Hamare Pagala Bevakupha Pyara RagNa

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Yanci

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Posted: 11 years ago

ok so i wanted to write a story about the wedding promo where they showed kamla bringing paki out the same time shayl brings kalpi out. i forgot the name of the promo. what i thought would happen didn't happen so i decided to write my own story on that promo ,so i hope you like it 😊

Chapter 2 is here its a little bit rated i felt very embarrassed while doing this so dont kill

me.

Chapter 3 on page 2

Chapter 4 on page 3

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Yanci

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was the day of Raghav and kalpi marriage. Everyone was excited, especially kalpi. She couldn't believe that after so long, she and Raghav will be married. She looks at her guest and family enjoying purvi and Arjun Dancing, than she looks at the two couple from her balcony with envy. She hopes that one day she and Raghav would be as happy as them.

Shayl looks at kalpi and says "you look so beautiful kalpi. Raghav will be so happy to see you." She said making kalpi smile. Gunjan walks in the door and saw kalpi. She smiles

"Waw kalpi, you look amazing."

"thanks gunjan-didi, by the way gunjan, have you seen Ai anywhere?"

"No, no one has seen her." she says

"Thank you gunjan." she says

Where could Ai be? Would she really miss my wedding day? She thought worriedly.

"Ok kalpi, its time. Raghav is waiting." Said Shayl

Looking sad kalpi let Shayl take her downstairs. Just when she was half way there, kalpi saw Kamla walk in with Pakhi wearing her bride outfit. She was smiling and looking at paki lovingly. Raghav stood up, and so did everyone else. They were surprise just like kalpi.

Sammy mom whispers to Sammy "I thought Raghav bride was kalpi?"

"she is, but I don't know what's going on." he says confuse himself

Kamla brought paki closer to Raghav, upsetting vitthal. He walks towards Kamla and looks at her than he says "what is the meaning of this Kamla?"

Kamla smiles" paki is getting married to Raghav." she said making paki smile

"are you crazy Kamla, the one getting married is not paki."

"Yes it is, Raghav loves paki. I even gave my consent to their marriage."

Raghav hearing this says "no Kamla, the one I asked for was your daughter kalpi." he says

Kamla look at the stairs and saw kalpi in her wedding outfit. Just like her she was also in shock.

"you can't marry kalpi Raghav." she says hurting kalpi

"Why cant I? I love her and I've mentioned it so many times."

"I'm sorry Raghav, if you can't marry paki than this marriage is off." she says

"No! I will decide who our daughter marries and if she loves Raghav than the wedding is still on." he says

"Vitthal, how can you let this happen when Pakhi is in love with him?" she says hurt

"Paki is no daughter of mine, so I don't care." He says

"You might not, but I do. I've raised paki since she was a baby. Her happiness comes before my own." She says

"Then what about her own? Does her happiness not matter?" he says angrily

Kamla looks at kalpi, who looks at her with hope in her eyes. Then she looks at paki who looks about ready to cry. Kamla didn't know what to do; she thought kalpi was in love with Sammy this whole time, that's why she agreed to her wedding. But paki came to her first and told her that she wants to marry Raghav. I can't disappoint her, I'll have to make a decision now, and hopefully she won't hate me. She thought

"It does" she said making paki tears come out.

"But, I accepted paki proposal first. So I can't let this marriage happen." She says

Kalpi felt disappointed. Once again Ai, you showed me my happiness is not important. She thought turning away from the scene.

"Are you mad Kamla? I will not let you ruin our daughter's happiness for paki."

"You don't understand vitthal. Paki is my sweet angel. She's the daughter I've never had." She says surprising her self. She looks at where kalpi was seeing the tears running from her eyes.

Everyone was shocked even paki. Kalpi walk down the stairs and walk to Kamla. She looks at her with tears in her eyes. Than she says "I'm sorry I was a burden to you. Since you don't consider me as your daughter, I should just disappear." She said.

Kamla tried to explain to kalpi but it was too late. Kalpi not wanting to hear anything Kamla has to say ran away from the place. Raghav seeing this ran after her hoping to catch her.

Scene 2

She ran as fast as her leg could take her, not caring about where she was going, with Raghav right behind her. They both ran for a while until kalpi stop at the temple.

She climbs the steps and collapse when she made it to the top, than she started crying.

Raghav seeing her like that walks to her. He puts his arms around her tightly then he grabs her chin. So she could look at him.

With tears in her eyes she says "Ai don't love me Raghav. I thought by getting good grades and toping my exam would make her care. But she doesn't care." She said

Raghav wipes her tears and says "I'm sure she's just confuse right now, kalpi."

Shaking her head she says "no Raghav, you didn't see it in her eyes. She made her decision, who she wanted and it wasn't me." She says

Than she looks down "I don't think I can ever for get this day Raghav."

"Instead of forgetting this day, I will make you remember it." He says

Looking confuse kalpi replies "what do you mean Raghav?"

He smiles at her and says "I love you and I want to marry you. Let's do this here at the temple."He says grabbing her hand and walking to the priest. He asked the priest to start the ritual and he did. They went around the fire and than he put the sindoor on her forehead.

"This sindoor is the sign, of our love kalpana. This day will be remembered as

The day, you start your new life as Mrs. Singhania he says making her smile.

Scene 3

Vitthal walks to Kamla and slaps her, shocking everyone for the second time.

"How can you say that about your own daughter?" he says

"Is this your way of teaching her to be strong?" he yells

Shayl and gunjan walks to vitthal when he was ready to hit Kamla again

"Vitthal, please come down." Says Shayl

"How can I, when my daughter is suffering out there." He says

Kamla was shock that vitthal slapped her, she wanted to tell him how sorry she was and also that she didn't mean it, but decides to keep quiet. She looks at paki who looks like she was about to cry than she looks at her guests. Realizing how stupid she was for embarrassing herself and her family. She blushes and apologizes to the people that came.

So after Kamla little embracement, everyone turned to leave, when Raghav walks in with kalpi. She drops her duppat from her hair and made everyone see her sindoor.

To be continue...

Chapter 2

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Roshna

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Posted: 11 years ago

vip res😆

unresed...

me first

your story is awesome buddy. I wish some thig like this had happened in ema. but cvs😡🤬 continue soon dear

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome start...just loved it...please continue soon..

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aggarwalrachna

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Posted: 11 years ago

continue ...it ...awesome story..looks interesting...😛⭐️

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Yanci

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 2

The scene starts with Raghav and kalpi walking in the chowl and everyone stopping to see them.

Scene 1

Kalpi removes her duppat showing her sindoor on her head. Raghav hands in hers they walk to vitthal.

"What is this kalpi?" Says Kamla

Kalpi ignores her mom and both of them walk to vitthal. Vitthal looks upset for a

different reason. He was upset that they got married without him.

"You could have waited kalpi." He says

"I know baba but I love Raghav I wasn't gonna let anyone stop me." She says

Vitthal signs and says "well as long as you're happy then I'm happy."

"I won't accept this marriage." Says Kamla

"Why not? There already married so give it up Kamla." Says vitthal

"How can I when, our daughter is married to someone that's already taking."

"Taken? The only one I'm taken by is kalpi Kamla, no one else." He says

Kamla walks to kalpi and says "please beta, take it back. This marriage is hurting a lot of people." She says

"Like who?" says gunjan making Kamla turn to her

"Like paki." She says looking at paki in the corner crying.

"I wont take it back Ai, because this is the proof of our love." She says

Kamla walks away from them and went to paki. She tried to talk to her but she only walk away. Not knowing what to do, Kamla went to her home.

Scene 2

Vitthal and everyone else were happy for the couple, they danced and take pictures. After words Raghav told vitthal that they have to go.

"So soon?" He says

"I'm sorry papa, I will miss you." She says in tears

"Don't worry kalpana, I wont be far, you can always come visit me" He says emotional

He grabs her and hugs her. He didn't want to let her go but he knew he had to. Kalpana walks to kalpi and says "I guess this is It." he says making kalpi let go of vitthal and look at her brother.

"It won't be the end bhai, I will make sure I come visit." she says before hugging him.

After the hug kalpi looks at gunjan and Shayl and said her thanks then she looks at her balcony expecting to see Kamla but she was disappointed when she didn't.

"Let's go kalpi." Says Raghav, he pulls her to the car, while everyone watches them. As soon as they were gone vitthal walks away emotionally.

Meanwhile

Kalpi was sad that she's leaving her family. Raghav being a caring person put his hand on hers to calm her. She smiles and held on to it until they reached his house. Once they reached the place, Raghav got out of his car and made his way to kalpi side. He opens the door and picks her up bridle style. Then he Walks to the door and opens it. When the door was open kalpi could see the decorations in the house. Sammy mom walks from the kitchen and did the ceremony to kalpi. Once she walks in, they all smiles at her.

"Welcome to the family kalpi." She says making kalpi smile

"When did you get here?" she asked curious

"We left after you ran away from the wedding." She says

"Now, you and Raghav don't have to worry about anything else."

Sammy smiles at the two and says "should I start calling you Ms. Singhania instead of kalpi." He said

"Its fine Sammy, you can still call me kalpi." She said

Sammy pulls Raghav to the side and says "I made the arrangement you asked me to do. Everything is set." He says

"Thank you Sammy, for everything." He says

Sammy was going to reply when his mom said they have to go because she has something to do. Everyone said their goodbyes and left, Leaving kalpi and Raghav to themselves.

Scene 3

Kalpi was nervous; she didn't know how to act. Now that she and Raghav are married,

She felt more pressure on her. Raghav grabs kalpi hand and says "I'm so happy that you're with me kalpana." Making kalpi relax.

"I have a surprise for you." he says grabbing her hand and pulling her upstairs.

When they reached his room, he covers her eyes. As soon as he opens it he removes his hand from her eyes. Kalpi was surprise; His room was white and his bed was red. The white curtains on each side of the bed tied up. You could see flowers on the wall and her pictures with Raghav on each wall. In the center you could see a big poster of the beach at night, it was a 3D image. With the lights off it looks realistic. Candles and red petals were everywhere. In front of the bed was stairs. Raghav pressed a button and a Jacuzzi appeared. Kalpi could see the candles next to it and fruits. Also she could hear the bubbles coming from it. All she wanted to do now is just jump in there.

Raghav took out a red bikini blouse sari for her to wear and walk down stairs to get the wine, leaving kalpi alone to change into the outfit.

Raghav got the wine and glass. He was freaking out; he didn't know how to approach kalpi. He started passing around when his phone rang. He looks at it and picks it up.

"Was kalpi surprise about the gift?" He asked

"She was but I don't know what to do Sammy." He says

"I'm freaking out, kalpi is different. I've never met a girl like kalpi before." He says

"Raghav calm down, everything will be fine. You just have to stay in control; if you do then kalpi won't be nervous." He says

Meanwhile

Kalpi was in the bathroom, she played with her sari nervously. She knew this was it, this will make them become one, but she couldn't help herself. Picking up her phone she calls gunjan.

"Gunjan-didi you have to help me." She says

"What is it kalpi?"

"It's our wedding night and Raghav decorated the place beautifully." She says

"So what's the problem?"

"T... the thing is. He.. We..." she says embarrassed

"Oh... I get it." she says smirking on the phone

"You guys are moving on to the last step." She says smirking

"Don't worry about it kalpi just let him do everything and then you'll know what to do." She says

Kalpi calm down and listened to what gunjan said. She was glad she talked to someone about it. Gunjan is right she thought I just have to calm down. It's the same Raghav I love, nothing will happen. She thought taking a big breath.

Scene 4

After talking to Sammy Raghav hang up the phone. He took his wine and glass cup upstairs. When he reaches the door he took a big breath. He opens the door felt cold breeze coming thru. Did kalpana put the fan on? He thought

He walks in and saw kalpi in the sari he bought her, his breath was taken away. He puts the wine bottle and cup on the table and then walks towards her accidentally tripping on the remote and pressing the close button on the stereo playing the song Aashiq Banaya Aapne.

Raghav was a little embarrassed but he quickly ignores it when he saw kalpi walks in the Jacuzzi.

o o...

He walks in the Jacuzzi forgetting the wine. He comes closer to her and touches her cheek. Embarrassed kalpi shyly looks away.

Aashiq Banaya

He grabs kalpi face and turns it towards him, and then he kisses her. Kalpi hands going around his neck and legs going on his waist.

tere bin suni suni hain baahein

Raghav stops the kiss and pulls her sari down to her shoulder.

teri bin pyaasi pyaasi nigaahein

He kisses her neck and shoulder, and then he works his way back up to her mouth and kisses her passionately.

tere bin bin asar meri aahein

Kalpi was out of breath by the time he was done with her mouth. She had never been kissed like that before, so she was a little bit nervous. Am I doing this right? I hope I am.

She thought. When Raghav puts his tongue in her mouth she pushed him away. She didn't know why he did that. She left the Jacuzzi leaving him confuse.

tere bin

Did I do something wrong? He thought.

tere bin lamha lamha sataye

I guess I'll have to show her myself. He thought

tere bin bekarari jalaaye

He left the Jacuzzi and grabs kalpi, pinning her on the wall shocking her. Then He grabs one of her legs and told her to put it around his waist.

tere bin chain mujhko naa aaye

He puts one hand on the wall and the other on her face, kissing her again. He stops and whispers something in her ears and then puts his tongue in her mouth which kalpi did the same. They went at it for a while until kalpi removes her mouth from his to breath.

tere bin chain mujhko naa aaye

tere bin

They look at each other breathing hard. Kalpi could see the hunger in Raghav's eyes. She blushes when she saw him checking her out, making her feel warm inside.

meri nigaaho mein tera chehra rawaa hain

Raghav removes her sari at the top showing her black push up bra. Kalpi tried to put it back on when he grabs her hand and pins it to the wall.

gehre hain armaan jaane ja paagal samaa hain

He kisses her chest and made his way down to her stomach.

There he hugs her and puts his head on her stomach.

gehre hain armaan jaane ja paagal samaa hain

Kalpi smiles and hugs him, playing with his hair.

apni daayre se toh main chutne lagi hu

They staid like this for a while until Raghav got up.

He grabs her hand and pulls her to the Jacuzzi. There he sat her on the edge and fed her the grapes he bought.

tere baajuo mein aake tootne lagi hu

Kalpi ate it while looking at him. On her fifth grapes she stops him and boldly took the whipped cream and puts it in her mouth, than she kisses him shocking Raghav.

tere bin jeena nahi hain gawara

While kissing Raghav touches her back and puts her down, bringing her closer to him.

tere bin dil ka nahi hain gujara

he touches kalpi everywhere and even her butt, earning a noise from kalpi.

tere bin kaun apna sahaara

He than pick her up while kissing her. Kalpi hands still around his neck and her legs wrapped around his waist. He brought her to the bed and puts her down gently with her legs still wrapped around his waist. He took his shirt of slowly giving her a show.

aashiq banaya - 3 aapne

Kalpi blushes like crazy. Oh god, he's breath taking. She thought

bechainiyo ka faaslo ka silsila hain

Kalpi looks at his body; she wanted to touch it so bad. Deciding she flips him over surprising him once again. She got on top of him and kisses his neck, and then she grabs the whipped cream and pour it all over his body.

dardejigar ka yeh sabab hamko mila hain

Raghav didn't know what came over kalpi but he knew one thing, he likes it.

Smiling he watches kalpi lick the cream of his body. Then he felt her touching him all over. When she came back up, she blows in his ears and lightly bites it, Awakening, his friend down below.

betaabiyo ne hamko chur kar diya hain

pass aane pe majboor kar diya hain

Raghav quickly pins her to the bed, putting her hand over her head.

He watches her chest move up and down. He was itching to touch it.

pass aane pe majboor kar diya hain

Kalpi saw his hesitation, and gave him the push he needs by rubbing her leg on his friend. Raghav looks at kalpi and saw her innocent face. He quickly shook his head and thought there's no way kalpi would do that. Did I just imagine it? He thought

tere bin raat kat ti nahi hain

He was so busy thinking when he felt it again; he looks down at her and saw her innocent face. No I must be imagining it. He thought

tere bin pyas mit ti nahi hain

Raghav removes her blouse and kalpi stops him.

"Raghav wait!" she says pulling him of her.

"What is it kalpi?" he says frustrated

"I need water." She says

"Now" He said

She shook her head. He got of her and walks down stairs; he got the water and came back up.

tere bin duri ghat ti nahi hain

"Here" he says, watching her drink the water, half of it spilling on her mountains. He gulps. When she was done Raghav starts kissing her body. Kalpi was feeling nervous, she knew this was it but she just couldn't do it.

"Raghav wait!" she says making him stop once again

"What is it kalpana!" he says

"I need chocolate." She says

"Chocolate? Why now?" he asks

"I don't know, it helps me calm down." She says

Raghav signs and puts his clothes on then he walks out of the house to the nearest gas station and brought a chocolate bar for kalpi.

Mean while

"What's wrong with you kalpi? Raghav have been waiting for me forever. We're finally together why wont you take the next step." She says to her self

When Raghav walks back in he hands her the chocolate and she eats it, making some sounds that would provoke him. Raghav passionate was running out. He felt his friend twitching and for some reason getting more excited.

"Kalpana are you done?" he asks, when she nods her head he lay her back down on the bed.

Aashiq Banaya - 3 Aapne

Raghav massages her mountains until he got bored than he took the remaining of her sari off making kalpi cover her self with her hand. Raghav pulls her hands away from her body.

"Raghav wai-"she says before he covers her mouth with his.

"What happened to all that confidence you had before?" he asked

"It went out the window." She says half way up, Raghav didn't care anymore, and he was frustrated. He wasn't planning on stop because they came to this point and he needs her.

Aashiq Banaya - 3 Aapne

"I've waited long enough kalpana." He says before untying the curtains, making it fall on every edge of the bed, covering invisible eyes from seeing what they were about to do, and the song ending in the back ground.

To be continue...

Chapter 3

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Arpita

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update dear...this kamla😡😡😡kabhi bhi kalpi ko support nahi karegi...

Continue soon..

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Sevenstreaks

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome dear...i m just loving all ur stories😳

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Yanci

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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you everyone i realise you guys been commenting on all my fanfiction. thank you😊 keep commenting and showing your support. it makes me happy. and i'm writing chapter 3 of mera pagala gamva. i will post it shortly. i'm also working on qubool hai, sanam and ahil and also veera couples, with bladev and veera and gunjan and ranveer. i'm not good at writing romantic scenes so i hope you can forgive me for not meeting your standards.

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Sevenstreaks

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Posted: 11 years ago

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update soon dear "mera pagala gamva" 😳

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