The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 28

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

I'm typing for the third time now.Each time couldn't express my words correctly. So I deleted it. I'm writing again. Charu, what an update. I'm stunned. The whole update was romantic to the core. Starting with the massage session to their lovemaking. Awesome! Loved how they massaged each other. Kalpi's reaction when Raghav turned to face her was hilarious. Smart Mr.Singhania, the massage was his idea of making her bold and ready for the big thing. It really helped too. It made her understand his desires and hers better. She understood he is the balm to her pain, desires,everything. That made her bold enough to tell him that she's ready and tonight is the night. He couldn't be more happy. Her voice was music to his ears. Finally they became one in all aspects and their love binds them together forever. Amazing, was worth the wait. 🤗 Now go and celebrate Raksha bandhan with your brother. 😛

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Firstly i like the music in the background, it add that little extra special something to the update

The entire chapter was brilliantly written. I like how you describe everything.

Kalpi is truly an Angel who is lucky to have understanding and loving hubsband like Raghav and vice versa

Im lost of words to describe this chapter, it was picture perfect

So romantic, so real... I simply love it

Enjoy your time with you brother

Originally posted by: Anjinie

beautifully written, awesome

Originally posted by: Autumm

wow dear...juz wow..n wht wit the song...im blushing like hell now...crap!!!! n smiling in my room alone...oh oh!!! LOL...impresiv dear...really...☺️

update soon...

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

oh god..its awesome...

so romantic

cant express it loved a lot...

plz continue soon...

Originally posted by: riaka

Omg. Omg.😳😳simly awwwsome. Love this story.

Keep up the good work dear.👏👏👏

Originally posted by: AshVarna

WOW...Simply Awesome 👏

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Charuuu,❤️

I loved it.. I am most SATISFIED!! Ahem!!☺️☺️

Liked it so much..have to add pleej continue!! ☺️☺️

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Mini...🤗 ❤️ Thanks a lot for loving it. 😃 I was waiting for your feedback. 😃 I am glad and relieved that you are SATISFIED and happy now. 😃😆 Well, from next update things may not be as romantic in technical sense, as its twist time! But I'll try my best to include romance wherever possible. 😃 On your special demand, I'll try something! But no promise 😆 love you sooo much, 😃🤗 ❤️ thanks again for beautiful comment. 😃😊❤️

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

What twist time already!! nahi nahi... then I am not satisfied... you need more practice... plz continue your practice for another round...pleej...😉