding had stopped.. using the cotton and hot water she cleaned the blood and applied the cream.. while doing so Raghav winced in pain.. bending over his back Kalpi blew cool air on his wound while applying the cream..

Now she had to tie the cotton bandage around his waist.. by now Raghav was feeling better as his pain filled moans had stopped but his murmuring still went on.. Kalpi tried to make him get up but his weight was making it almost impossible for her to do so.. Finally she sprinkled some water on his face ..

It didn't really help but also wasn't useless as Raghav was still not in his senses fully but he atleast opened his eyes and looked at Kalpi who was trying to make him get up.. Finally Raghav got up ... He was facing Kalpi and just when she leaned over to place the cotton in position while looking at his back he hugged her shocking her to no end ..

"Don't go.. don't go..", he kept murmuring in faint voice..
One shock wasn't enough that he gave her another one when she felt something wet on her shoulder.. Gently pulling away from the hug Kalpi held Raghav's cheek, her fingers caressing his light stubble which were little wet by the tears which mirrored hers..

"Ra.. raghav..", with her voice reaching his ears Raghav lifted his head to look at her eyes which were shining due to the water that surfaced them.. "What happened??", Kalpi asked in tone which was as good as a whisper.. "You.. you.. love prem??", his voice still showing the effect of alchohol.. Kalpi frowned on his question but the genuinity in them softened her expression and she nodded in a no..

"Then why are you so close to him??.. You always are laughing with him.. you.. you're so comfortable with him.. Aa..and with me.. You just fight.. O.. or.. Just talk about work..", with each complaint the distance between them decreased both between them and between their hearts..
Realisation slowly dawned her as she remebered how Raghav saw her with Prem in the evening and then his ignorance was all that she got and even earlier.. the day they kissed she was talking on phone with Prem..
"Tell me.. Why do you do that??", Raghav asked while holding her hand.. As much as Kalpi wanted to tell him what she felt, she had no guts to voice it.. One, that the next day he probably won't remember even a word of this conversation and second, that though she was aware of her feeling she had made a choice which gave her no alternative than to leave him at the end...

"I want to know.. because I..", Raghav was about to complete his sentence but Kalpi placed her hand on his mouth.. She somewhere knew what his unsaid words were but she couldn't dare to hear them.. Wiping away his tears she placed a soft kiss on his cheek thus effectively silencing him while his hands slowly moved down her arms thus freeing them so that she could proceed to complete the dressing

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After disposing off the used cotton and placing the medicine box in its place Kalpi went back to pick up her cell phone from the small table besides Raghav's bed when she felt a strong hold on her wrist.. "Don't go..", his voice clear and pleading..

Smiling a little Kalpi looked at him.. "I need to go..", she said while trying to loosen his gentle yet tight hold.. He nodded in denial and gestured her to look at the clock which showed 1 am... "I came walking at 12..", she said on understanding his silent question that its so late and she won't get any mode of transport..

"Please..", he said and as everytime this time too she agreed.. Raghav made her sit and placed his head on her lap then reaching out for her hands he held one of them while the other moved in his hairs and for once in a very long time both of them drifted off to sleep with no worries and fully content on being complete..

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Raghav squinched a bit trying to adjust to the room's light.. the sudden brightness added to the throbbing pain in his head wasn't helping much but the distraction in all of this was the continuosly warm air along with some weight on his chest..


Finally adjusting to the room lights he woke up to see what he doubted whether was dream or reality.. Raghav raised his head to look at Kalpi who was sleeping in a very uncomfortable position .. Raghav's head was on her lap while her head rested on his chest.. The light coming from the window was disturbing her too as Kalpi moved a bit..


Raghav got up carefully so as to not wake Kalpi up and moved the curtain bringing a small smile on Kalpi's face.. with a smile lingering on his face too he went near her.. Bending down he carefully made Kalpi sleep comfortably and then covered her properly with a quilt..


Raghav walked over to his wardrobe and removed a white shirt somewhat similar to what he wore yesterday and the events flashed in front of his eyes and his hand moved to touch his right cheek trying to feel the same warmth like yesterday night.. he was wearing his shirt when Kalpi's phone rang .. He immediately walked over to the side table to pick up but before that Kalpi got up and picked up her phone..


"Ha.. hi dada.. You came back.. when?? .. I mean wow... I'll reach home in some time..", Kalpi ended the call and looked at Raghav..

"I'll drop you..", he said before making his way out ..After closing the door on exiting the room Raghav looked back and thought," You showed me that you do have feelings for me .. now I'll help you name them.."


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"Explain..", Pakya said ever so sternly looking at Kalpi who stood near the door watching her brother standing near the couch looking at her for answers probably for what he saw ..

Flashback


Kalpi and Raghav reached and Kalpi exited the car.. She was just walking inside her building when Raghav held her hand..


"Kalpi..", she tried hard not to look back but then finally turned to look at him.. "Thanks for being their yesterday.. ", he pulled her little ,"And for caring for me.", he pulled a little more close..." and for the preparations you had done for the party..", he again pulled her a little.. "And for what you did at the madir.. ", Kalpi looked at him in surprise..


"Mom had messaged me when I was waiting in the car..", Kalpi was about to give some explanation but Raghav stopped her..


"For staying with me yesterday you can say that you dd it out of duty.. for preparations you did to make my b'day special you can say that you did it for your best friend paakhi but what about that thing you did at mandir.. why did you burn your hand for me..".. and to Kalpi's good cum bad luck she heard Pakya who stood at a distance from the gate call out to her..


And now was a question answer session and the only problem with it was there were too many questions and very few or rather no answers...


"Kalpi..", Pakya snapped her out of her thoughts.. "I am asking you something..".. Kalpi gulped on sensing the seriousness in her brother's voice.. Pakya had always been a protective caring brother but never had he shown his 'hitler'ish side..


"Dada I can explain..", Kalpi finaaly managed to speak..


"I'm waiting", Pakya said crossing his arms in front of his chest..


She did say that she can explain but what will she explain?? What can she say?? that Raghav probably likes her?? That she is in love with that person whom they jave been planning to destroy??


"Dada..", Kalpi started and Pakya focused on her .. Now tgere was no running away Kalpi knew that today she would have to gell Pakya.. but not everything..


"Actually.. Aatya.. I mean.. Gauri ma.. she is Gauri Singhaania..", and with thos she told Pakya everything with some clever editing of course.. She explained how Raghav and Gauri met and what all happened after that.. how she helped Raghav in planning revenge against Sahil and as she needed a reason for returning back home with Raghav she also told Pakya about how Raghav got injured while trying to protect her..


The least she expected was some softened expression but there was no change in Pakya's demeanor.. "And in the morning I had to go there to Gauri ma's house as she wanted to meet me..", she lied but not successfully.. Before the questionnaire could continue Pakya got a call from his office and he had to leave in some time..


He was walking to his room and Kalpi sighed but he came back and stood before Kalpi again.. Placing his hand on her head he said," Kalpi .. I never forced anything on you but can you do one thing for your dada?? ... Hmmm...??", Kalpi nodded in agreement and Pakya said," Stay away from Raghav... I don't want to see him anywhere near you.. I've already lost baba and I don't want to lose you.. Promise me you'll stay away from him??", Kalpi's heart sank with Pakya words..


Promise to stay away from Raghav?? When she wanted to... she couldn't and now when she can .. she didn't want it to happen but there was no way out.. "Kalpi.. Promise??", Pakya asked moving his palm forward.. "Just a few days Dada.. till we put Mr.Kapoor in jail.. Please..", Kalpi said trying very hard to not show her feelings to her brother.. Pakya nodded and left..


Entering his room he walked over to his study table and opened the drawer.. it had the abacus and pen that Raghav had given to little Kalpi.. Kalpi jad insisted those belongings to stay with Pakya as she didn't want any emotion except hatred for Raghav..


Kalpi looked at her brother standing with the pen remembering that day..


Flashback


Kamla was as usual at the Kapoor's house while Kalpi and Pakya were at home... It was holiday... Pakya was done with his studies and so decided to check on his little sister.. A 10-year old Kalpi was staring at a pen in her hand..

"Arey Kalpi why are you staring at that pen??,Pakya asked as he sat beside her...

Kalpi-"Dada my new friend gave me this pen... I wasn't getting a maths problem and he helped me solve it... When I solved the next one he gave me this as reward for solving it.."
Pakya-"let me also know about this new friend of yours..what's his name??"
Kalpi- Raghav ,he is Sahil seth's adopted son.. he only had given me that abacus..
That name made Pakya's blood boil... He took the pen and getting up he threw the pen towards the wall..."DADA",Kalpi yelled as she too got up... "Tomorrow onwards you're not going at Kapoors house and stay away from that Raghav..",Pakya shouted at her and went to the terrace... Not understanding the reason behind her brother's sudden outburst she followed him...


Pakya was sitting on the terrace floor with his knees folded in support for his hands and head placed in between...Kalpi walked towards him and knelt down on her knees ... lifting her brother's head she asked,"What happened dada?? Please dada tell me.. please dada..."..Thinking that she deserves to know the truth Pakya took her hand and they went back home...

"This is the reason",Pakya said while showing a brown envelope to Kalpi... That was a xerox of some document ."This piece of paper is the reason why our baba died Kalpu... Your friend Raghav said things which made baba leave us forever...If Raghav wouldn't have lied then baba would've been alive..",Pakya said as he cried badly...

With time Kalpi slowly understood what her family was going through because of Raghav's lie and later she and pakya decided that they would take revenge... from Sahil Kapoor as he had called Vitthal at the place that day thus trapping him in this murder ( Vithal had said that during court proceedings so Pakya knew) and Raghav for falsely accusing Vitthal..

And now with all these Kalpi was torn between her once-upon-a-time goal and the feeling called love.. As a child she had agreed to what her brother ordered but now she had no idea what she should do...

Pakya looked back at Kalpi who was now walking to her room.. Picking up his father's photo frame he said," Baba I just hope Kalpi is not hiding anything from me.. I don't want to force her or see her hurt but I can't even forgive 'him'..".. Pakya somewhere knew that his sister was getting in a very entangled web of emotions but he could not help her as a brother because of his duty as a son..

Precap: "I have a deal for you.."

P.S Two more to go and looks like I'm gonna get my first second thread!!!! yipppeee!!!!!!

Love you guys!!!!
Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sweet1308

Originally posted by appyK

Originally posted by sweet1308

Awesome update oh so the team is ready for revenge
Hope the two stay together n no misunderstanding between them
Update soon

Thanks a lot dear.. Glad u liked the update..
Its gonna end soon so no misunderstandings or extra drama😉


really 😭 wish it would continue some more more

I too kind off wished so but dear it had already surpassed its predicted length and there's no point in dragging it to the end when readers would stop reading it ..
never can i stop myself reading ragna story
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Posted: 10 years ago
kalpi almost got a heart attack hearing the panic voice of nitin n rag in pain made her eyes watered with tears
lovely rag stop her from going
kalpi loves rag but cant show it
now that she loves him pakya entry made it hard foe her how can she stay away when she loves him
hope she finds he is innoncent that sahil done this
update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow super @last both expressed them selves

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