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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Chinu_Rose

Its awesome dear:)
Sneha is too cute and Loved Kalpi and Sneha bonding...
I wish My angel always keep smiling😳


She will definately at the end but really sorry i hate to do it...she still has to settle some things actually a lot and that may make her sad...
Glad u liked the bonding and update...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Glad that you guys liked Sneha and Kalpi's bonding...Aryan's re-entry in kalpi's life may have to wait..apologies for that..this part has lot of reasoning stuff...hope i don't dissapoint you:


The work for the day was done...with a sigh of relief she got up to pack up her stuff...
The whole office was empty before the usual time as it was raining way too heavily since morning...The view of the rains from the top floor where her cabin was way too mesmerising...

She just loved her new office...it was bit away from the city amidst the greenery with few other commercial buildings...They were planning a development project outside the main city..A big ambitious project..project

The way her life had turned out in these few months really amazed her...after the various difficulties now the cafe was doing fine business...she had a great job...new house and car from company...

She remembered how she somehow had managed to give herself another chance at fulfilling her mom's dreams after all the betrayal ...After her interview with Mr.Pillai she was distraught...whenever she went to any interview thereafter their was always a fear lingering on her mind...if that day Raghav wouldn't have come then what would've happened...even those thoughts scared her...

First that and then Raghav's accident followed by Paakhi's challenge... Raghav going out with Paakhi was the final blow...the only thought that could come to her mind was nothing good can happen now...she was done with...she had quit...but then came Aryan...her shattering life was now atleast a bit balanced...All because of him and her bad luck was that she couldn't even thank him...


Suddenly there was a knock...Kalpi turned to see who it was...

Kalpi- Hello Sunaina Ma'am..
Sunaina- Kalpana can you do me a favour..??
Kalpi- Sure Ma'am..
Sunaina- Actually I have to leave for Goa immediately as there's a conference and the driver ain't here...so will u please drop sneha at home..
Kalpi-Sure ma'am..
Sunaina- She's sleeping in my cabin...Thanks a lot beta..

Just when Sunaina stepped out of kalpi's cabin her phone rung..

Aryan- (in an angry tone) Where's Sneha???
Sunaina- She's with me...a girl from my office will drop her at home..
Aryan- Didn't I tell u not to meet her without my permission..I'm coming to your office..I don't want sneha to go with some stranger..
Sunaina- Sneha probably knows her...Her name is Kalpana and Aryan I'm sneha's mom so don't you..

Before she could complete her statement Aryan hung up..

Sunaina (in mind): When will u forgive me Aryan...

She goes to her cabin and is welcomed by a scene of Kalpana stroking sneha's head and slowly picking her up in her arms...Assured that Sneha is in safe hands Sunaina leaves from there..

Kalpi had learnt driving as she worked till late hours and would always do to and fro chawl to home to office..with such a schedule she thought driving herself would be the best option...

Kamla and Vitthal stayed in chawl with pakhya while kalpi lived at her new appartment...the reason she mouthed was that the distance between her new office and chawl was way too much and the apartment was provided for that very reason...that for the people working from the new office stay shouldn't be a problem...However the actual reason was she wanted to stay away from them and Raghav ..Thanks to Sunaina she never really missed her family coz after that day they really became close..


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That day after meeting sneha after two months Kalpi was really happy... she wanted to ask sneha about her brother but then she stopped herself coz it really would sound weird..her enquiring about Aryan ...but then she had to thank him..
So finally making up her mind she went to Sunaina's cabin..Kalpi knocked on the door and on hearing come in she went inside..Sunaina was sitting their on the sofa with head held with her hands..rubbing her eyes she looked up..

S-Ya kalpana...what happened..
K-(noticing her welled up eyes) Ma'am are you okay??
S- Ya I'm fine..

Kalpana sensed the sadness in Sunaina's voice..she always knew Sunaina as a really kind and happy woman...she would treat her workers as children or friends (depending on age)...also she was all with praises for kalpi..seeing her like this made kalpi feel bad..she immediately handed Sunaina a glass of water and sat beside her holding her hand..

K- Ma'am you are surely not alright...please tell me if i can help..
S- Its ok kalpana...I'm fine..
K- Please ma'am share it with me..remember that day you said you'd love to see your daughter to grow up to be like me...I'm also like your daughter...please ma'am...

The concern in kalpi's voice melted sunaina's resolve..Sneha was in the recreation room...Informing her that she'll be back in some time..Sunaina and Kalpi went to the cafeteria..

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Precap- Aryan and Sunaina's relationship
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
M first...Nice update
Kalpi staying away from all hope nw raghav will feel d pain m sure u wil write his POV
Loved d way kalpi getting close to sunaina
Precap is emotional hope kalpi b able to help sunaina n w8ng 4 Aryan n kalpi meeting 😃
Edited by rani214 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Superb update dear:) Wow now Kalpi is living her on life😳..Its nice to see Sunaina and Kalpi's relationship... Now whats the past of Aryan and Sunaina??? Eager..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Nice update.. Waiting to read more.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Told you I will comment before leaving. How couldn't I? Lovely update. Good to know that Kalpi found a mother figure in Sunaina. I'm missing Aryan dear... Gotta go. Catch up with you after a week. Bye
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Nyc update
Want to knw more abt aryan
Updatde soon thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
It's so great arpita! Please continue soon and thanks a bunch for PMing me! =)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: rani214

M first...Nice update
Kalpi staying away from all hope nw raghav will feel d pain m sure u wil write his POV
Loved d way kalpi getting close to sunaina
Precap is emotional hope kalpi b able to help sunaina n w8ng 4 Aryan n kalpi meeting 😃


Thanks a lot for liking the update...
Definitely gonna write Raghav's POV...thanks for a great suggestion again..
Aryan and kalpi meeting soon probably in next or the one after that..still working on sunaina's story..i have it in my mind but writing part is way too difficult..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was hoping for kalpi and rayan meeting. But loved update. Continue soon very curious about rayan and his mom

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