New ff/ss on RagNa (AshNa):Love. Part 24 updated. 18/8/14. Completed - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sanjulee

Loved the update

& plz don't make the update short
plz give longer update than the previous one

Like a full bowl of gulaab-jamoon not one gulaab-jamoon :-P
kidding


Ya sure..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Sorry for late comment act limited post
Amazing update dear 👏
loved khadoos raghav trying to cheer up kalpi not knwng nythng
Pls update soon eagerly waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: rani214

Sorry for late comment act limited post

Amazing update dear 👏
loved khadoos raghav trying to cheer up kalpi not knwng nythng
Pls update soon eagerly waiting


Thanks a lot ...would try to update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Well written update👍🏼


Thank you..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
wow nice update..
plz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Awesome! Why cut out the feelings part?! Don't do that!! And longer update next time lol I love it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome! Why cut out the feelings part?! Don't do that!! And longer update next time lol I love it!


Yup pakka 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

wow nice update..

plz continue soon..


Thank you dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all a big jhappi for all u dearies 🤗Thought ki weekend ko naya part likhungi but aaj ke baarish ne mujhe ye part likhne ko force kiya... hope u like it...Here goes part 4...totally RagNalicious..
Part 4:

They didn't know how long they sat just like that..looking at each other..seconds felt like minutes and minutes like hours...
Raghav's pov.."Wow her eyes are gorgeous..the black colour with a tint of brown sparkling in the moonlight..i would love to look at those eyes for entire life...Raghav have u lost it what r u thinking??"..
Kalpana's pov.."He sure knows how to cheer someone..but...why did he come here??..why did he follow me??"..their thoughts were broken by Kalpi's phone ring..
You are my pumpkin pumpkin
Hello honey bunny
I am your dumpling dumpling
Hello honey bunny
Feeling something something
Hello honey bunny😆😆

K-hi Raj..hows chachaji???..anything serious???..
R-Ya he's fine now..he's sleeping now...doctor said he'll be fine in a week..i just called to tell u that i won't be able to come to college for some days..tu mere kisi classmate ko bol de meri proxy maarne ke liye..already low on attendance aur bunk kiya toh principal ka bulaava aa jaayega..chal bye chachaji bula rahe hai..
K- ok bye ...take care..
Kalpi realised that it was 11 pm..she had to go..Suddenly there was a loud thunder and it began to rain..Raghav took kalpi's hand and they both went inside a pco booth nearby..the booth being small made their bodies collide against each other..their face just few inches away..looking away kalpi said..

K- iss baarish ko bhi abhi aana tha...first of all i am out of house at this hour and now rains... bhai must be getting worried..
R- Chill Ms.Jadhav i'll drop u home..see there's my car..come on we need to run till their if u don't wanna get wet..
Saying so he removed his blazer and covered kalpi. While putting his blazer on kalpi he by mistake touched her bare shoulder..his touch made a jolt of electricity run through kalpi's body...then they ran towards the car and sat..after sitting kalpi was about to remove the blazer when raghav said,"its ok..u need it more than i do"..suddenly raghav's phone rang
Gauri-Chintu tum kaha ho..why didn't u inform us before leaving???
R- Sorry mom...i'll reach home in half an hour..u reached na??
P- Ya me and chutki came in the other car..come soon i am waiting..
R- no u r not..go sleep..i'll reach asap..no need to wait..
Saying so he hung up..while raghav was busy on phone kalpi received text from prem asking about her whereabouts..she told him not to worry and that she'll reach home in sometime ...
R- why do family members panic so much..thoda late kya hua mom tension se pagal ho jaati hain..by the way Ms.Jadhav did u call ur mom..tell her u'll reach in sometime..
Hearing that kalpi thought,"mom dad might have already slept..they never would worry about me"..
R-Ms.Jadhav..Ms.Jadhav...Kalpana (shaking her shoulder slightly)..
K-(coming out of her trance)Huh...aa..ya i've informed bhai..
Raghav sensed a bit disappointment in her voice...he just started the car and began to drive..there was silence in the car which made the beautiful sound of trickling water drops much more audible..trying to start a conversation raghav said..
R-its lovely isn't it..the rains??
K- hmmm..
He thought she didn't want to talk so without uttering another word he started driving...while changing the gear there hands touched..they looked at each other..Realising that he was driving the car and wouldn't want kalpi to reach hospital rather than home Raghav looked away...trying to break the awkwardness in the car he switched on the radio...

RJ: Haaye ye baarish..kabhi kabhi girti hi nahi par jab girti hai toh chat(roof) phaadke girti hai..aaj to raat bhar studio mein rehna hai toh socha kyun na iss romantic mausam ki baatein ho jaaye..Ye news waale bhi na iss acche khaase mausam ka satyaanash kar dete hai...jaane kab inhe pata chalega ki technical terms nahi balki sentiments chaahiye isse describe karne ke liye...
ye woh mausam hai jab hawaaye gaana gaane lagti hai...jab dil ki baatein shabdon ke bina hi bayaan ho jaati hai...puddles mein paani bharne se jitni problems hoti hai uss se kahi zyaada mazaa aata hai uss paani mein khelne ka..aur uss se bhi zyaada maza aata hai apne boring life ko filmy bante hue dekhne ka..wahi hero ka heroine ko jacket dena..roz se kuch zyaada kareeb bethna and ek doosre ko chup chupke dekhna...iss romantic mausam ke naam ye romantic song.

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke
Ho O O O Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke

Raghav was looking at kalpi from corner of his eye..she on other hand was busy looking at the rains.. Kalpi sensed that Raghav was looking at her every two moments..to avoid his gaze she was looking out

Sansoon Mein Badi Bekarari
Aankhoon Mein Kehi Rat Jage
Kabhi Kahi Lag Jaye Dil To
Kahi Phir Dil Na Lagey
Apna Dil Main Zara Tham Loon
Jaadu Ka Main Ise Naam Doon
Jaadu Kar Raha Hai
Jaadu Kar Raha Hai
Asar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe hain
Magar Chupke Chupke


His touch brought shivers to her body just moments ago..it was something she never experienced...confused by her own thoughts she kept looking outside..The song was like totally meant to voice Raghav's and Kalpana's feelings at that time..it created love in the rainy atmosphere

Aise Bhole Ban Kar Hain Baithe
Jaise Koi Baat Nahin
Sabh Kuch Nazar Aa Raha Hai
Din Hai Yeh Raat Nahin
Kya Hai Kuch Bhi Nahin Hai Agar
Hoton Pe Hai Khamoshi Magar
Baatein Kar Rahin Hain
Baatein Kar Rahin Hain
Nazar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke

The sudden loud sound of thunder scared kalpi a bit and she placed her hand on raghav's hand which was on the gear..Realising what she did she quickly removed her hand.. again trying to avoid his gaze kalpi began to look outside...there was an awkward silence in the car but yet it seemed perfect...

Kahin Aag Lagne Se Pehle
Uthta Hai Aisa Dhuaa
Jaisa Hai Idhar Ka Nazara O O
Vaisa Hi Udhar Ka Samaa
Dil Mein Kaise Kasak Si Jagi
Dono jaanib Barabar Lagi
Dekho To Idhar se
Dekho To Idhar Se Udhar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke
Ho O O O Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Magar Chupke Chupke
Magar Chupke Chupke Um Hum Chupke Chupke
Ah Haa Chupke Chupke

As the song ended they reached kalpi's house..placing raghav's blazer on back seat and bidding good bye she went inside...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Awesome update
nice song selection
continue soon

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