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Chapter 11 updated was simply stunning... Keep kalpi hard and in control... No more miss show my feeling... Rags HV to crack his head to get her back...muahhh

Fuzz you're awesome and even your dedication to update and also fulfill our requests is awesome! 😃👏 I can't get enough of this FF!!! I re-read the edited Chapter-11, and it has made that Chappy even more beautiful and sensuous! Must say your attention to details is awesome and that too without making it vulgar!! 👏 I read it so many times. Also please complete Chapter-14, loved the way you showed Kalpi breaking down, and Kamla's repentance. I wonder what will happen now, and how long ll it take for Raghav to win Kalpi back; and also to give her one more blow by telling her that she is his legal wife!😊 marvelous once again! lots of love...ur FFs and a few others r d only reasons which keep me going now. So thank you sooo much from bottom of heart.😊❤️

Well well fuzz from now on I will call you jaanu!

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Well well fuzz from now on I will call you jaanu!

Because your story comes to life when reading!!!!

Chapter 11 edit was fabulous though I did realise before through your unsaid words that they did cross the barriers to some extent which was prohibitible in the eyes of Kalpi! But that probably mad eher realise that she was in love with him. After the edit the stroy just got enhanced beautifully! The whole description was apt and sensitively written! Not too loud or distasteful. Just perfect as it should be! Oh how I wish I could write like this! (Pssst I will contact you to help me when I write about intense scenes in my ff! Hope you will help me out!) Damn I think I made a mistake by not reading M&B's in my college days😛

Chapter 14 incmplt: Here I want to specially applaud for portraying Kamla the way she is! An understanding mom is what every child needs! It is easy to get hyper and slap your child for his or her mistakes but to accept it and forgive it only a mother can do!

Kamla has realised the dept of love Kalpi has for the man who just wants revenge from Kamla acc to her.

Her guilt in being the sole reason for her child's heartbreak is heart wrenching! Oh what the poor soul must have gone through!

Kalpi is lucky to have such a wonderful mom! I am sure Kamla will ask Kalpi to move ahead in life! and not repent for what she did!

Fab job jaanu! Love you! Please complete the chapter 14 waiting to read it!

Fabulous my gosh this story is amazing can't wait for Rags to pour his heart out to Kalpi

Edited chap 11 was jus fab dear

Part 2 of chapter 14 updated for those eager to read

Oh God angel...this s like givg a drop of drug to a drug addict...coz im addicted to ur ff...dun torture us...v need more doses...

Jokes apart..luv the 2nd part...:D waitg for more words frm ur heart to reach mine...:)

angel i feel empty...hopeu write soon...n update evryday if u can..now thiss ff n the happy endg will be my treatment aftr stupid EMA...😭