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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 7



The scene starts with Kamla on the phone with paki.
Scene 1
"Are you sure paki?" she asked
"Yes Kamla."
"I will be there in 10minute." She says grabbing her bag
Meanwhile paki was happy. She thought maybe Kamla can convince kalpi and take her home. She walks to the living room to see Raghav putting his shoe on to go to work. Gauri, kalpi and paki notice his tie was fixed the wrong way. Gauri saw paki about to move and asks kalpi to fix it for him. Kalpi being the closest to Raghav walks up to him and taps his shoulder.
Raghav looks at her confuse for a second until she points to his tie. He was going to do it when kalpi grabs it, pulling him closer. They almost look like they were about to kiss. While kalpi fix his tie, Raghav continues to stare at her.
Gauri looking at them smiles. Then her smile turned to a frown. I'm so sorry kalpi for what I did. Because of me Raghav ended up with paki. I know right now you're both hurting, but I hope you both can forgive me later on.
Paki not liking this decides to do something about it. She walks up to Raghav and kisses his cheek "good luck at work." She says then looks at kalpi, smiling she walks away feeling happy.
Kalpi was hurt seeing another girl kiss Raghav. She quietly turns around about to leave when Raghav grabs her hand. "Don't be sad, kalpana. There is nothing special about that kiss. The only kiss I would accept is yours. "He says whispers something in her ears, making her blush.
"I can't Raghav, your mom is watching and also to them we're not married so I can't do stuff like that." She whispers
"Fine." He says
Scene 2
Kamla reaches the house and rings the doorbell, making everyone look towards the door. The servant opens the door and Kamla walks in. she saw Raghav and kalpi next to each other and saw paki watching them. Furious, she walks toward kalpi and slaps her. Everyone was shock.
"Ai?" she says while holding her cheek
"How could you?" she says
"I don't understand Ai, what did I do wrong?"
"Why are you in Raghav house are you forgetting his married?" She says
"Kamla you got it all wrong." Says gauri
"Enough! You don't understand what your son, put kalpi thru." She says
" what he did was all for my sake. You shouldn't blame him for it." She says
"For your sake?" Kamla laughs
"He ruined two of my daughters life, especially paki, for a sin her parents committed.
You guys are no different from her parents. In fact you guys are worse." She says earning a slap from gauri.
"Enough Kamla! You have wasted my patent. You said what we did was a sin, but you letting criminals stay in your house is a bigger sin." She says
She waited for Kamla to say something, but when she didn't she continued.
"Are you forgetting the fact that you yourself hand me over to them" She says shocking Raghav and kalpi
"When they gave me medicine to take, weren't you the one that told me to take it. Not knowing that the medicine makes me lose my memories. I even told you I'm not feeling well and I don't trust Neetu but you didn't listen." She says
"Neetu is a nice person." She says
"If she is a nice person then I must be Shiva. You talk about sin but you helped make them torcher me." She says
Kamla stumbled back; she just couldn't listen to anymore of gauri lies. Looking at kalpi, she grabs her hand and pulls her.
"Come on we're going home. Maybe you can beg your father for forgiveness." She says
"I'm not going Ai." She says
"Are you crazy kalpi?"
"No Ai, you know that papa don't want me back. That's why he kicked me out." She said standing her ground. Kamla not liking this pulled her to the door, but was stopped by Raghav.
"Kamla she's not leaving." He says in a serious voice
"Yes she is Raghav; you have no say in it."
"Yes I do."
"Raghav remove your hands from her or I'll." She says
"You'll what Kamla" says gauri coming to them
"I will slap him."
"You will never touch my son; I know I made a mistake by letting him marry paki." She says making paki sad "but now I will fix this. Marrying someone out of love is not right."
"And how will you do this?"
"By letting Raghav marry kalpi." She says shocking everyone
Scene 3
Vitthal came home to find Kamla missing. He searches around the house, calling her name. Neetu walks in, and he asked her if she's seen Kamla.
"Nope, haven't seen her." She says vitthal was about to walk away when Neetu said something else.
"Do you think she went to find kalpi, after all she's over Raghav house." she says smirking.
Vitthal looked mad. He walks away from Neetu, while thinking Kamla has disobeyed me. I will show her that I'm serious. Just when he was about to leave kalpi picture falls down right on his foot. He picked it up and saw kalpi and him smiling. Vitthal soften a little when he saw how happy they were. He traces his hand on kalpi face and a tear falls down. He quickly wipes it and stands up. Then he heads to the temple.
Neetu saw the whole thing. She shook her head.
"At this rate he will go back to the way he was. I can't let that happened." She says
Scene 4
Paki looks at gauri and says "you can't do this, I'm his wife. Not kalpi."
"You're wrong, you are not his wife. The one he loves is his wife." She says not knowing that what she just said was true.
"Paki is right. I will not allow kalpi to marry a married man." She says
"You have no say in what I do Kamla." She says
"Leave this place before I really get mad." She says grabbing her hand and pulling her to the door. As soon as she was out gauri slam the door in her face.
She looks at kalpi and Raghav and says "I'm serious on what I said. You two will get married. I already called the priest. He will come tomorrow." She says before going to her room leaving the three of them alone.
Paki turned around crying then she runs in her room, Leaving kalpi, and Raghav to stare at each other. They were both speechless but at the same time happy. But they new this isn't right. Raghav breaking the awkwardness decides to leave for work, while kalpi decides to rest in the guest room.
Scene 5
Raghav walks in his office, he sat down and relaxes. He thought about what his mom said he was happy about the idea but he didn't know if kalpi would accept. After all she did look like she would decline. Raghav was busy thinking about his marriage when Sammy walks in.
"You ok Raghav?"
"No, things are getting more complicated." He says
"How?"
"Well kalpi is staying with us and now my mom wants me to marry kalpi so I can be happy."
"Does she know that you're already married to her?" he asked while fixing his papers
"No, but if we do it for real, we wont have to hide it." He says
"Your right, how does paki feel about this?" He asked
"She's sad, that's the other problem."
"What do you mean?" Said Sammy
"I ruined her life. I guess the only solution here is to divorce her." he says plainly than he adds "I want to do a real marriage ceremony with kalpi when I'm a free man." He says
"But you are a free man."
"Yes I am but it will take a while for the contract to process."
"How do you think they will feel, especially Kamla when she finds out the real truth behind your marriage to paki?"
Raghav turns around and then stretch. He looks at Sammy smiling "she will be in pain, and will regret what she has done." He said
"I never knew you were evil Raghav." Sammy says while smiling
"Well, when someone destroys your childhood, it makes your heart turn to cold."
Scene 6
Kamla walks home feeling overwhelm, what gauri said really got to her. Did I really help make gauri life a living hell? No I couldn't have, after all I tried to save her. She doesn't see the big picture. She thought, when she entered her house the light was off.
"Is vitthal sleeping?" she says, just when she was about to put the light on, a hand stops her. Kamla was scared, she turned around and screams. The hand that stopped her earlier covers her mouth. Panicking, Kamla bites the arm earning a scream and the lights coming on
To be continue...

Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome update...omg gauri slapped dumbla😃😃
Really curious about the contract thing...continue soon..
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What an awesome update. Just loved the way Gauri stood for Raghav and Kalpi. Please continue 😊
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Awesome Awesome Awesome... now this is some kick ass fun!!
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Thank you everyone, i promise i'll update the next chapter later on today. write now, i'm updating mera pagala gamva ki. and writing other fanfiction. your comments means alot, it makes me smile so please continue to tell me what you think. if you dont like something tell me and i'll see what i can do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 8


Scene 1

Kamla bit the hand that was holding her hand and the light came on. She turned around only to see her husband vitthal, holding his hand while glaring at her.

"Oh my god, vitthal are you ok." She says concern

"I'm fine" he says angry

Kamla ran to the first aid kit to help him but he pushed her away.

"You have caused me enough pain for the day Kamla." He says turning his back on her

"I'm sorry vitthal, paki needed me." She says making him turn to look at her

"So even paki comes before you husband?" He says

Kamla tried to explain to him but he just turned the light of and went to bed, leaving Kamla in the dark. She went to kalpi bed and slept there giving vitthal some space to cool of.

Meanwhile

Pakiya was at the park again remembering kalpi when he saw a six year old kalpi walking towards him, crying "Bhai." She says while crying

"What is it kalpana?" says the younger pakiya his older self looks at his younger self.

"Bare baccom ko meri genda le li." She says crying

Younger pakiya walks towards them and asks them to give the ball back to his sister.

"It's our ball now." They said

Pakiya looks at his sister crying some more and attack the boys. He punched the big boy while the other kid tries to get him off, Kalpi not liking this jump on one of their back pulling his ears hard.

"Get of me." He says

"No leave my Bhai alone." She says

Another boy removes kalpi from his friend back and shove her on the floor, Making kalpi cry. Pakiya saw the blood on kalpi knee and got angry. He finished the big boy and went to the others beating them up. Once he was done, he rushes to kalpi side.

"Are you ok kalpi?" he asks

"My knee hurts." She says

Pakiya cut some of his sleeves and use it to tie her knee then he told her to get on his back. When she did he got up and they walk home.

"Bhai"

"Yes kalpi" he says

"Maim maphi cahata hum." She says sadly

"For what?" he says

"Because of me, you had to fight thoughs big kids." She says

Pakiya smiles "I will always fight for you; after all you're my adorable sister." He says tickling her foot, making her giggle.

Older pakiya watch them leave and smiles. He was about to leave when he saw kalpi.

They both looked at one another surprise. "Kalpana." He says

"Bhai" she says running to him and hugging him.

"Where have you been kalpi?" he asks

"Do you know how worried we are?" He says

"I'm doing fine Bhai." She says sitting down on the bench.

"What are you doing here anyway?" she asks

"Remember when we were kids, we use to play here." he says

Kalpi smiles "I remember, we got in trouble a lot." She says

"Yah" he says

They were quiet for a second until kalpi said "Bhai I need your help."

"What is it kalpi?"

"Well I want to start a business." She says "I need you to help me gather some people." She says making pakiya think for a second.

"Sure I'll always help you." He says

"Please don't tell Ai and pita" she says

He agreed and kalpi told him her ideas and where she wants it to be. She then talk about where she's staying and for him to contact her so they can talk some more.

Scene 2

The next day gauri brought the priest. Kalpi was in her room sleeping when gauri woke her up. "Kalpi, wake up." She says waking her up

"Yes gauri- aunty." She says

"It's your wedding day bacca you have to get ready." She says

Kalpi got up and tried to talk to gauri but she left before she could.

Paki on the other hand woke up to see the priests saying some words. She couldn't believe this was happening. She saw gauri coming out of kalpi room and walks up to her.

"You can't do this gauri." She says

"Why not, if I can make my son marry you, why can't I." she says

"Because I'm his wife, no one else" She says

"But he doesn't love you. You might have the title of wife but you can never have his love because it belongs to kalpi." She says

"I know he doesn't love me, but he belongs to me. He even accepts it in front of god." She says

Gauri smirks "and now everything that you took from kalpi the gods will give it back to her, once they accept this marriage." She says walking away from her.

Raghav came to the house with Sammy and his parents, He was drunk.

Gauri walks to him and says "Raghav, what happened to you?"

"Kalpana!" he yells while moving back

"Kalpana! I love you." He yells

Kalpi came out of her room; she looks at where Raghav was and ran to him.

"Raghav, why are you like this?" she says concern

Paki walks towards Raghav and tries to touch him but he slaps her hand away "get away from me." He says drunk

"I only want kalpana to touch me." He says while looking at kalpi

"Sammy what happened to him?" she asks concern

"He called me when he was at the bar, drunk. Then he kept repeating kalpana don't love me." He says

"I thought he stopped drinking." Says paki

"Raghav only drinks when his frustrated." Says kalpi

"Please Sammy help me put him on the couch." Said gauri

They took him to the couch and let him rest. Kalpi tried to take the bottle from him when Raghav pulls her and hugs her arm. She tried to move her arm from his but he had a strong grip. He looks at kalpi lovingly and says "I can't wait for you to be my wife."

"I love you so much; finally I can show how much I love you in front of everyone." He says paki hearing all of it. She went to her room and slams the door. Crying her eyes out then she called someone.

"Well if it isn't paki-poo." Says Neetu

"Listen." She says

"Kalpi is running my marriage. Can you help me get rid of her?" She says

"Hmm" she says "my daughter hasn't talk to me in ages when she finally wants something she calls me." She says

"Why don't you ask your Kamla-ma." She says

"Kamla wouldn't do it. She would do that to kalpi." She says

"Ok fine, what's in it for me?" Neetu asks

"Cant you do something for your daughter without asking for something?" she says

Neetu thought about it and says "NO"

"Fine, I'll buy you some nice sari." She says

"No give me some money. I'm getting tiered of Kamla house." She says

"Fine" I'll send it"

"Good leave the back door open or kalpi window unlock. I'll call some people to get her." She says before hanging up.

Paki puts the phone down and thought to herself. You will finally be gone from Raghav life. She walks out her room and saw kalpi trying to get her hand away from Raghav.

"I love you kalpana!" he kept saying

"Raghav please let go." She says

"Nahim!" he says

Kalpi watches them and quietly walks to kalpi room. She made sure no one was watching when she came in her room. She unlocks her window and left it down. Then she opens her door only to see gauri at the door.

"What are you doing paki?" she asks

"I came to get kalpi wedding dress for her." She says

"And why would you do that." She asks

"Because Raghav won't let go of her hand" She says scared

"Don't worry about it, you go from here." she says

Paki walk away not turning back, she went to the kitchen to bring water for Raghav. While gauri inspects the room to make sure nothing is out of place, When she found nothing she went back to talk to the priest.

Scene 3

"Are you sure he will be ok for the wedding." He says

"Yes he will be. Just give him some time." she says to the priest

"Ok, but if he doesn't then I will be leaving." He says

Gauri agrees and walks toward Raghav who was now hugging kalpi while sitting up. Paki brought the water. She gave it to Raghav and he refuses then kalpi took the water from her and gives it to him and he accepted.

"Here Raghav, medicine to make you come back to your senses" She says

Raghav took the medicine and drank the water. He was starting to feel better. Once he was done, he let go of kalpi and Sammy took him to his room to get ready.

"Ok kalpi you should get ready also" she says

"The thing is gauri-aunty." She says trying to tell her but she cut her of again

"You can tell me later come on." She says

When it was night time everyone was happy waiting for the ceremony to start. Raghav was sitting in his seat. He couldn't believe that there marriage will be official. Sammy smiles at him and says "it won't be long Raghav."

"I know, I can't wait to see kalpana wearing the sarees I will but her." He says

Paki was sitting down when her phone rang. She walks to the kitchen and answers her phone.

"We are here mam." They said

"She's in her room, its open just go there." She says "make sure she doesn't make a sound." she commands once she was done she went back to the ceremony acting sad. Just you wait Raghav you will be mine. She thought

Scene 4

Kalpi was in her room nervous but at the same time happy. She wanted to tell gauri that she can't do this but she kept cutting her of. She puts her wedding dress on and was about to put her duppat on her head when she heard a noise. She turned around searched for the noise, when she turned back around her window was open.

"I didn't know this was opened." She said going to it and close it. Not knowing that the goons were right behind her.

She turned around and saw the goons, she was about to scream when they put a cloth on her nose making her unconscious. Once she fainted they went thru the window and took her to there car. The leader text paki saying they took her. Paki smiles and quickly deletes the text. So know one would know.

To be continue...


Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Amazing update nd Plzz pm me...
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Amazing dear...
Kalpi kinapped???pls update soon cnt wait to knw wat happnd nxt?
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amazing update ...continue soon ...
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awsom updt
loved it
paakhi [proved tht she is a kapoor

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