BE MINE..NOW AND FOREVER,!!PART 13 UPDATED..01/9/13 page 25 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz this is not fair already upset by CVS of EMA so hum beachare par taras kho aur updt karna plz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sumasridhar

Plz this is not fair already upset by CVS of EMA so hum beachare par taras kho aur updt karna plz


sorry dea. .was totally out f all dese...fed up wth d ema crap..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fortunate to have read such a lovely story. impatiently WAITING for update . Can imagine how Frustrated everyone is feeling. A request, hope Rags has a competition in Karan. It would be fun. Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please continue soon in English too huh great update
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Posted: 11 years ago
When are you updating the story?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update na dear dont leave us on the cliff hanging ab ye Karan kya kaand karne waala hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago
The next day was a little sad for raghav..he had to leave for USA for a business deal..the thought of not being near of kalpi hurt him..but kalpi forced him to go..
They had their last hug at the airport and ragav wth a sad face left...!!
Kalpi was going bak home from the office and she was waiting for an auto...she was crossing the road nd it was then a car came nd hit her..there she lyed in a pool of blood in d middle of the road. ."kalpana...!!" was d last scream she heard and karan's was the last face she saw...karan took her in his arms and rushed to the hospital. ..he was d most tensed person at the moment. ...he contacted kamla ma nd there along with kalpi's family,he waited fo the doctors...after 2 hours d doctor came nd said:"nothing to worry.she has broken one
leg..will need a months rest .nd soon she wl b perfectly alryt..!"
Karan was happy...he thanked the doctor and rushed into the room to see kalpana...kamla maa was shocked to c karan this caring about kalpana nd she didn't know who he was...
Kalpana lyed wide awake in the bed...on seeing karan kalpana said:"thanks karan sir..agar aap nahi hoti toh shaayad mein zinda nahi hota...thanku so much.."
Karan:"ismein thanks ki kya zaruurat hai kalpana.?if u were in my place u too wud hav done the same!!its human nature to help the one in need.."
Kalpi smiled...kamla went near to karan nd thanked him for saving her daughter's life...!
Kamla was all time beside kalpi nd karan
forced vithal to go for work saying he wl b in the hospital if nything happens...kalpi made it sure dat ragav doesnt know nything...whenevr he called her she spoke very normally .aftr 5 days kalpi was back in her house but was in bed rest for 3 weeks..
Raghav will be back within 2 days nd karan was now like a member of the family...he was much loved by everyone nd kalpi was scared of how raghav would react to all this ...
It was a sunday nd ragav was expected to come tomorrow. ..but he thought of giving kalpi a surprise. ..he cameDirectly to kalpi's house from airport...he rushed to her house caling "kamla ma..."..only to b disappointed seeing karan kamla ma nd pakya on kalpi's bedside...he was shocked
to c kalpi in bed wth her leg plastered. ..!! "Kalpiii"""his words shivered. ...he walked towards kalpi..."wats al this .?wat happened. ?" For his anger it was karan who replied :"no serious problem mr.singhania...she had a small accident nd now she is btr...ur staff will b bak in action within 2 weeks...:)"
Ragav coudnt realise whtr he was sad or angry...:"tumne mujhe kaha kyun nahi kalpi.?"
Kalpi lowered her face..kamla ma answered:"ragav baba...voh nahi chahthi thi ki tum pareshaan ho...isiliye yeh baat tumse chupaakar rakha...abhi woh theek hai baba...aap chinta mat karo..!"
Ragav:"chintha na karun.?kaise kamla ma...c...kitni dull lag rahi hai kalpi...!!"ragav sat near kalpi ...kamla and
pakya excused themselves nd went outside.. karan still remained dere much to ragavs displeasure. ..:"can u please giv us a minute mr.mehra..?"
Karan:"ohh ya..y not..shall c u soon kalpi...u tk care ..am leaving...bye"
The moment karan left the place ragav hugged kalpi nd he cudnt hide tears...kalpi too was longing for this one hug of him dat can melt away all d pain and sadness. ..."I love you baby...nd I missed u so much..."ragav said in her ears..."I missed u more.. "kalpana added...ragav enquired about wat happened nd was not really vry happy to know that karan saved kalpi...just then raghav got a call nd it was pakhi...he came out of the room nd attended d call.. "ragav..u gotta c who really karan is ...bcoz I think I hav seen him b4 but I dont
remembr where. I find something fishy...he s too much interested in kalpi...bt don't let kalpi know this...she ll panic..."
Ragav replied:'mujhe toh woh pehle din se musibat lag rahi ha...dekhthi hun hota kya hai...chuhne bhi nahi dungi mein apni kalpi ko..."
pakhi:'kamla ma ne kaha ki tum wapas aayi ho isliye phone kiya meine..jaldi milti hun tum dono ko...bye"
Raghav:"okay. .bye...!!"
Raghav went bak to kalpi .he tried to smile but kalpi cud clearly sense something wrong...nd she absolutely knew ragav was not going to tell her that...

Ragav dint want to leav that nyt nd kamla nd vithal knew it...kamla ma said him:"baba...tum chaahthi hai toh aaj yehi
ruk jaao ..."
Ragavs happiness knew no bounds he hugged kamla ma in a hurry nd whn all laughed he realised wat he did..he smiled at them...
vithal:"beta...kalpi jitna humara hai utna tumhara bhi hai..jitna waqt bitaana chahte ho uske saat..bitaoo..."
Kalpi nd ragav smiled. ..that nyt kalpi slept well...holding her ragavs hand. ..she felt safe ... ragav spend d whole nyt loiking at kalpi...he slept by d morning...
Ragav woke up hearing karans voice much to his displeasure..!!

Sorry guys..too late an update...nd not a good one too I guess...please leave ur comments nd tell me any suggestions about the story line plzz...
Edited by aswathi.mc44 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
1st thanx 4 updating story 😃
awesome update dear 👏
update next part soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update now pakhi gonna help raghav to have kalpi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its a fabulous update... Glad you didn't discontinue the story..
Please don't make us wait too long for next part..

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