Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on new thread(24th Nov)

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: WhiteQueen
me 1st update pe update kya baat hai Vish res ;)

Tune yeh story padi b hai jo res kr ri h?? Lagta h tu b res queen banane ki koshish m h.😆

🤗 hows u btw??

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: eishe10
Very interesting updates!! Continue soon😊

Thank u.. Will try to continues asap.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: chahat4u
OMG double update! 😃 So Pakhi was the devil one, so evil to hurt her own mother! 😲 Prem's happiness was so infectious, the guy is so happy and so different from his sister! hope he has a family of his won soon! 😃 Did Pakhi scare away Maria? Its sad to see Raghav getting the shock of his life one day, when he gets to know Kalpi was behind it. I love Kalpi-Prem friendship, truly the best of friends. U r too good with mysteries. 😃👏 Sammy is such a good friend, hope he and Kalpi soon join hands to defeat the real culprit. 😊

Thank u dear for liking it... M just trying my hands on writing.😊

Prem is a strong support for Kalpi here and circumstances have made them so close but her sister is truly evil so let's see whether he is strong enough to punish his sister or not. But, i am planning RPem-Maria reunion soon.

To know about Maria and her disappearance.. u have to wait for 2-3 updates.

Sammy is smarter than Rags n he will surely has some more role in the story.😊

ur comments makes me super happy as I am an open admirer of ur writing skills.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: vasishna
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Heyyllooo vish.. Hw r u..??? Hope u r dng well with ur exams..
Nw u r back with a banggg dat too with double damakedhar updates..
Both d updates r superrr intrestngg.. I jus love ur ideas u use in d ff whether it may be to take revenge or fr a good moments..
And from d strtng I was gng on thinking dat sumhw pakhi ll be involved in it.. bt here she d main culprit! Sumhw my doubt got true Lol.. and nw prem s gonna get his happiness soon..n raghav working under kalpi.. well dats good to read..
And d main thing s kalpi has noticed d secret room of raghav.. I wanna see kalpi's reactn wen she ll get know abt dat room..
And thnk you so much fr d double updates dear..

Hi... M fine!! Exam preparation r not going well.. Still trying to concentrate on studies.

Neways i was waiting for ur comment... Glad u did.😊

Thank u for liking the stories n ideas as well... I knew everyone had the doubt on Pakhi.. She is involve in the crime.

Do u think Raghav has enough patience to work under someone.. Prem will surely find Maria soon.

Kalpi will enter that room but bit late as I want Kalpi to first realize that Raghav is innocent and then enter the room to clear all the confusions. 😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: snacky
awesome

Thank u

Originally posted by: ragnaareangel
Both the updates were fab

Thank u dear.

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Fabulous updates👍🏼

Thanks Tannu,

Originally posted by: sunyy
Omg did paakhi fake sleeping with rags and have fake pregnancy adopting Maria and prems child. Continue soon

Will try to update soon...Can't comment on Pakhi., Khushi or maria's child as it will reveal the secret.

Originally posted by: Saanjh26
wonderful update. I hope kalpana gets to know that Raghav is innocent

Thank u dear... Kalpi will know about it soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: Anjinie
shame on Paakhi she did not even spare her own mother, and she using an innocent child in her game, hope maria comes forward unless Paakhi is threatening her, looking forward to the next update to see how Prem and Kalpi move neetu without anyone knowing

Pakhi dint even spare her mother in the show so I just made her little more evil. Maria will meet Prem soon and it will reveal the reason of her disappearance and the child issue as well.

Neetu will shift to her new place in next update.

Thank u for reading the story.. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow lovely updates dear😳
oh im sure now pakhi is behind everything..
rags seeing kalpi and prem..lo one more shock of the day is ready for him...
plz continue soon dear

Thank u Sharan..I am happy to know that u liked the updates.

Pakhi is evil here...

Rags all torture will end soon as i think it's high time he knows everything that happened with Kalpi. I will try to update as soon as possible.🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: Rubz1234
Too good yaa vish kya writer ho...Maria didn't have an abortion n prem been so happy ...kalpi prem friendship... Pehle baar kissi story main I like prem... N kalpi -rags eyelocks... N kya beti hai pakhi hurting her mom...too good vish waitin for d next update...

Thank u Rubz... M glad u likin it. Will try to update soon.

Prem is a true frn in this story till now... Don't know about the future but u guys r liking him so i am planning to let him b positive.😊

Thanks for ur comments.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Vish, I'm so very sorry. I had gone to goa with my buddies and while I was there my phone stopped working. So couldn't read the updates. Now I'm checking all ffs one by one and commenting. I sort of reserved yours for the last ones , I admit. Because I need a clear mind to read yours. I read it now and it's fantabulous ( fantastic and fabulous at the same time). I'm right as always 😛 It's Pakhi, yippee! I just knew it, Miss Goody two shoes has to be fake. She will never be good. I'm loving this vicious Kalpi more and more. So ruthless! What a drama she did for her entry into Singhania house. Where has Sheetal vanished? Kalpi felt sorry for Pakhi without knowing her being the real culprit. I think Khushi is Prem's daughter with Maria. That Khi is capable of anything, I tell you. Who else will make her own mother mad to hide your heinous crime? I know she doesn't have any feelings for Neetu, but she's still her mom. Felt happy for Prem. It's the first time I'm liking him in an ff. Hope Maria is innocent too. Now that Kalpi knows there's something fishy about Pakhi I hope she keeps an eye on her. The only person I feel bad for is Sammy. Poor guy, he's a loyal friend. I hope he doesn't suffer much. Waiting for Rags reaction on seeing Kalpi and Prem together. Just one question, since when has Kalpi started calling him Rags? Or is it you? Anyways I loved it...I loved it...mwaah! How's your studies going on? Hope you are doing great!

On not finding ur comment I knew that u were busy.. i always look forward ur comments as i know the wait will be worth. I hope u read it in last coz u like it n not coz it's confusing... Well just kidding. M glad u gave ur time to read it.

M happy that u liked it. Yes.. u were right.. It's Pakhi. She can't be as good as showed. Kalpi needs to be like this only to defeat her enemies as we have already seen how cunning they are. Kalpi has started thinking viciously but her heart dint change.. she still cares about the innocent people hence she is feeling sorry for Pakhi but once she will know about the real culprti she won't leave her.

Pakhi is capable of anything.. Though while starting this story i dint knew that she will be -ve in the show but here i always thought her as obsessive.

Prem and Maria are going to meet soon to reveal their story. I hope u will like them.. After all Kalpi is surrounded by the boys only... she needs a girl to understand her feelings.

Sammy is still in the story so don't worry about him... he will find peace soon.

Sor rags reaction u have to read next part.

Kalpi dint call him Rags.. it's my laziness so instead of Raghav i wrote Rags.

Studies are not going good but trying to improve it.😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Kalpi is so obsessed with her revenge against Raghav that she can't see his love for her
I like how slyly she pretend to sell her apartment to "save" Raghav home
Aww Khushi is so happy to see he aunt :)
I'm feeling sorry for Raghav, I no whatever happen to Kalpi was sad but Raghav is equally punished as well. I hope the reunite ;)
Pakhi is the main culprit, I was shocked that Kalpi didn't find it weird when Pakhi dropped the glass upon hearing Sheetal name
Omg! She is so desperate that she is hurting her own mother
At least Kalpi know she is behind that
Awww Prem is so happy that his baby is alive. I bet it's Khushi ;)
Superb updates I love it

Exactly... Kalpi is so obsessed that she can't see anything else than revenge.. She is hurt so badly that she is not ready to believe that Rags can be innocent.. Pretty fair from her part as she lost everything just coz of Rags... After all she saw him n Pakhi together in the bed.

Kalpi find it weird but she still can't think that dumb Pakhi can pplan so much. But she is not completely blind.. She figured out Pakhi is behind her mother's illness and shared it with PRem.. Soon she will start doubting Pakhi as well.

Raghav has suffered enough so it's time for him to know something regarding the mishap happened with Kalpi.

Thank u for liking it... No comments on Khushi.😊