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wow beautiful chapter ..
loved it...
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Amazing update please continue soon soon
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Nice update.tiya so cute..
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Read all parts in shot
They were amazing
Loved the chemistry between tiya-raghav
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eishe10, shikha-aggarwal, sharanya0011, DayAndNight,

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thank u so much for u reply's ...its really mean alot...hope u like it next part.and sorry for late update bcoz of sudden exit of ashna i was upset thats why late on update.
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Chapter-15

(tiya say bye to raghav and sammy and left)

Raghav- kitni pyaari hai ye..wish ki ye meri beti hoti?toh hamesha mere saath rehti.

Sammy- ye tumhari hi beti hai raghav...

(raghav is in shock after here this)

Raghav- ye tum kya keh raho sammy???ye mazak ka time nahi hai.

Sammy- raghav main mazak nahi kar raha hoon...if u not belive me see this...

(sammy show raghav kalpi's pic with tiya & darsh)

Raghav- ye toh sirf ek pic hai sammy..isse tumne ye matlab nikala ki wo meri beti hai???

Sammy-Raghav main itna pagal nahi hoon...ye pic mujhe subah mili thi jab hum mandir se laut aaye the...tiya ki bag se ye pic gaadi main giri thi tab main dekhli aur uthali..1st was shock..then socha ki tumhe bata doo..but again think ki tumhe baatene se pehle khud toh cofirme kar loo...and i ask tiya's teacher she said kalpana is tiya's mother and tiya full name is tiya kalapana jadav...and 1 more thing tiya akeli nahi hai...darsh bhi tumhara beta hai..tiya aur darsh twins hai..now tumhe mujh per trust karna hai ya nahi ye tum pe depend hai...

Raghav- ager ye such hai sammy toh ab tak kalpi mujhe ye bataya kyun nahi???and mujhe toh kya unse kamala maa ko bhi kuch nahi bataya kyun???...wait ab mujhe samajh aa raha hai ki usne chawl main rehne se mana kyun kar diya...and us din mujhe ghar ke andar bhi nahi aane diya...and uss raat ko office main jo bacho ki awaj maine suni thi...damm so that's why wo itna ajeeb sa behave kar rahi thi uss raat ko...mujhe aaj hi jakar usse baat karni hogi...wo mere saath issa kese kar sakti hai???

Sammy- stop raghav...kya poochoge usse ki kyun tiya aur darsh ke baare main tumhe nahi bataya..5 saal pehle tumne uska trust toda tha aur uske baat bhi tum chate ho ki wo ye baat tumhe bataye..

raghav- thik hai mujhe nahi per kamala maa unko ko bata sakti thi naa toh phir unko kyun nahi bataya???

Sammy- may be wo dar rahi ho unke reaction se...look raghav wo abhi laut aayi hai aur kahi naa kahi sab ne usko hurt kiya toh sab per phir se trust karne main usko time lagega and humain usko ye yakin dilana hoga ki ab koi usko hurt nahi karega..

raghav- i think u r right but tab tak ke liya main apne bacho se kaise door rahunga...ab tuhi batayega ki mujhe aage kya karna chahiye.

Sammy- such kahu to mujhe bhi nahi pata ki tujhe age kya karna chahiye...i think humain abhi ke liya ghar jakar sab ko ye baat bata deni chahiye taki aage koi confusion naa ho.

Ragav-u r right.kal hi main kamala maa aur baba ko gher pe bula leta hoon phir hum sab ko sab kuch bata denge.then decide karte hai hai ki aage kya karna hai.

Sammy- ok now lets go...

(sammy and raghav come to mumbai)

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Next day:

Kalpi's flat:

Morning: 5:00 Am

(raghav call kalpi...tiya darsh and ashu irritate by phones ring)

Ashu- kalpi plz phone utha...pata nahi kaun tujhe itni subah phone kar raha hai???

(kalpi attend call in half sleep)

Kalpi- hello

Raghav- i love u...

Kalpi- i love u to...(she is n sleep so she reply...she did not no that other side is raghav)

raghav- so finally u admit that u still love me...

(after here this kalpi wake up in her sleep and see the phone screen..and see raghav name in screen)

Kalpi- app???app wapas kyun aaye??/

Raghav- what???

kalpi- i mean aap wapas kab aaye???aap toh 3 din ke liye gaye the..1 din main hi laut aaye.

Raghav- wow impressive...tumhe toh sab kuch pata hai mere baare main...main kaha gaya tha...kab aane wala tha...kyun chinta ho rahi thi meri??jo ye itni info jama karke rakhi thi.

Kalpi- chinta aur apki...main kyun aapki chinta karungi/??

Raghav- mujhe kya pata???i think tumhe ye sawaal apne aap se pochna chahiye.

Kalpi(angry tone)- mujhe apne aap se kuch poochne ki jarorat nahi aur...

(ashu stop kalpi)

Ashu- shhhuuu...chup karo...kitni loud tone main baat kar rahi ho...hum sab so rahe hai...aur itni subah kaun hai jis per tum apna gusaa nikal raho ho...kaun hai jisko apna din kharab karna hai subah-subah tumhe daat khakar...

Tiya- may be owl...iss time pe toh sirf wahi jaag rahe hote hai.

Darsh- no iss time pe toh owl ke saath bat bhi jaag rahe hote hai.

Tiya- mom ask kaun hai phone pe owl ya bat...

Darsh- phone mujhe do main poochta hoon.

(raghav here all talks between tiya darsh and kalpi)

Kalpi- koi jarorat nahi hai kisi se kuch poochne ki chup chap so jaayo.(in mind) hope raghav ne tiya aur darsh ki awaaj naa sunnli ho..

Raghav- hello...kalpi tum waha ho???

Kalpi- haannn...(kalpi come out from room and go to the balcony) sorry for inconvieance...waise apne abhi kuch suna to nahi naa???

Raghav- nahi...kyun mujhe kuch suna chahiye tha kya???

(raghav smile bcoz he listen all convo between them)

Kalpi (in mind)- thank god...(to raghav)- apne itni subah kyun phone kiya???kya kaam hai??

Raghav- kuch nahi bas tumhe ye batana tha ki main aaj ki meting main nahi aa payunga so ye meeting tumhe handle karni hai.

Kalpi- aapne itnisi baat batane ke liye mujhe 5 baje phone kiya.baad main bhi toh bata sakte the naa???Raghav- nahi baad main nahi bata sakta tha kyunki meeting 8 baje hai aur file mere ghar pe hai...

Kalpi- toh...

Raghav- toh tumhe file lene ke liye mere ghar aana hoga aur tumhre ghar se mere ghar ka rasta 1 ghante ka hai meand tumhe 6:30 baje mere gher ke liye nikalna hoga.

Kalpi- no...main waha nahi aane waali aap file mere gher pe bhijwa do...

raghav- itni subah koi file dene nahi aayega...ager tum kaho to main aa jaao..saath main coffee piyenge.

Kalpi- no...main aati hoon...ab phone rakhiye.

(when raghav cut the call darsh come there and raghav here darsh's voice and stop)

Darsh- mom aap itni subah kaha jaa rahi ho??

Kalpi- darsh wo mamma ko ek meeting ke liye office jaldi jana hai...sorry aaj mamma aapko school chode nahi aa sakti kya aap ashu massi ke saath jayoge aaj school.

Darsh- don't worry mom aap jayo main aur tiya ashu massi ke saath chale jaaayenge.

Kalpi- thank u so much champ...and i promise main tumhe school se pick up karne jaror aayungi.

Darsh- ok mom we wait for u.

Kalpi- by the way tum iss time pe kaise uth gaye?

Darsh- i want to see sunrise...

Kalpi- what???why???

Darsh- i want to see ki mumbai sunrise kaisa dikhta hai...kya dubai ka sun aur mumbai ka sun ek jaisa hi hoga?

Kalpi- i don't no...aur pata nahi tumhare dimaag main ye ajeeb se sawaal kaha se aate hai?now go and ashu maasi ko uthayo.

(darsh go from there...raghav here all convo between darsh and kalpi.after here darsh's voice he is more curious to meet darsh).

Preca- kalpi come to singhania mension and raghav goes to tiya and darsh school.
Hope u like this chapter.sorry for mistakes.plz read and share u r views.
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Very nice update! Continue soon😊
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wow beautiful update😊
rags is dying to spend time and meet his children
continue soon..
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Wonderful aru deqr great update please continue soon...
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Eid mubarak ho anu 😳

and sorry if i am late and not been able to like the post

lovely conversation between raghav and sammy
love the scene when kalpi says ilu
awesome dialogues of tiya and dakshraghav eagerness to meet his kids

exciting for precap😆

request
pls update next 2 parts soon
Edited by shikha-aggarwal - 11 years ago

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