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mishti058

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

edited part is beautiful dear...

u are one of my fav writer.

BTW when are you updating next part, m desperately waiting... and evn i want oyster to be updated soon

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 11 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Thankyou big big big big big bear hug. Love u for this and huge flying kiss. Totally awesome start. Finally kalpi breaks down and what a bond between mom and dtr. I hope rags is feeling restless and sense of loss. But am proud kalpi didn't break down in front of rags. Pls continue 🤗

Edited by sunyy - 11 years ago

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arya

@aryagr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

Plz complete ch14 soon. Dying 2 read it.

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Autumm

@Autumm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

chapter 14...n tht 2 not complete...plz complete it...i was at peck of my emotions...for kamla n kalpi...thy must be very sad...kamla for her daughter n kalpi for kamla n raghav...OMg she luv him...wht can be wosrt then tht...ooouchhh!!!😭

angel continue soon plz...very soon..as u knw..im half insane already cz wht happen in ema...but for ur ff...im completely ready to read it...n i did read every chapter twice...tell me how crazy i am...😃

always want to read the next chapter...but complete 14 1st...😉 muahhh huugggsss

Edited by Autumm - 11 years ago

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Read it and tell me how it is... Is it tasteful? U know when I wrote it out the first time... Didn't think much about the details in the scene or body positions or what was so bold or great about tht night.

I have tried to give it some detail to fit what I had previously written... Do tell me if it flows...😳

WOW!! They did cross one barrier. to say I missed you is also a BIG step!

I understand your worries about being tasteful. I think it was very well explained...wonderfully done. When you love someone it becomes very necessary to please them in all ways. it is especially important to couples in the initial phase of a relationship. These two are in an intense relationship that they want to portray is mere skin deep... After this intense lovemaking, Kalpi is first to accept her feelings for Rags. She is extremely attracted to Rags, and deeply in love.

Rags finds Kalpi irresistible, when she is in front of him, and he can think of nothing else. So what happened makes complete sense. Its beautifully portrayed.

Kalpi had to touch the third base to realize that for her it cannot go on like this forever and she has to move away for her own sanity.

Tastefully done. 👏

I appreciate the edit of Chapter 11.. Thank you.😃

(space4- Chapter 14) 😉

I Love it... I love it... If I had written/imagined... if this was my story this is exactly how I would have envisioned it. it is so real it is making me go bonkers...

you have poured all emotions and I am absolutely enraptured...I just dont want these updates to ever end... wondering what will happen next, can just make my heart skip a beat...

you are getting better with each update with each story of your...

👏👏👏

Edited by spontaneousmini - 11 years ago

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Hanz

@Hanz91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

Hey great update! With erverything going on I understand not finishing the stories so you take ur time to write theses stories and your stories are awesome and I would read them again if I have time from my college work

Edited by Hanz91 - 11 years ago

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Eishwinder K Singh

@eishe10

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

So far its a good update!!! Please complete chapter 14 soon.

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lovely

@smileysmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Thanks for the update of chapter 11. Now one can connect some missing dots and understand it well.

It was beautifully written from your side, specially giving appropriate reasons to both (persons) feelings. Its important to understand Rags loves her. If not then he wouldn't have that much self control.

Edited by smileysmile - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Oh wow! Now I know what Raghav has Kalpi doing 😳
Kalpi has become bold she love Raghav and is not shy to please him ;)
Kalpi breaking down in kamla lap was. Rey emotional but needed
I like that she got that crying out of her system
Now it's time for payback
I want Kalpi to continue to work with Raghav but treat him just as an employer and nothing else
Ignoring Raghav will drive him up the wall lol
He will be so frustrated that Kalpi is no longer affected by his charm
Lovely update

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