Flawed Characterization and Storyline Is Why We Can't Connect - Page 3

Originally posted by: Punjabdikuri

This is one of the best analysis I have read. This is one of the reasons why almost all the serials die after 150-200 episodes. All the serials spend first 40-50 episodes developing the characters. Then add the love/ hate track. Then for next 100 episodes we see
The relationship blooming and after that there is THE TWIST around 180th episode. After that everything changes the characters the plot and most important no direction. The writers directors editors actors heck even the spot boys start acting clueless.
My only question is what is the purpose of twist if it cannot be executed properly.?

Originally posted by: Syama_Luna

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<font color="#333333" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thank you for your appreciation. 😊</font>

<font color="#333333" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">They know how to start but don't know how to maintain the same creativity and quality.I wonder how the creatives and writers even work. I would expect them to have a clear idea of the concept, tracks (how each bleeds into next track or plot flow), character developments and so on in the beginning itself. Why all this mess now. It is clear that they haven't planned, something surprising for an experienced team. Or perhaps they can't handle their cast? </font>

<font color="#333333" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">They are simply not involved in their work and characters as we fans are. I am an artist myself though not of the same field.I always want my work to be perfect; in technique, creativityand most importantlyexpression.I obsess over every fine detail. They must be like I envisioned or better. Don't all artists want to create something beautiful, share our vision or message, evoke emotions, andwant others to love and enjoy our work as we do. Here, they don't care that their fans are repulsed with their characters and ideas.</font>

<font color="#333333" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Not only artists, I expect anyone to be involved in their profession, to want to perform their best, come out with their best work. Where is that love and commitment?</font>

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

This is the best analysis I have read in the recent past 👏

P.S. Why don't you tweet this post to CV's and cast ..🥱

Originally posted by: KyaRe...

Luna great write up and totally agree 😃 What I feel is that PH had a great concept and failed to execute it CVs seem to be rushing from one track to another to stay afloat in TRP chart IMHO.

What they didn't fathom was RagNa's popularity and how to mould the story keeping the integrity of character, while still cashing on the couple's chemistry to keep us hooked. Instead they went the clichd route saying if RagNa unite there is no story ahead 🥱

And about why Paakhi had to be shoved on us with the latest twist was coz if not then kamala would have any screen space if RagNa had united? The power of yesterday's actor and the weight of 'Singh' surname has contributed allot for the show's downfall 🥱 🥱 🥱

Originally posted by: mandu

@syama_luna

Thank you so much for expanding your post here...

you have stated everything most brilliantly and coherently.

Originally posted by: Barunash

they had beautiful storyline and very diffrent from what i saw a kamwali bai beti wanting toownn a building on herown so she gets to fulfill her aayi dream to get her undivided attention and male lead supporting her in the mission
good concept tak hi baat reh gayi they introduced that concept but when time came to take the story forward they fell on their face obivious reasons uncreativity off screen partiality
when i first heard shirni is not playing negative character i knew the show will take diff turn then what was shown s baby pakhi was not full on positive character
infact if shirni had brains this character could hv done wonders coz she would get to play so many shades and she could prove her talent but i dont think there is muchdiff in her offscreen and onscreen character
shilpa mohit diya tony need to wake up and see its ragna who bought [opularity and that is the truth whatever they its always the leads and then story and track that get the credit for trp since they are hellbent on making pakhi kamla vithal to become leads they will get answr with falling ratings
people connevted with kalpi pain and her and raghav story was unique along wirth chemistry and talent the leads shared
what they want us sto see a limp weak characterless hero and and heroin with no self respect forget the peasize brain with delusion and add kamla bhashaan nonstop pravachan and her saree clad husband ...sorry it does not interset me
i dont even want to go into revenge track its like most childish or silliest track ever i hv seen on screenso how can we be interested ?

Originally posted by: smileysmile

Bingo. You have explained precisely. The team is thinking we are reacting this way because of Ragna separation. But in fact we all were dreading separation and even subconsciously expecting this. But what they have done is - brutal assassination of some characters and given a story line which is difficult to relate and understand.