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Posted: 11 years ago
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read all the updates...its nice ...continue soon😳...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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...here is next part
part 10:
the women continues saying tat kalpi ane ke bad in sabke jindhaji badal gayi... ye pancho rehethe tho hostel me par hamesha thumare mom ke room me rehethe the...ek pal bhi ek dusre se dur nahi rehethe the aur abhi vo log aisa hi hai.. vo charo tho bahoth rich family se aye the par thumare mom ke pyar ke liye vo log jamin par hi so jaate the... aur vo abhi tho sabka bhahut kayal raktha hai khas karke kalpi aur uske mom ka... jabthak vo done so nahi jaathe tab tak vo apne anke bhi nahi bandh karthe the.. patha nahi ye lognka relation kun ke rishthe se badkar hai... jab ye log school se apne apne ghar jaa rahe the tho vo mom ko apne sath le jana chahathe the par thumari mom ke asha hai ki vo kalpi ke sath hamesh rahe.. vo kalpi si kahi he ki jab vo shadi karke jayegi tho vo uske sath uske sasural jayegi ...in sabka ek hi aasha hai ki kalpi ache se ghar me jaye aur ye charo already uske shadhi me dhene ke lliye banglow.. karodho rupee aur sare gehene banwakar rakhe huve hai...
raghav had tears in his eyes for not being with his mom bt also happy tat kalpi was there for mom... he thinks how caring abhi and all they took care of my mom and kalpi i need to thank them and mom ko ghar le jaana hai ske sapne bhi pura hoga agar mai kalpi se shadi karliya tho par vo tho mujse bhat bi nahi karthi kya karu...
raghav says thans to that lady and leaves ...in dinnimg table all are eating raghav also come there .. but he sees his mom feeding all of them bt not his suddenly tear fel down his cheeks he cant control tat so he left from there kalpi seen this and got hurts she thinks what happened...sammy follows raghav
when sammy enter the room he sees tat raghav was crying too much he goes to him and asks what happened raghav y u crying
ragha: sammy mom mom
sammy: what mom mom raghav bolo na kya huva ...
raghav : mom yahapar hi hai .. itne sare din vo ashram me thi aur kalpi jise mom kehe rahi hai vo meri mom hai
sammy; wt ?? theek se bolo plz..
raghav explains everything what ever happened few hour back
smmy:calm down now kalpi se bath karenge sab kuch theek ho jayega..raghav still crying.. then they both hear a sound at the door when they turned to see who is tat they are shocked to see shocking kalpi at the door.. ya kalpi listened everything.. she was hurt by listening raghavs pain she went inside room..
raghav suddenly comes and hugs her and says mom mom..
kalpi breaks the hug and says ap mom ki bete ho?? iska mathlap vo thumare ma hai???thum chintu ho?
raghav :ha kalpi muje mom se bath karna hai kalpi chalo na
kalpi: par mom ko kuch yad nahi hai agar stess hogayi tho use attacks ayega ..
raghav:kya attacks tho let it be mom ko pain me nahi dekh sktha mai dur say hi dekhkar kush ho javoonga... kalpi felt her heart came out for a second she says herself mai thime kaise pain me dekh sakthi hoo raghav thumse jjyadha dard muje horaha hai..and she says aap chaliye mere sath ragha:par kalpi mom ..she dnt listen just grabs hs hand
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part11: she grabs his and and says ap chaliye mere sath. raghav says aghar mom ko kuch huva tho ??
kalpi unknwngly says mai ap ko dard me nahi dekh sakthi.. she realized what she said aur feeling aquard so she said vo meri mom hai muje path hai kya karna hai chaliye ap she took him by holding his hand.. raghav was surprised by wt she just said bt he nt in a position to think abt tat he waas just thinking about his mom...
she came out of room and shouts abhi,jaan ,kt,yesh jaldi mom ke kamreme aajao muje thum sabse kuch kehena hai.. raghav asks y u callibg all.. she says they r also childrens of mom.. she took him in giuri room .. gouri says thu aa gayi pari kabse thumari inthajar kar rahi thi mai.. all four also reached there.. all are shocked to see raghav in kalpi's room tat to in night abi: kya huva kalpi ??
kalpi: jaan ap mom ke injection hath me lelo aur abhi thum tablet and kt thum pani.. all asks par kye mom tho theek hi hai..
kalpi: do as i say all follows her order..
gouri :kya huva thuje mai tho theek hu aur kya drama kar rahi ho.kalpi:mom mai apko apke jindhagika sabse kimthi cheej dhena chahathi hoo.
gouri:mere jindhagi ka kimthi cheej tho thum log ho na
kalpi: ham se bhi badkar kimthi cheej dena chahathi hu.
abhi: bakwas mat kar kalpi tel clearly.
kalpi: mom apka beta apka chintu ye hi hai mom raghav singania . thumare chintu hai mom.
all shocked by listening this abhi says wt u saying kalpi..
kalpi:ha jaan mai sach kehe rahi hoo raghav hi mon ka beta chontu hai aur mom gouri singania hai..
all are in shock gouri tries to remember something bt use chakkar aa jatha hai she was abt to fall bt raghav hold her and took her to bed and started crying he was calling mom uthiye mom mai apka chintu aya hoo ... he shouts koi doctor ko phone karo..kalpi places hand on his sholder and saays it wil be fine kalpi says jaan ap jaldi mom ko injection lagvadijiye aur abhi thum pani me tablet mix karke de fast .. raghav asks wt injection u giving mom.. kalpi: dnt worry mom ko kabi kabi aisa hi hotha hai ham sabko patha hai kounsa injection dena hai aur vo ek ghante mai theek hao jayegi... they give injection and make her to drink tat water... one hour all spent there only bt none spoke even a single word finnaly gouri opens her eyes all rush to her except raghav she says kalpi beta mera chintu kaha hai ya she remembered everything now... kalpi was happy tat raghav got his mom back ... she says mom he is here pointing towars him ... she opens her arm and he came and hug her... and both cry ... and raghav says mom mai ne apko bahuth miss kiya .. all are watching this silently kalpi was very happy see both of them happy... she says mom apka bete milgaye tho tum hame bhulgaye kya.gouri: thume kaise bhul sakthi hoo mai... thum sare log mere bache ho .. aur ye chintu meri jaan hai.
abhi says mom hamebi hug karlijiye ham bhi wait kar rahe hai.. gouri calls all of them all hugs her while hugging raghav places his hand on kalpi's sholder...
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 12:
all hug to gouri and all happy raghav places his hand around kalpi's sholder she was happy bt feels sad by thinking he hates me... abhi sees this and says chalo ab so jaayenge subha bahuth kaam hai. raghav says mom today i want to sleep here only mom..
ahil says mom we to want to sleep here only.
giuri:nahi ahil thum charo yaha nahi so sakthe jao apne kamreme jakar so jav kal se prepration start hoga tho bahuth kam hoga aur sab kuch thum charonko hi karna hai tho aj ek din aaram karlo.. aur aise bhi mai mere beteke sath kuch akele wakth bithana chahathi hoo.. all agrees..
gouri to kalpi:kalpi thu bi jaa beta dusre kamreme so jaa..
yesh:mom sare kamre ful hai.
gouri:theek hai thu abhi ke kaMmreme jake so jaan kalpi..jyada der tatk bath math karna subaha use kam hai.. go now abhi saya chalo kalpi..
raghav thinks how could mom allow her to sleep in abhi's room no ill nt leave this to happen..
raghav:mom kalpi yahi so sakthi hai mom muje koi prblm nahi hai..
gouri thinks and says theek hai thum charo jao kalpi yahi rahegi.
both kalpi and raghav sleeps on gouri's lap one side rag and other side kalpi with her eyes close so that she cant see him.. she thinks use dekhe muje kya ho jaata path nahi... i feel something wn he is around me ..bt he not even want to see at me.he thinks im low cls.
raghav was just seeing kalpi with his full eyes open.
gouri asks him abt how hw spent these years he explains everything. then gouri asks how u knw kalpi?? raghav says mom mai jab kapoor ke ghar me tha tab se jantha hoo ise.. kalpi was happy tat he remember their childwood..he did not say abt her job in his office kalpi thought for a while and says mom vo mai inke office mai kam karthi hoo...
gouri: kya?? thum yaha kam karthi hoo? acha hai na.
kalpi fel sleep within some time gouri made her to sleep correctly and she to getting sleep bt for raghav she not slept.. raghav observs tat his mom getting sleep bt for him nt sleeping so he only pretented as he is sleeping.. then gouri make him to sleep properly and sleeps... raghav thinks kithnaa acha hai mai kalpi aur mom hamesha ek sath rehena chayiye.. then only he hear someones footsteps.. he was abt to get up bt gouri got up and says to the person who enters the room
gouri:aa gaye thum ..muje patha tha abhi thum avoge..yes its abhi.
raghav thinks ye is wakth yaha kya kar raha hai aur mom bi kya puch rahi hai... he just acted as he slept bt thode anke kolke sab kuch dekh raha tha.
abhi goes to kalp~' side puts her head on his lap aur uske sar par hath raktha hai.. raghav thinks what the hell this abhi doing... how dare he..
gouri:patha tha tum avogi muje aur kalpi ko dekne bachpan ke aadath nahi gaye hai abi tak.
abhi:mom wt to do i want to see u both happy always.ek bar deke bina muje neend nahi atha.mom dekh na kalpi kithni aramse so gayi hai bina kuch dar ke bina kuch tension ke.. mai use aise hi dekna chahathi hoo hamesha par mom deko na vo hamare sunthi hi nahi... to be continued ...
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 13:
abhi continues .. saying mom deko na use kya kami hai ham char uskeliye kuch karnekeliye thayar hai par vo.. see mom 20% of my earning is reserved for her and ahil ahil bhi 20% uske nam pe bank me raktha hai and kt bhi uska 20% paise kalpi ke naam kar diya hai.. aur ham log uske liye mumbai me ek ghar bi karid liye hai par vo kuch nahi lena chahati hamse.. ek assistant ki kam kar rahi hai thumare bete ki company me.
gouri:kya assistan3?abhi says ha mom.. thum tho samjav use..
raghav was listening all and thinks how much they all care abt kalpi and even after having all this y she is tolerating me my angry my taunts.
gouri thinks for a while and says tho yehi hai vo raghav jiske naam lekar thum kalpi ko sathate the aur jiske nam sunthe hi kalpi sharmathi thi!.?
abhi:mom apko kaise patha .. gouri says ma hoo thum sabke aur mai kush hoo abhi ki kalpi jise pyar karthi hai vo mere beta hai.
raghav was shocked to hear this he thinks kalpi mujse pyar karthi hai...
abhi:mom kuch bi pehele jaise nahi hai raghav kalpi ko hate kartha hai vo usse theek se bath bi nahi kartha aur hamesha dantthe rehethe hai.aur vaise bhi raghav paki se pyar kartha hai.
gouri:paki ?vo paki jisne meri bachi ka kushi chinli hai vo??
abhi:ha mom jab mumbi gaya tha tat muje patha chala aur maine kalpi ko kehe diya ki vo uske bareme na soche par vo tho hamesha uske bareme sochthi hai.
raghav was in tears tat kalpi thinks he hates her and he loves paki he thinks kuch bi karke mai samjadoonga use ki mai sirf us se pyar kartha hoo..
gouri says ye nahi ho sakta kal subha hi mai raghav se bath karoongi.
abhi:mom ap aisa kuch nahi karenge mai nahi chahatha hoo ki tumhare kehene se raghav kalpi ko apna le..mai use aise admi ke sath nahi dekh sakta jo use nafrath kartha hai.
gouri:theek hai mai kuch nahi kahoongi
abhi:tho mom gud night so jayiye mai bhi jaatha hoo and he left from there..

precap:all went for shoping...
Edited by mounishree - 11 years ago
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