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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m completely shattered by current track of ema..nd ra& khi even single scene hurts me...I m g8 ragna fan bt cvs played wid our emotions...ur ff is really awesome bt my hate 4 ra& khi is beyond words...when I read ur update I was expecting something diff so I reacted this way..sry dr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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don't worry everyone everything will be fine with kalpi. there's two twist here. we already know gauri is working with paki by pretending to hurt her but wait till you find out raghav secret it will shock everyone. thats why he was talking to sammy. lets say justice will be serve for everyone. neetu, sahil will be behind bars and paki will be put in a mental hospital. but i can't tell you much details, kalpi will keep fighting for her love and raghav will stay in the side lines waiting for the right moment to reveal everything. in this story raghav is not stupid, he's also smart and cunning. everyone is hiding a secret so you will see soon 😛 just thinking about what's gonna happen makes me smile so much lol. but mere pagal kalpi will be torchered alot because she will meet her in-law gauri who hates her. raghav will also torcher her until he starts falling for her. but she will still be clumsy and get into lots of mess lol, and of course paki will try something.
Also in my other story will you remember me, its gonna be really sad so please don't criticise because the story plot is different but the characters are the same. same with all my stories but crazy stupid love ragna are happy but paki is mental so she will be stalking 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~Ek Mutthi Aasmaan~ the untold story meets Qubool hai Dohari Musibata

Seher Rehan



Chapter 11

Scene 1

Seher and rehan arrives in pune, they park their car and ask people for direction to the graveyard. Some people didn't know while others gave them the wrong direction. Just when they were about to give up, a young girl working at this food stand says "you guys looking for the graveyard?" When they answer she says "its just five minutes away from here. Just keep heading straight and make a left." She says

"Thank you, may Allah bless you." He says

They walk until finally seher got tired of walking. Rehan looks at her and asks her why she stopped. "Its hot, and I'm tired. We haven't stopped for food or stop to pee." She says grouchy

"We're almost there, just wait for a little while." He says making seher groan.

Once they reached the grave area, rehan search for his dad, When he was about to pass it. He tripped on a stone. As soon as he was about to get up, he saw the grave stone in front of him, it had his dad name on it. He got up and sat down, seher looks at him, she was about to ask him something when he beat her to it.

"I finally found where my father was buried. Turns out this is the place." Rehan says bending down to say his prayers.

"That's great and all, but why are we here in the dark, we could come back tomorrow." She says

"No, I want to show my respect now. Don't you want to be in Punjab by tomorrow?" he asks making her nod her head

Good, so please be quiet I'm trying to show my respect." He says

Seher sat on top of a graveyard. She was looking at the stars when she saw someone coming."R...Rehaan" she says sacredly when she got no response from him she turns around again, and saw the person coming closer.

"R...Rehaan!" she says this time backing away ending up falling on his back. Rehaan turns his head around and yells at seher "I told you to wait but now look I just disrespected my fathers." He says looking at seher only to see her shaking controllably.


"Why are you shaking?" he asks making her point towards the direction she was looking at.

When Rehaan saw what she was looking at, he also got scared, but he didn't show it. Both of them grabbing on to each other and not realizing it at the moment. As soon as the figure was closer to the light, they saw a girl running towards them, she had cuts all around her arm, and she was wearing a white saree which was now dirty. She was running towards them saying "please, please help me." She says with her hands together tears coming out of her eyes.

Seher and Rehaan look at each other and realize there holding each other. Quickly they let go, Rehaan blushing while seher refuses to look at him. They heard noises and saw a group of guys coming towards them, they were all tense.


Scene 2


Later on that night, two figures were seen talking in the kitchen. It was non other then paki and gauri. Paki had made tea for gauri and she was drinking it. Gauri smiles and thank her.

"Our little scene today was a little bit extra." Says gauri

"No it was good. Now I can move on with plan B" says paki

"It won't be to long before Raghav falls for you, now that kalpi is out of the picture." Says gauri making paki smile.

"How did you manage to get kalpi handwritten gauri-ma?" she asks

"I didn't, I let kalpi write it." She says then remembering asking kalpi to write a letter to Raghav about how she felt about marrying him.

"I guess she wrote it and throw it away, luckily I found it." She says looking at paki

"Now it's your turn, how did you get kalpi out of the house?" she ask

"Easy I hired some goons to kidnap her with Neetu help." She says

Just when they were about to talk some more they heard a noise, gauri put the cup down and got up. They were about to go and check when Raghav appeared in his pajamas, shocking them both. Paki and gauri were both scared that Raghav have found out about their alliance, they were too scared to say anything.

Raghav looks at both of them and says "what are you two doing here?" making them both relax. Gauri was the first one to calm down "I asked paki to make me some tea." She says making paki grab her cup to go and wash it.

"What are you doing up, son?" she says

"I can't sleep, I miss kalpi." he says making paki roll her eyes

"Don't worry son, we will find her" she says

Scene 3


They watch as the goons appeared, rehan push the girls back.

"Well boys we found her. Didn't I tell you she wouldn't get far?" He says

.seher saw kalpi shivering and scared. Looking at her clearly she could tell she was tortured. She grabs on to kalpi hands to comfort her, making kalpi turn around to look at her. The goons look at rehan and started laughing. "Do you see this boys?" the leader says "this weakling wants to be a hero" he says making his friends laugh

"Hand over the girl so we won't kill you." He says

"Their will be no blood shed on my fathers grave." He says

"Oh really" he says before going to the grave and kicking it, upsetting rehan.

"Hey stop it, that's disrespectful" says seher

They look at her and whistle, and then the leader says "you're very pretty, maybe after we beat your boyfriend over there we can play with you." He says making seher shiver with disgust. Rehan bold his fist, when the guy tries to touch the girls he punches them making them move back. "You mess with the wrong group." He says before attacking rehan.

While attacking him, two of the guys tried to attack the girls. Seher pulls kalpi behind her but when the guys multiplies they ran, they ran as far as they could. But kalpi ended up tripping making the guys catch up. They grab her tugging her legs while sehere pull her with her hand.

"Help! Let go of me. Some one please" she says

"RAGHAV!" she screams

Elsewhere, Raghav was drinking his tea when his heart started to tug. He was starting to feel pain. Just when he was about to lie in the bed he fell on the god statue.

"RAGHAV HELP!"

"Kalpi?" he thought panicking why am I thinking about kalpi, what if something happened to her? He thought

"RAGHAV!" she says making the voice stronger in his head

"Kalpi!" he says getting out of bed and getting his key. He ran out the door and gauri and paki came out hearing a ruckus. Gauri walks to Raghav and says "where you going to urgently son?"

"Kalpi, she's in trouble" he says making paki and gauri tense.

"Your wrong son, you must have been dreaming. Your forgetting kalpi left you." She says grabbing Raghav hand "come son go back to sleep" she says

Raghav was about to follow his mom order when he felt the tug again. Something was telling him to go and look for her, when he heard the voice again he removes his hand from his mother and ran out the door. Gauri and paki where very worried.

"What if he finds her" says gauri

"He won't because I told those guys to take her somewhere far" she says

"Let's hope he doesn't find her" says gauri

Scene 4

Raghav drove everywhere searching for kalpi, he park his car by the park and started searching screaming her name and the song tu hi rab tu hi dua starts playing.

Meri aankhon mein meri saanson mein

Raghav went around asking people walking if they've seen his wife. He showed them a picture of her and they shook there head.

Tera chehra (x2)

He continues this routine asking people for kalpi. When no one would answer he stopped to think.

Meri dil ki har ik deewar peTera chehra (x2)

He ran to places that he knew kalpi might go. But she wasn't their. Raghav was sweating and out of breath but he didn't give up.

Tu hi hai tu hi mera jahaanTu hi rab tu hi dua

He screamed her name and fell on his knees, crying to the gods. Just when he was about to give up an old couple walk by, they saw the picture on the ground and realize that was the same girl they saw at the grave yard.

Tu hi labh tu hi zubaanTu hi raah tu hi makaamTu rehnuma

"Excuse me?" she says making Raghav look up at her

"By any chance are you looking for her?" she asks

"Yes, have you seen her?" he asks with hope

"Yes I did, I saw her running at the graveyard." She says

Raghav got up and thank the couple then he ran towards the grave yard

Tu hi rab tu hi duaTu hi labh tu hi zubaan

Once he reached there he started searching for her calling her name once more.

Elsewhere, rehan finished of the goons and head towards the girls. Just when he was about to reach there he heard someone shouting. Turning around he saw a figure by his close to the gate running around the graveyard. Is he looking for someone? He thought going towards him.

"Excuse me?" he asks making Raghav look at him

"Are you looking for someone?"

"Yes I'm looking for my wife. "He says showing the picture to him, making rehan gasp

"I know her." He says getting Raghav attention

"You do? Have you seen her?" He asks

"Yes right now she's in trouble, we have to go and save them" he says making Raghav worried "follow me" he says

Tu hi raah tu hi makaamTu rehnuma

Raghav follows rehan until they reached there.

Tu hi rab tu hi duaTu hi labh tu hi zubaan

They came just in time to see the goons push kalpi making her hit her head on the grave stone. Raghav seeing this was angry. he ran towards them shouting " KALPI!!!"

He saw her falling and quickly ran to catch her. Kalpi felt two hands wrapped around her. She thought she heard Raghav voice. When she opened her eyes she saw Raghav screaming her name to stay awake.

Tu hi raah tu hi makaamTu rehnuma

Rehan ran to seher and help her. He was impressed at her bravery. When he came to the scene he saw her taking a stick and hitting the guys with it. When he saw one of the guys holding the stick he ran to her and punch the guy making him fall back. Seher looks at rehan and they had a moment. But it was soon broken when they heard Raghav crying out kalpi name. They turn around to see him getting up with her in his hand. Then they saw the leader attacking him. Raghav kick the leader making him fall back, when he got back up, seher throws a rock at him hitting his head.

"Bulls eye!" she says

"I don't think this is a good time to gloat seher." He says making her frown.

When the leader was distracted Raghav managed to punch him, this time knocking him out. Once they were all knocked out, rehan offered him a ride. He was about to refuse when he remembered where he parked his car. It will take me longer to get therehe thought and kalpi needs medical treatment now he thought

Making his decision he agreed to rehan request and followed him.

Meri aankhon mein meri saanson meinTera chehra (x2)

Once they were in the car, he lays kalpi down and watches her sleep. Rehan asks him where they going and he said to his house, Seher curious start asking him question.

"Why was your wife being chased by those guys?" she asks

"I don't know" he says

"I mean they wanted to kill her" she says "How could you not know about this?" she asks upsetting Raghav

"She ran away and left me during our wedding day" he says surprising seher and rehan

"I thought you said she was your wife?" asks rehan

"She is but not by legal rights." He says surprising seher

"Wait what! How can you married someone without legal rights?" she asks when Raghav explains the whole story rehan understood while seher still not understanding.

"How can you play with someone's heart like that?" she says then says "you are really stupid, for doing that." She says making rehan stop the car and looks at her" he's not playing with anyone's heart seher. You need to understand that what the heart wants the heart gets." He says making seher roll her eyes.

Once they reach the house Raghav quickly pick up kalpi. He turns around and asks them if they were gonna stay for the night, they were gonna refuse when Raghav insist that they stay until tomorrow. Rehan accepts and they walk to Raghav door. And just when he was about to open the door paki opens it. She looks down to see kalpi in Raghav hands making her smile turns to a frown. They both walk in and gauri saw Raghav lip bleeding but what shock her most was kalpi in Raghav hands.

Both of them were tense, while seher and rehan greets them and walk in.

To be continued...

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Preview


Scene 1: Raghav was taking care of kalpi when gauri walks in overhearing Raghav promising kalpi "I promise kalpi who ever did this will pay." He says making gauri tense.

Scene 2: kalpi woke up only to see paki by her side, smiling

"You think by doing this you will get his affection" she says making kalpi confuse.

"What are you talking about paki, I was kidnapped." She says

"Save it for someone who cares" she says

"Why are you acting like this?" says kalpi

"Why you ask" she says laughing "you stole my life kalpi everything I had. But this time I'm taking it back." she says

"I never stole your life paki; if anything I gave you my happiness. But this time I can't give you my love for Raghav." She says determined upsetting paki

"You don't have to, because he already accepted." She says

"What do you mean by that?"

"We slept together" she says shocking kalpi, she felt like the room got closer suffocating her. Paki seeing this smiles and walk away. As soon as she left Raghav walks in, he saw kalpi like that and ran to her.

"Are you ok kalpi?" he says touching her shoulder. When kalpi slaps his hands off

"DON'T TOUCH ME!!!" she says hurting Raghav

Scene 3: paki kept going to the bathroom to throw up, gauri being concern calls the doctor. When she came she asks paki some questions and when she answered the doctor smiles.

"Congratulation Mrs. Singhania, you're pregnant" she says just when kalpi and Raghav walk in the room. Shock was on everyone's face, Raghav looks at kalpi who looks about ready to cry while paki smirks and ran to Raghav.

"Can you believe it, we're gonna have a baby" she says putting Raghav hand on her stomach. While he looks at kalpi now crying.

Scene 4: someone walks to the hospital to meet the doctor. She took out the money and says "nice work today, now plan B is in action" she says

"But miss what will happen when they found out the real truth." She says

"They wont, as long as I'm alive they wont." She says not knowing that someone overheard them talking.

Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
wow wonderful update😊
pakhi 😡 i wish i can kill her..
gauri also 😕
loved rehan and seher roles..
ragan bonding was awesome😳
plz continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Superb update👍🏼
Love ragna telepathy n der bonding
Pakhi n Gauri😡 hate dem
Rehan n sehar were amazing
Continue soon n thnxs 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Wow!!! What an update. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Wow cool update! I felt as if I am watching some movie!!!! Very nice!!
Loved the connection between Raghav n Kalpi!He just knew he had to look for her when she was in trouble!!!!

And Why on earth would Gauri hate Kalpi??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
can't wait for you to reveal the truth 😆 and everyone get what i coming to them 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update
I like how Raghav can feel Kalpi calling him
Kalpi is save now but this paki and Gauri is disgusting
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Superb update...
I wish I could kill that PIG😡

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