unseen love of rags for kalpi part 68 upated on 101

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i want to post new os it will start from the day of office success party... if u guys like ill update now because i am not having much work in office today...

and i am writting another ff tat is kalpi's life based on precap... dnt knw y its getting problem in updating next parts so please sorry for that ill try to update next part correctly... read that and give feedbacks to me

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Of course update, will be waiting.😳
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here it go

part 1:

sammy and maya convence raghav to come in the party as its party of his company

raghav thinks for a while and says k.. they all leav efrom there and while going raghav says pakhi that its special invitation from me u should come party at time dont be late... even though he was saying her bt his eyes fixed on our angle kalpi... she to was staring at him and she was thinking he may call her bt he did not he just went out withing talking anything...

kalpi felt little bad but not shown tat to anyone ... she says im nt coming for party ...
paki says y ill take permission from kamla ma u have to come..
kalpi says i am nt interested in this parties and all so please dnt force

raghav enters office and sees tat they are arguing on party matter he goes there and says pakhi y u forcing her she is just an assistance and also she dont match to our class parties... its better that she wont comme there else we will get insult infront of our clients having such an classless employee...by saying tat he left to his cabin...
kalpi felt too bad abt his words and remembered childwood how hw helped her and all and a word unbelivable left out from her mouth...
suddenly pakhi asked what unbelievable kalpi????
kalpi says nothing pakhi plz i nt intereste in party so dnt force k???

paki then says k and starts her bhasan abt her dress and all...

meanwhile raghav was seeing then in cctv footage and self thinks kya karu tume dur rakne ke liye muje ye sab karna jaroori hai nahi tho party mai mai tere alava kisiko dekh nahi patha ... its better u stay away from me...

then kalpi got a cal she was so happy by seeing the call and picks the call and says what a pleaser you called me now????
caller:ya im in mumbi and how can i miss to meet u????
kalpi :fine wru???? when did u come ????
caller:i tell everything wn u meet me tell when u coming to meet me???
kalpi:mere abhi ko meet karneke liye kabi bi tayyar hu par mai office mai hu ... half day leave lekar aa javoongi par muje uss boss ka permission chahiye wait ill ask and ill inform u...
abhi:no excuses your meeting me in one hour at xyz place and today yo are coming out with me so u inform in home tat you will not come home today...
raghav was observing this and got frustrated that with whom she is talking like this and kaha jana chahathi hai leave lekar... he was angry...

kalpi was thinking how to ask for the leave she knows if she asked him then he will taunt her again... then she sees sammy and asks sir i need half day leave sir my friends came so i want to leave now
sammy:kalpana u can ask to raghav knw y u asking me and u knw na there is a party on the success of project that u brought ...
kalpi :ya sir but im not attending party...
sammy:y ???all staff are attending y not u???
kalpi:first of all i was not interested in tat party and also our boss told tat that is high class party to which i cant match so ...

sammy:kya raghav ne aisa kaha ????? let it be k u may go now il
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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part 2:

sammy :kya raghav ne aisa kaha ??? theek hai thum jao mai use bol deta ho... aur bye...

kalpi:thank u sammy sir ... bye..

kalpi calls kamla and says that aai my friend came mumbi so today i will not come home ill be with them... bt kamla asks which friend and its not gud to go out in night and all... vittle listen to this and take the phone and asks what happened kalpi says baba abhi aya hai vo aj muje bhahar le jana chahatha hai tho... vittl says isme puchneki kya bath hai beta abhi tere sath hai tho darnevali bath hi nahi hai... thu ja aur abhi ko kehena ki mai use puch raha tha k???
kalpi says k baba love u bye...

raghav was seeing all these and thinks how can they allow kalpi to satay away from home tat to in night???? who is abhi what the hell he to do with my kalpi???? he throws his phone away in angry that goes and hit sammy...

sammy:what is this what happened ???
raghav : nothing came to his original behavior and says party ke thayyariya huva kya ????
sammy:ha ho gaya... aur jo kuch bhi tumne kaha sab arrangements bhi karwadiya maine...
raghav :fine...
sammy: by the way kalpana took half day leave .she informed me aabt that and she went...

raghav :rudly says dnt she have the manners of asking to boss???? thats is way i say cheef class and low class behavior...
sammy:sammy was shocked by his words bt didnt say anything just told that let it be she asked permission from me ...
raghav :what was the reason to take leave ???? act as he dnt knw anything...
sammy:her friends came so she want to meet them...
raghav :fine let it be.. now lets go..

on the other hand kalpi reached the xyz place and sees noone was there she thought he may jocked with her he not came mumbi...

suddenly she tunrs and what she show kept her mouth open ... all her friends are gathered there with a smile on their faces... she goes to then ang huged all that is group hug...(guys i am here taking abhi fro kumkum bhagya,ahil from qabool hai,KT from sslk and yesh he is randomly i took as all were in the same team of cricket )

they all broke the hug nd says is this our kalpi only????

kalpi:ha its me only ...i cant believe all of u suddenly here???? how come??? i am very happy yar...

abhi: calm down dnt be exited that much k all came on work and thought of meeting our sweetheart choti...

ahil:ha choti kaise ho ????? i missed u lot yar... scholl ke ek ek pal me thu ham logonke sath thi muje tho laga ki fir kabhi tumse nahi mil paunga...

kalpi:kaise bath kar rahe ho ahil mai tum logonke bina kaise rehe sakthi hu... i too missed u all lot thank got i met u now im so happy...

kt:tho mujse milkar maja nayi aya ??

kalpi:kt thum bhi na i love u all my big b's ...

yesh:vaise mai thume shadi ke liye bulane aya hu...
kalpi says shadi kiski????
are meri ma mera and u knw girl is fromm mumbai shadhi pune mai hai aur tum sab log ek hafthe pehele aa rahe ho...

kalpi:ek hafthe?????? i dnt think its possible my kadooos boss wont give le
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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Superb start...loved both chapters.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice! Excited to read on..😃
Continue soon, please!!:)
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Please continue...want to read further!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi... here is the nezt part


part3:
kalpi:ek hafte shayad mai nahi aa pavoongi...mere kadoor boss leave nahi dega...
yesh:i dnt knw anything u must come all are coming even mom also coming before one week...
kalpi:what mom coming then ill try my level best to come ... bt he will not leave me... he will scold me again...

ahil:what who will scold??? how dare to scold you... ahil ke frnd ko datneke himmath kaise huva uska bathao kaun hai vo uska tho mai... you knw how ahil angry imagin thaT...
kalpi interrupt him saying he is boss of my company... but she not told his name as she shared good things about him in childwook... they used to tease her by taking rags name so she not told his name..

abhi :what work ur dng darling??
kalpi: hesitatingly says assistance of paki kapoor...
by listening paki name all get angry and says what thehell wrong with u ha ... ur working as a assistance and that to for paki..???
kalpi: i need to work guys...
ahil:mere choti kisike assistance??? kabi nahi... vo bhi us paki jisne tumare sab kuch china vo??? never ... today onwards ur not working there you will be md in my company mumbai branch got it???
abhi,kt,yesh:ya ahil thik kehe raha hai ..
kalpi:guys guys relax u knw na i cant take help for this na... if i want to take u guys help then what is the need for me to work ha ??i knw u all love me lot bt in this matter ill nt listen u guys...
kt: angryly says ee tho vahi karegi jo use karna hai...
kalpi: guys dnt worry for some days only ... im searching other job...
abhi:fine guys lets eat something i need to go one party...
all in surprise party ??? kaha??
guys ek company ka part hai jaha par muje gane ke liye bulaya hai ek hafte se request kar rahe the vo log so i agreed... vo boss ke girlfrnd ke liye bez they told tat she is big fan of me and all u knw ill never disappoint my fans so...
all: fine
abhi:kalpi tum mere sath chalogi na??
kalpi:mai kyu???
abhi :kyu se kya matlab mai akela bore ho javoonga thum hai to maja aa jayega...
kalpi:fine ill come... then all had food and then kalpi asks u people forgot something with naughty smile... all says ull not change sweet heart and says we not forgotten.. we brought ur gift k???
kalpi happyly says thats like my big 's ...
kt brought his new designed dress for her which he was launching fter two days bt given her now... and says its for my angle... and kisses her foread...
ahil brought a diamond neckless for her which was very beatiful and give it to her and he kisses her hand saying ahil raza ibrahim ke choti ko sabse acche nekless...
yesh gives something to her and now abhi turn he makes a monky face and says mere doll ke liye mai kuch nahi laya bt today in tat party ill sing a song for my doll... then kalpi hugs all and says ill wear all today for party...
they left to the abhis guest house and kalpi and got ready for the party and all r ready for party... again they share a group hug and leaves...
precap:kalpi and abi in raghav's pa
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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...thanks for ur comments

here is next part

part 4:
kalpi and abhi left for the party .. she was looking dam hot and beautiful in that dress she also wore tat neckless which ahil given her and she was too happy to be with abhi...
on the other hand raghav was thinking abt kalpi ... sammy comes and asks r u ready raghav says ya ...
he self thinks that miss kapoor aj thume apne dil ki bath mujse kehena hi hoga.. this is my frist step towards my revenge... aj kalpi bi nahi rahegi party me jiski vajaha se mai sab kuch bul jatha tha... aj mera day hoga... then he went to party..
then paki comes and raghav says her ur looking nice even though he didnt liked her beauty...
paki miss dream queen blushed... then sammy comes there and says abhi ka phone tha vo bahar hai use andhar lene jaana hai...
paki asks with her open mouth kya rockstar abhi?? he is my fav singer... then raghav says patha hai...paki says mere liye bulaya hai wow so sweet and thinks in mind abhi se maska laga raha hai mr. shadhi ke bad bed room me kya kya karega patha nahi... she came out of dream land when raghav asked them to lets go and wellcome abhi...
they came out but dam surprised to see kalpi with abhi with her hand in his hand she too surprised to see tat this is raghav party... she left abhi hand and stood there bt abicame forward to meet them...

raghav thinks ye yaha kya kar rahi hai aur ye kapde kaise pehensakti hai vo sabke samne only i havwe that right to see her like this... y she is with abhi dam it... abhi says hi mr.singania nice to meet u..
raghav :with angry tone here to...
there come sammy hey kalpana u here what a srprise bt kalpi stood there only abhi noticed this and placed his hand around her sholder and brings her ther and asks you guys knw her before...??
sammy: ya abhi she work in our office ...
raghav was burning in anger thinking how could he how could he touch her like tat ill kill him ...
raghav comes forward and introduce paki
raghav:meet her she is paki she is ur big fan... .. abhi gets angry by listening tat name this was not unnoticed by kalpi she just holds his hands and press hands conveying its k...
they went in party... sammy took abhi to introduce other guests thats when raghav came near kalpi and says what the hell u doing here... i told u not to come here na..
kalpi: sir actually i didnt knwn its ur party...
raghav about to hold her arms angryly abi comes ther and says whats this how dare u to talk her like this she is my sweetheart... by listening this raghav got more angry he was about to speak bt sammy interepted...guys relax kalpi has the tears in her eyes by seeing this abhi brust him and says i cant stay here even one second and grabs kalpoi by her hand and about to leave bt sammy said its reputation of u and also our company please excuse us and sing song please... kalpi says abhi please dont think abt me im k sing a song after tht ew can leave from here...
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ill update next part soon i meen today itself... please give feedbacks

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