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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Nyc part...
Oho why does Rags always have to be a jerk? Gud thing Kalpi ignores him...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
awesome update...😳...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Please update dear Waiting for ur next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Great update..Uff this Raghav's ego!!!😡Continue soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Whts is the need of raghav nd neeta bold scenes..??
Nd kalpi cant use 2nd hand guy..plz dont want ur these scenes in other ffs...sry if i hurt bt a wife never 4give a guy who do such things wid another lady...
I hope u understand my pov
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Ok do no problem bt den I want kalpi have these bold scenes wid a guy ..I m frankly telling u
In India if a guy does this no 1 say a single word bt when girl do den characterless name is given..
If raghav shd taught a lesson den do kalpi bold scenes wid other guy...frankly tell me if ur bf or hubby does dis ll u 4give him..??
Sry frm bottom if my heart bt I m the type of girl if anyone exploit/fool/use a girl I can't tolerate...Deir is no 4givness of sins...I hope u understood my pov
Edited by aanchal57 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Oh no it is over😭 Am loving this story. Concept reminds me of gustakh dil. 😊
Oh rags is such an ass to kiss her then sleep with ...😡
Kalpi is one confused soul, can't make out if she is falling for him or not. I know she has accepted him as a husband, but does she want him for herself.
Would love for you to delve into their emotions and thoughts, esp Kalpi, the girl has to be experiencing a lot.
I like tht she is strong and faces things head on.
Thank u for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
ok aanchal57 i understand your statement but there's no place in the world where females and males dont cheat. and i mostly do my stories based on real life situations. also i haven't gone into details yet, but i will tell you this the concept of raghav is to make kalpi life miserable enough for her to divorce him but as you can see his plan is not working.
neetu showed the surprise she was talking about which was bra and underwear. after their little date she surprise him with it in his room when he was changing. yah he was going to romance her but he kept thinking about kalpi and he was gonna stop when kalpi knock on the door. aah! i hate going into details when i haven't even upload the story yet. So when kalpi saw him with neeta she automatically assume they did something. a lot of males and females assume the worst when they see a situation like that, but i will say again, raghav didn't do anything, how can he when he kept thinking about what kalpi would think. his conscious wouldn't let him.

But i love the fact that everyone assume they did something. i love the suspense lol.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Teaser for chapters coming soon


kalpi was packing her things to leave the house, she couldn't stay there anymore. she had tolerated everything but now she will not stand for this. she remembered all the suffering she's been thru, her mother in law insults, raghav not believing her and her losing Rani. everything was too much, for her. she quickly wrote a note and quietly walk out the house so raghav wouldn't hear her. once she was out she walk to the nearest bus stop heading back to her village.

Raghav woke up the next day, thinking kalpi was sleeping right next to him. he reached his hand to pull her closer, but he only felt the bed sheet. opening his eyes he looks at the spot where she usually sleeps when he didn't find her he started panicking. he quickly got up heading to the bathroom to see if she was there, when he didn't find her he walks downstairs thinking she might be making breakfast, he called her name but their was no response. just when he was about to go upstair the doorbell rang. he walk towards it and the mail man gave him his mail.

once he got it he look over them, he saw a letter that says lawyer on it. he opens it and reads it. while reading it his hands started shaking. he threw the paper on the floor and hit anything that was next to him. he didn't care if his hand was bleeding, the pain in his heart was to much for him to bare. falling on the floor he cried, shouting her name out loud. gauri hearing some noise went downstairs to see raghav on the floor, his hands bleeding and he was shouting kalpi name over and over.

" raghav, what is it." she asks when raghav didn't say anything she saw the letter raghav had and quickly snatch it. she quickly reads it, once done she was also shock but happy at the same time.
she puts the letter down and told raghav to go up stairs and take care of his hand. he didn't get up at first but then did when his mom said it again. once he got in his room, he was about to lay down on the bed when a note fell in front of him. he pick it up and was about to put it on the table when he saw his name. he unfold the note and reads it.

Dear Raghav,

I'm sorry i have to leave you. I just can't live this life anymore, when i lost rani thats when i made my decision. i thought you would believe me when i said i didn't murder our daughter, but you didn't. you insulted me so much, but i still stayed with you because i love you. yes raghav i realise now how much i love you. I thought you had change but after Rani died you went back to your old ways. I know you don't really hate me, you only said that to hide your pain and suffering. you can't let go just like how i can't forget her. It was hard for me to do this especially filling out the divorce papers, but this is for the best, after all this was your plan in the first place. Now you are free, you don't have to worry about me anymore, you can live the life i took from you. while reading the note, raghav saw a wet spot on the next line, he knew kalpi was crying. he puts his hands on the spot, it was still wet, he rubs it of and puts it on his forehead. tears starting to rise from his eyes, clogging his vision. he quickly wiped it away and continues reading the note.

please don't look for me, even if you do i won't come back to you. lastly, don't do anything crazy. and please forget about me.
raghav sat on the bed and cries. then he says " how can i forget about you when you already contaminated my mind. everywhere i turn and everything i touch reminds me of you." he says😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update my dear! I am loosing my patience!

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