The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
awsm charu jst lv it.
U potrayed rags n kalpi's feeling very well.
Fabulous update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: mimiunisha

res..

Chahat tu story likh rahi hai isliye res karke rakh rahi hu..
Zarur pahrungi..
Mimi aakhir Chahat se itnaa pyaar jo karti hai😃

Unres..

Chahat mai tujhe acchhi tarah se jaanti hu..
Smthng's fishy here.. Ragna alag ho jaayenge and isliye Rags darr raha hai.. Hai naa?
Waise dono update bohut acchhe the..👏 Khush kar diyaa..
Gouri and Kalpu wonderfulll..
But haa mujhe pata hai khichri pakane waali hai tu..
Do cont.. soon..
Luv ya..
Mimi..
Muaaahhh...😉


ha ha...thanks Mimi...sorry I missed out on your comment. Was waiting to read ur comment only, 😃

Waise dear..khichdi toh pakani hai, pehle confused thi pakau ya nahi, ya kaise pakau! 😆 Ya Biryani hi bana doon!LOL.😛 But I am hoping to bring out everything positively and happily. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: esingh90

What a story. It's truly is wonderful written. Please continue 😃


Your wonderful comment..short, sweet but made me happy.Thanks..hope u like it ahead too! fingers crossed! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sarusmiley

Charu i want more more more..

and u know i read ffs only on saturday but ur ff keeched me to read..and such a feel good one..n u know that i love the way u write with so much feel...lovely it is ...awesome u explained everything very well..🤗


Saru...🤗 I always wait for your feedback...Its lovely to receive it before Saturday! 😆😃 Thanks a ton. 😃 Hope I am able to maintain your interest ahead also! I am a bit scared! 😆😃 Thanks for liking it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

Lovely Update...do continue soon !!

Thanks for the PM 🤗


Thanks. 🤗 n no mention, 😃😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: drdee142

Wonderful update, please do continue & thanks for the PM


Thanks a lot for liking it. 😃 n no mention, 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: appyK

superb update tysm for pm..

continue soon


Thanks dear. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written update..👍🏼


Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Hi charu! I'm kiara. Wonderful update. You have written kalpi 's pov and raghav 's inner turmoil so well that I could imagine them in that room. Lovely update.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Beautiful. Magical. Pls update soon

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