New ff/ss on RagNa (AshNa):Love. Part 24 updated. 18/8/14. Completed

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys planning to write an ff/ss on ragna. not exactly same as ema. it has same characters but with little difference.
should i continue?????????

Index:
Character sketch---- Given below
Part 1----pg 2
Note ---pg 3
Part 2----pg 5
Part 3---pg 8
Part 4--- pg 12
Part 5--- pg 14
Part 6--- pg 17
Part 7(a)---pg 20
Part 7(b)---pg 24
New characters---pg 28
Part 8--- pg 29
Part 9--- pg 32
Part 10---pg 37
Part 11---pg 39
Part 12--- pg 44
Part 13(a) --- pg 50
Part 13(b)--- pg 55
Part 13(c) --- pg 57
Part 14-- - pg 62
Part 15--- pg 67
Part 16--- pg 72
Part 17---pg 77
Part 18--- pg 81
Part 19---pg 86
Part 20--- pg 89
Part 21--- pg 95
Part 22--- pg 98
Part 23--- pg 103
Part 24--- pg 109
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RoshnA1 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yup:) sure... Its always a pleasure to read ss/ff/os of the forum.. Athousand times better than current story line:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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here goes the character sketch:

1.Kalpana Jadhav
Daughter of Vitthal and Kamla Jadhav
An introvert and intelligent girl.


Vithal Jadhav

Owner of KP Constructions.father of two children prem and kalpana.

Kamla Jadhav

Prem and Kalpana's mom.A well-known social worker

Prem Jadhav

Kalpana's elder brother.Cares a lot about his sister and family.


Maya Srivastav

Sweet,bubbly and innocent type of girl. Kalpana's best friend and Prem's fiance.Works as Marketing Supervisor in KP constructions.

Raghav Singhaania

Super khadoos guy.Cares only about himself,businesss and his sister.CEO of Singhaania constructions

Paakhi Singhaania

Raghav's sweet and bubbly SISTER😃😃Apple of her brother's eye and mom ki laadli beti.
Sammy's best friend and secret crush

Gauri Singhaania

Paakhi and Raghav's mom. Bussinesswoman and social worker.

Samar Raizada aka Sammy

Sweet gentleman-type guy.Works in Singhaania construction.Raghav and Paakhi's best friend.Likes Paakhi a lot.

Raj Malhotra


Kalpana's best friend and classmate.A free-spirited guy.Owner Malibu chain of hotels

(Raj ke do photos hai coz one can"t be seen due to some probs)
Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice character sketch... hahaha... Pakhi baby is Rags sis..loved it yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I welcome anything written by you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow u brought ayush akruti magic here with Raj being Kalpi's friend!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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muaah no chance of pralpi or rakhi🤣
bang on girl lovely 👏
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Originally posted by: priya_remix

Oh wow u brought ayush akruti magic here with Raj being Kalpi's friend!!!


Was watching one of the epi of that serial recently so thought of having him as raj😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys!!!Here's part 1..it does not have ragna and ragna's gonna take time...its kind of intro of there lives...hope u like it ...


Part 1:

Scene 1:
At airport:
A tall,fair girl wearing white shorts and blue t-shirt is standing outside with her luggage yelling as she talks on her cell-phone...thats Paakhi singhaania..

Paakhi: What the hell!!! he is again late...i told u sam to remind him ten times atleast..i bet u both forgot that i was coming today..i am gonna strangle both of you to death when i meet u..

Sammy: (while listening to her ranting session in mind.)..its ok if you wanna kill me atleast i'll be seeing you before i die...(now in reality talking)...PK calm down...how ..take deep breathes

Paakhi: let your deep breathing go to hell..i m totally pissed off...first of all ek month ke baad aayi hoon and nobody even cared to send a driver to pick me up..

while paakhi was busy in yelling at sammy someone closed her eyes from behind...
that person,"Guess who???".

P: who else but the my idiot brother the great raghav singhaania(with a expression that says that i m bored of saying this)... on phone..samar raizaada tumhaari class toh mein baadme lungi pehle zara mr.singhaania se nipat lu...

Raghav in mind...Aaj to tu gaya raghav pehle toh do din se chutki se baat nahi ki and ab usse pick up karne paanch minute late pahuncha..shaayad aaj mera is duniya mein aakhri din hai...

P: How dare you come so late bhai?? i did tell sam to remind u and according to me he definately did..he told u na that the i'll be here at 5 then how can u come at 5.05...
Waise toh bade punctual bane firte hai..ab kya hua..ab chup kyun ho kuch bolte kyun nahi..

R: Chutki woh mein...

P:woh mein..woh mein kya?? u should apologising to me but now u r way too busy in thinking about the bahaana...here i m asking u something and u r busy looking here and there..answer me..

Raghav was listening to his sis but was busy watching around coz due to paakhi loud voice almost everyone was looking at them...atlast tired of her lecture...raghav just placed his hand on her mouth and said "chutki maatey... i m really sorry ki mein five minutes late pahuncha...now please do me a favour get into the car" saying so he put the luggage in the car and was about to sit in driver's seat when paakhi said "i wanna drive" . Raghav very well knew paakhi's driving so he was saying no but atlast he was forced to let her drive..just as he closed the door sitting in the front seat...paakhi started driving in full speed..Raghav was having a rollercoaster ride as he wasn't wearing the seatbelt...somehow he managed to put the belt and was telling paakhi to slow down as it is mumbai la rastaa and not a race track but paakhi didn't hear a word she put on loud music and was driving really fast..those being early hours the roads were empty and the loud music in car seemed lot louder due to silence outside...

Scene 2:
In a two-storey bungalow in south mumbai:
The sun-rays peeped in her room...giving the room a golden appearance...
Her room designed by her dear brother looked like one in the royal palaces of ancient times...



She looked at her cell phone...it was 8.30 am...she already had 50+ text messages..
With a tired look on her face she went to the washroom to freshen up..After about half an hour she came out of her room..as soon as she open her room door to go out she found two gifts on the door mat...a big greeting card...
Happy b'day Princess...love Mom&Dad..

Thank god atleast today they did something together..she thought to herself...with a small smile adorning her beautiful face she came downstairs in the living room which was decorated with white and red roses..."Happy b'day to you..happy b'day to you...happy b'day dear kalpi...happy b'day to you" singing so came the angels of her life...prem and maya...kalpi with a genuine huge smile went running towards them and engulfed them in a bear hug..
In not more than a second came another voice behind a huge flower bouquet of various white flowers "You were born in the zoo...you were born in the zoo with monkeys and elephants all besides u" ...Maya and prem together,"Raj"...that was our dear free spirited Raj...Kalpi went to him taking the bouquet in her hand started hitting him..
"Atleast aaj toh don't tease me",she said showing fake anger..Raj replied,"tujhe nahi toh aur kisse tease karunga sweetheart...happy b'day jaan-e-man"...
All of them headed to dining area...kalpi was very happy with her superb morning but like every year even today the two faces she waited for were not there...Raj sensed her sorrow and whispered in her ear,"its ok unhe kuch kaam hoga..tu tension mat le they'll call u soon...aur waise bhi jab tu tension leti hai toh bilkul bandariya lagti hai"...his words brought a smile on kalpi's face..
After breakfast prem and maya left for office and kalpi & raj to college..

note:Raj and kalpi are just bffs neither of them have any feelings towards the other..they just care a lot for each other..
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow kalpi is not a chawl waali yippeee🥳

i love it and ur pakhi is super awesome😆

chutki maatey😆

and i am the first one yaaayyy
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago

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