New SS-U Deserve this..final note on 22 July pg 11

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Aanchu

@aanchuxoxo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Thanks guys I m touched by ur response...never thought i if such a gud response...luv u all

I ll try 2 make it diff story nd kalpi is little bit rude bt Plzz dont hate her its due betrayal which she faced...

I hope u ll like it..

Part-1

After 5 years

plane landed nd a girl stepped our nd move towards elevator...a girl having dusky beauty wearing formal dress,did high tight pony,did little make-up nd walking confidently while busy on phone checking mails...every guy eye was fixed on her as if saw an angel her innocent face, her beautiful eyes dat can make any guy mad...she was none other than kalpana...

While walking her PA was doing her best 2 follow her...

Kalpana(in anger)-I don't have A Day,,Match My Steps...

Hurry up..!!! Damn it..

Avni (PA)- ji..

Kalpana was instructing her 4 todays schedule...

Nd avni was writing on notepad while writing she skipped some points due nervousness nd was tired...

When she stepped out of airport nd smirked

Kalpana 2 herself- mumbai I m bk...get ready 2 handle me nd u All ll Get What U Deserve..

Kalpana (waiting 4 her car 2 come when doesn't come)-where is car..?? I m waiting...

Avni (nervous)- M-A-M...I 4got..

Kalpana (in frustration)- wt the hell..!!! U 4got..can't u do anything properly...now I ll go in these 3rd class taxis

Kalpana (gave angry look)- u r fired..Right here,Right now..

Avni (stammering)- P-L-ZZ M-A-M...I m sry

I want dis job very badly..I m only child of my parents..inn paiso (money) se mera ghar chalta hai..I hv lots of liabilities 2 pay

Kalpana-soo..

Avni-gave me another chance..

Kalpana-chance...had I open a dharamshala(place where charity is done)...?? U r gud 4 nthing...

Avni was crying...

Kalpana-avni..

Avni(turned her face 2wards her)-ji mam

Kalpana-I want ur resignation letter reach in office b4 I reach their...

Kalpana ignored her nd took taxie..nd drove off..

Left cried avni behind...

Avni (her gaze 2wards Kalpana)- Heartless..!!!

To be continued...

Don't 4got 2 hit like nd Plzz share ur genuine views...

Criticism is wlcum...

Next part is very interesting... nd sry if did mistake as its my 1st SS...love u all..

Edited by ragna575 - 11 years ago

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Aanchu

@aanchuxoxo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

No comments...my SS is so bad..:(

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geitahchamate

@geitahchamate

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Whoa... that's a ruthless Kalpi... a lil too much arrogance probably all her setbacks in life have turned her so... which is quite possible...

Thankfully she's not the meek, submissive, vulnerable one who is used as a pawn by everyone she loves...

Loved your first part...really nice... please update the next parts soon...

Woman empowerment finally 👏👏

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow!!! Kalpi toh RS ban gayi...love her attitude.. Would love to see her speak like this to dumbla,dumbli and of course to the maama's boy chintu and his good for nothing mom..

Continue soon..