it does not make any difference !!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hai
this is my another work for raghav how does he feels for pakhi as he has nothing...
all comments are welcome for effort
thank you...



It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!


whether you are close to me?

whether you are holding me ? or not ?

it does not make any difference to me...

as i am just a greek statue in front of you

who cannot be easily pierced

ONLY SHE CAN DO ...


my body

my soul

my heart

are fully filled with her always...

you cannot make it in anyways as

you don't know what is love.. means


your presence or non - presence does not mind me...

as i am always numb before you...

but her single glance of sight give me..

life to the life less feelings of mine...

It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!


whether you are close to me?

whether you are holding me ? or not ?

it does not make any difference to me...

in what ever ways you try to make me your's

but alas! i know your each deed but just want to say

aim DEAD SOUL when you are near me!

It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!


even though she is far away from me

her mere thoughts itself bring life to my dead soul...

so whether you are near or close to me

i don't mind it as

It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!

as she is fully filled with in me...


i want you to comment on this work

is this ok or not

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is not ok.

It's more than OK.This piece is FABULOUS!!!
I can clearly see how much thought you put into this piece and so true. Very well done!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pookhi

This is not ok.

It's more than OK.This piece is FABULOUS!!!
I can clearly see how much thought you put into this piece and so true. Very well done!👍🏼


thank you dear seeing you after a long time a 🤗 for you
just pen down my thoughts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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your thoughts are beautiful. And it gave a lot of assurance to me regarding Ragna.
So I Love it.
the poem needs some editing+grammar check to make it excellent.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

your thoughts are beautiful. And it gave a lot of assurance to me regarding Ragna.

So I Love it.
the poem needs some editing+grammar check to make it excellent.


thank you for your comments
i try to take care of i started to write in if forum only ...
i visit this just to read the ff and os and later i just pen down my thoughts
i cannot spend more time on as i have to take care of my busineesss...
i will try to keep your words in mind thank you and🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you 😊
i saw most of your post whats your name
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thank you
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wow!! its amazing. n i mean it its really amazing. in just few lines u had brilliantly explained the emotions of raghav. n thank u so much for such n awesome creations😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasikalasriram

hai

this is my another work for raghav how does he feels for pakhi as he has nothing...
all comments are welcome for effort
thank you...



It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!


whether you are close to me?

whether you are holding me ? or not ?

it does not make any difference to me...

as i am just a greek statue in front of you

who cannot be easily pierced

ONLY SHE CAN DO ...


my body

my soul

my heart

are fully filled with her always...

you cannot make it in anyways as

you don't know what is love.. means


your presence or non - presence does not mind me...

as i am always numb before you...

but her single glance of sight give me..

life to the life less feelings of mine...

It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!


whether you are close to me?

whether you are holding me ? or not ?

it does not make any difference to me...

in what ever ways you try to make me your's

but alas! i know your each deed but just want to say

aim DEAD SOUL when you are near me!

It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!


even though she is far away from me

her mere thoughts itself bring life to my dead soul...

so whether you are near or close to me

i don't mind it as

It does not make any difference!!!!!!!!!!!

as she is fully filled with in me...


i want you to comment on this work

is this ok or not

Superb , i like this poem , very true and real . I am new and first time repling . i am bigest fan of RAGNA. it affect me such that whole day i am thinking about Kalpi and raghav, all scenes are coming infront of me in a day so amy times ,. really hats off this jodi , never seen such frequency of any couple on screen till now ...

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