New ff/ss on RagNa (AshNa):Love. Part 24 updated. 18/8/14. Completed - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it's plzz continue
Paakhi rags sis good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Keep the love flowing guys!!! Just love to read your awesome comments ...not always i'll be replying to your

comments but love all of them..I was irritated while writing this part hope so u guys don't hate it..here

goes the next part...

As soon as they reached the college Raj told Kalpi to get down and head to the canteen he'll be back after parking

the car..All the lights switched off and curtains against the windows pulled..it was dark inside the canteen and when she entered

someone put the lights on and all together "SURPRISE"..They celebrated kalpi's birthday with cutting of Raj's

special home-made orange cake...

After an awesome day in college,Kalpi with a huge smile plastered on to her face reached home and then her smile

faded away ..."As usual they are quarreling again", she thought..Kamla and Vitthal were back and were yelling at

each other for not waiting in the morning..

K- A child had high fever... I had to go...but u could have stayed...

V-Its a big deal so i had to check the presentation...its all your fault..even on her b'day my princess was sad..

Kalpi interupted their fight," Enough guys...I am not angry on either of you nor am i sad ...please stop fighting.."..

kamla came forward and hugged kalpi "happy b'day dear..go get ready for the party..wear the dress baba and i

gifted u..and we weren't fighting..don't be upset coz of us.."kamla said with a smile...vithal continued,"Ya

princess...shaadi ke baad ye sab hota rehta hai...u'll understand after yours..go get ready...we need to leave..the

party is in a banquet hall.."

Kalpi asked about prem.."tere bhaiya maya ke saath venue pe gaye hai we'll meet him there itself..." said kamla..

At the party venue-

The place was flushed with golden lights and the entire hall decorated with white flowers...it appeared as if it was

wedding venue rather than a birthday party...though kalpi liked the decorations to be simple..her parents insisted on

fancy decorations as many business partners of her father would be there...atlast the party was a way to bring in

new investors...

Raghav Singhaania entered the hall along with his family and Sammy..they were warmly greeted by prem and

maya...Girls were already drooling over him which wasn't new for Raghav coz this happened every time he went to

some party like this..He did catch many eyeballs but not as much as the b'day girl did...Kalpi atlast reached the

venue with her parents...wearing purple coloured one shoulder gown that perfectly hung to her curves..the dress

accessorized by wearing a beautiful diamond necklace and gold-coloured cuff bracelet along with glass

stilettos...she looked breath taking

Kalpi's dress



Raghav was staring at her with his mouth open.. R pov.."Wow!!! she looks gorgeous".. Paakhi saw raghav staring at

kalpi and came near him..closing his mouth by pushing his chin up she said,"Bhai aap use muh band karke bhi stare

kar sakte hai",she said mischeviously..coming out of his trance raghav hit paakhi head slightly..but he couldn't deny

that he was actually staring her

..

After Prem's announcement kalpi cuts the cake...the party goes on for a long time...

Vitthal and Kamla were busy socializing with people around..Prem and Maya after chatting for a long time with kalpi were

busy meeting other people in the party...

"Surrounded by many yet so alone...what a paradox..",she thought why sipping the red wine..

She never liked attending such parties...She knew all the people around her were there not to wish her but just for

impressing her father and to discuss about business..without informing anyone she just left from there..all the while a pair

of eyes following her..

"Why does she always look so sad...she has all the riches...people around her love her so much..then why??? Stop

Raghav...why do u care??.."...but when he saw her going outside..unknowingly he too followed..giving himself the reason

that its unsafe for a girl to go alone so late at night..

Kalpi was feeling suffocated in that party...she was sad and didn't want anyone to notice her gloomy eyes so she was

walking alone on the road..she reached a bench and sat their thinking.."i really didn't want any of these celebrations..just

some happy family time but guess so u never like to see me happy..first u force such huge celebrations upon me and to

make sure i don't have even a small smile on my face u didn't let Raj accompany me..made him busy..why do u hate me

so much god..i m just asking for some happiness...only few minutes with my parents...only some love". .unknowingly

tears begin to flow from her beautiful eyes..

Raghav didn't know what came over him..but he couldn't stop himself from going near her.."You know my mom says its

really bad to cry on your birthday...your whole life gets filled with those tears...And I say its really bad to cry on any ocassion

especially for girls coz it ruins your make up and you look like a bhoot"..That pj did earn him a small smile from kalpi and

then there was an eye-lock...


Note:

I'll try to make the updates shorter and will also try to cut out on this feelings part.. i know its a bit boring but ek baar likhna

shuru karti hoon toh can't stop myself...


Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

wow very nice updates...

loved it..
plz continue soon...


Originally posted by: 4eversara

Love it's plzz continue

Paakhi rags sis good


Thanks a lot..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Nice chapter. Do continue to update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: esingh90

Nice chapter. Do continue to update.


Thanks a lot..glad u liked it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
No dr dont shorten ur updates its perfect nd also show pov aka feeling...nd do pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
awsume update dear
loved it...
kalpi is so cute even raghav too..
continue soon...

congrats u turned goldie
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
What? Shorter updates! No way the next update better be longer than this one. Mind you I am gonna count the words! He He
It was a very nice update! Loved Kalpi's dress!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome update dear 👏
and the dress that my fav colour and white awww i want that dress someone parcel me that 😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Pm me love it sum thing diff

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