The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u


🤗 It just happened! 😆😳 I had not meant to postpone SR for next update, but you know sometimes the little things before real thing are much more romantic! I was kinda lost in that romantic world.😆😛 n I do wanted to show like you said how Raghav is preparing Kalpi for the next level. Most Indian girls are very conservative and take their own sweet time to open up. But since Raghav & Kalpi are already in love Kalpi won't take much time. Because she already trusts and loves him. As for massage factor, at first I was wondering whether to show a boy or a girl for massaging Raghav. But then at the moment Kalpi needs to be jealous more than Raghav, so showed a girl. 😊 This somewhere reminded me of that kiss incident also. n Kalpi ended up easily agreeing to massaging him and also for allowing him to come so close to him. 😃

I was afraid of tomatoes this time as there was no SR still! 😆 Thanks for liking it.😃😊 I will try my best to update today. 😊😃

You are right, little romantic things do matter. It's a good thing that you showed Kalpi's jealousy instead of Raghav. It was necessary for her to open up.I was also lost in ragna world after reading the update. Loved it. No tomatoes for you , only this👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent writer. you have captured the emotions of 'the love birds' ! Missed reading due to lack of time but now , . More am free of all serial in Zee. More time now for my reading. Thanks for giving this beautiful story.
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres

mai kya bolun...i have gone speech less
arey jo bhi ata tha sab bol diya ab aur kya bolun???
kuch naye words sikhao na..praise karne waale...varna mujhe toh abse har update ke baad yehi bolna padega

"I AM SPEECHLESS."


Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really awesomely written... The only word that came on reading it was WOW...
You described the sr in a super romantic way... Loved it how instead of focusing on physical details you personified it... Just beautiful...
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update!!!! Wonderfully written and I am amazed as well. Continue soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter dear
full time blushing
very romantic update
love raghav care and understanding
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm typing for the third time now.Each time couldn't express my words correctly. So I deleted it. I'm writing again. Charu, what an update. I'm stunned. The whole update was romantic to the core. Starting with the massage session to their lovemaking. Awesome! Loved how they massaged each other. Kalpi's reaction when Raghav turned to face her was hilarious. Smart Mr.Singhania, the massage was his idea of making her bold and ready for the big thing. It really helped too. It made her understand his desires and hers better. She understood he is the balm to her pain, desires,everything. That made her bold enough to tell him that she's ready and tonight is the night. He couldn't be more happy. Her voice was music to his ears. Finally they became one in all aspects and their love binds them together forever. Amazing, was worth the wait. 🤗 Now go and celebrate Raksha bandhan with your brother. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly i like the music in the background, it add that little extra special something to the update
The entire chapter was brilliantly written. I like how you describe everything.
Kalpi is truly an Angel who is lucky to have understanding and loving hubsband like Raghav and vice versa
Im lost of words to describe this chapter, it was picture perfect
So romantic, so real... I simply love it
Enjoy your time with you brother
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow dear...juz wow..n wht wit the song...im blushing like hell now...crap!!!! n smiling in my room alone...oh oh!!! LOL...impresiv dear...really...☺️
update soon...

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