The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 30

Originally posted by: rani214

It was jus awesome, super duper romantic n beautifully written...WOW

ab aage kuch aur nahi bol sakti m jus speechless

Originally posted by: Pookhi

I read til chapter 6 and you write well I must say :)
Didn't read further cuz of mature content but I hope I didn't miss anything important such as how Raghav might hurt Kalpi.. 😊

Originally posted by: lovelybubbly

Wonderful just wonderful 👏

Fantastic , u have me hooked 😊I smiled & blushed with your update😳 ( M sure i will revisit again & again😉.)

Keep up the good work

Thanks a ton ,

Niharika 😊

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

excellent chappy yaar...
beautifully written!!!!
loved it...
continue soon...

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Love you for this wonderful reply. 🤗You need not worry as you are a superb writer and yes, you shine at writing romance too. It's not at all M&B type eroticism. It's within the limits and beautifully done. Kudos to you. Happy Raksha bandhan! Catch up next week. Mwaah. ... Remember I love you more!

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Just read it again.

Charu.. u seriously did an awesome job... I felt the innocence and the sincerity.. it was so real.. it made the whole thing fabulous... things like this is reality and so reading it the way u have written it made it beautiful.. your metaphorical use at the end is also beautiful..

Had to tell you once again and so keep the happiness/ sweet momentsprolonged for a while coz it will only help you to make the twist more dramatic.

😆

Originally posted by: chahat4u

How sweet of you Mini. 😃 🤗Yes, I understand now. For some time or one update at least happy and sweet moments are essential. So I will have to think of something good for sure now! 😆😛 😃 Thank you once again for liking it so-2 much. 😊 I wanted to ask was the song good for this? 😳😊

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

Now, That you have asked about the music.. will let you know that..a window has been designated to your update, the music is on constantly, since I heard the instrumental...I am still listening to it😆and it is 1am right now... it sounds even better this late!

Hope You got the answer 😉