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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelk1

ok aanchal57 i understand your statement but there's no place in the world where females and males dont cheat. and i mostly do my stories based on real life situations. also i haven't gone into details yet, but i will tell you this the concept of raghav is to make kalpi life miserable enough for her to divorce him but as you can see his plan is not working.

neetu showed the surprise she was talking about which was bra and underwear. after their little date she surprise him with it in his room when he was changing. yah he was going to romance her but he kept thinking about kalpi and he was gonna stop when kalpi knock on the door. aah! i hate going into details when i haven't even upload the story yet. So when kalpi saw him with neeta she automatically assume they did something. a lot of males and females assume the worst when they see a situation like that, but i will say again, raghav didn't do anything, how can he when he kept thinking about what kalpi would think. his conscious wouldn't let him.

But i love the fact that everyone assume they did something. i love the suspense lol.


Thanks 4 reply..nd ur brief note cleared my doubts...
Sry if I hurt by my post..I m still child 4 these matters so how much I knw acc 2 dat I commented.. ur dis note relaxed me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear. They don't know they have already fallen for each other. Hope with time ragna realises their feelings
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update and teaser
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome teaser. plz update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 10


Scene 1

Kalpi was in the blacony thinking about raghav when Neetu close the door on her. She smiles to herself while looking at kalpi "I will show you whose the boss in this house." she says before closing the blinds and walking away. Raghav came out of his room completely dressed for his date, he walk to the living room and saw neetu then he looks for kalpi calling her name. " kalpi,kalpi" he says, making neetu tense.

"ah.. Raghav were going to be late,lets go." she says eagerly

" ok, let me just give kalpi her work to do then we leave." he says

" its fine raghav, just write it down and when she comes she will read it." she says, Raghav sighs and writes down the stuff he wants her to do then he left with neetu.

Elsewhere, Kalpi was still thinking about raghav when she heard thunder. Scared she turns around to go back in.She push the door to open it, but it was locked.Scared she taps and knock on the door to get someones attention, but no one came. Soon she heard thunder in the sky follow by lightning then it started to rain soaking her shirt and whole body.

Scared she walk to the corner and sat down,When she heard the thunder she covered her ears and puts her head down. She shivers and cries while calling someone to help her while the rain continues to soak her.


Scene 2
IT was two o'clock am when raghav came home with a drunk neetu, she smiles at him and touch his face saying" I will see you later " then he watches her stumble back to her room. He smiles and walk towards it to get some fresh air. when he opens it he steps out taking in the air and sighing. he staid for a while thinking about kalpi, just when he was about to leave he heard a noise. Quickly he turns around to see kalpi lying there on the floor. Quickly he ran to her shaking and calling her name, when she didnt respond he lift her up and took her to the guest room, laying her on her bed. Then he calls his family docter to come and check her out.

When the docter arrives he looks at kalpi and check her temperture, then he turns to raghav and says " Sir your wife is fine, shes just sick." he said,before subscribing him some medicine to give her. "Thank you docter." he says before the docter leaves. He looks at kalpi and says " you know you cause me a lot of trouble.But i dont know why i cant stop worrying about you."

He went and took a rag then dump it in hot water, he squeeze the water out and puts it on her head. He realize her clothes were wet and the only way to change her into new one is to remove her from it. Blushing maddly he leans his face close to hers watching her to make sure she doesnt open her eyes. Slowly he removes her saree, just when he was about to get it of her she opens her eyes, making them have an eye lock. Neither one of them could move, Raghav accidently press a button on the remote that he forgot was on the bed, and the song Jeena Laga Hoon starts playing.

Kalpi broke the eye contact when she realize she was half naked, she glares at him and cover her self with her duppatt "What are you doing?" she asks, Raghav backs away and says "I was just removing your saree." he said realizing what he just said was wrong. kalpi was disturb by this she got up and felt very dizzy, Raghav seeing her falling foreward caught her before she hits the floor. Both of their hearts beating fast, and the song jeena laga hoon continues to play. Kalpi slowly looks at him and realize her duppatt was on his face, Raghav still holding her watch as she tries to pull her duppatt. Still looking at her he grabs her duppatt, shocking kalpi. Raghav knew his hands were on top of hers but he didnt care at the moment.

He slowly guide her hands with his down while pulling the veil,Neither one of them braking the contact. once it was removed kalpi removes herself from him and cover herself.

"Get out" she says

"excuse me?" he says still in daze

"I said get out" she says again this time turning away from him, Raghav got angry hearing her command him. He grabs her harshley and pulls her back to him,Making her wince in pain "Just because we're married doesnt give you the right to say or do what you like. Your forgetting this house is all mine, only i make the rules." he said

"This might be your house Sir but I'm your wife,I have my rights too." she says slowly

Raghav shakes her making her dizzy then he says "your right, you have right and that rights is to obey and do what ever i tell you." he says then says" your lucky I dont hit females or you would have been punished for insulting me." he says before dropping her making her hit the floor. just when he was about to leave kalpi says" your very heartless sir, you dont care about anyone but yourself." she says then starts crying

Raghav stop when he heard what she said, he was heart broken but he quickly change that to anger.


Scene 3

Raghav went in his room still upset about kalpi, He started taking his clothes off not realzing that neetu was in the bathroom waiting for him to appear. He was only in his boxers when his bathroom door open and neetu steps out with her new bra and underwear.Raghav was surprise to see her like this, she walks towards him seductively and touch his shoulders and abs. He wasnt feeling it because he was still upset with kalpi but he knew what neetu was offering would take his mind of kalpi. He let neetu drag him to the bed and push him down then he let her get on top of him. "Do you like your new gift raghab-baby?" she says

"Yes i do, you pick a nice choice." he says before flipping her over, getting on top of her. He carress her face and was about to kiss her when he saw kalpi. He was taken back, he watch her smile and says"are you that upset with me that you will sleep with her." she said
Raghav shook his head and look at neetu, He could see the confusion in her eyes. she looks at him and says"whats wrong raghav?why did you stop?"

" its nothing to worry about." he says before continueing what he was doing. He was about to kiss her and romance her when kalpi appear again "I know you hate me raghav,but if you do this you will be commiting a sin." she says with tears in her eyes, Raghav out of frustration got up and sat down. He knew this was his consious telling him to stop and he was glad he did, but at the same time upset with himself.

Elsewhere, kalpi stopped crying when she saw the medicine on the bed, she realize that raghav must have been worried about her. "he must have been the one who found me outside." she says then says"I have to thank him.", She got up changing into something comfortable then she left the room heading to raghav's room. When she reached their she knock on the door, surprising raghav and neetu. Both of them look at each other and raghav got up to open the door, when he did he was surprise to see kalpi.

"What is it?" he says,making her nervous she blush and avoid looking at his bare chest.

"I came to thank you."she says, making raghav upset somemore

"What is this gods way to punish me, how many time will you appear infront of me."he says confusing kalpi, she was about to say something else when he cut her of " seriously why cant you leave me alone." he says still thinking his consious was playing with him.

Kalpi was taken back she was just gonna thank him, she didnt think he was still upset. Ignoring what he said before she was about to thank him when she heard neetu voice. She saw neetu walking towards raghav with only her undergarment.

"what do you want?" says neetu then she adds "cant you see we're busy." she says touching raghav shoulder while smirking. She knew what was going on it doesnt take a genius to put two and two together. She was heart broken and raghav knew it. she watch both of them for a while until she couldnt take it anymore. Not looking back she ran away from them, raghav tried to run after her but neetu held him back. "what are you doing raghav? Let her go" she says, Raghav could only watch as kalpi ran away from him.

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Scene 1:Raghav for some reason was upset, he hasn't seen kalpi for four days, every time he wakes up, and he sees the house clean and so is everything else. Not only that breakfast and dinner would be prepared. She has been locked up on the rooftop for four days now; she made sure she brought a lock to lock the roof so no one would come up there. "Why do I feel guilty" he says to himself

Scene2: Raghav sees sammy and kalpi together and got jealous. He thought to himself, So kalpi wouldnt let me see her but she would let sammy. he thought angry

Scene 3: Kalpi was playing with the kids at the park when raghav saw her, soon it started to rain, Raghav imagine himself playing with kalpi in the rain, but neetu soon shook him removing him from his day dream. "what are you looking at raghav?" she says turning to where he was looking. she could see kalpi and sammy running to find shelter, she smirks and looks at raghav"Dont they make a cute couple?" she asks upsetting raghav

Scene 4: Kalpi came in the house and saw the balcony open, she walk to it to close it when she saw raghav watching the shooting star passing by. She was about to leave when she heard raghav voice" I LOVE YOU KALPI" he says surprising her
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update!!!! Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really good update. Waiting for next update. Pls don't take so long this time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm very busy now getting ready for school. And my computer is very slow that's why I haven't been writing any stories. Also I'm going through difficult times, so when ever I can write I will
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
I want to strangle that Neetu. Raghav taking care of Kalpi was amazing
I love that little moment that they shared together before hell break loose lol
Raghav imagining Kalpi everytime he goes to kiss that bitch was awesome lol
I love the entire update
All the best for the new school term. I hope things get better for you soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update!!!
continue soon😊

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