Kalpi FF...I will be back!!!!!final part with note updated - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Nice update..atlast kapoors and kamala got what they deserved..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Superb!👏 😊This forum has very talented writers. CVs plz see, here we have much better story ideas! 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 12
" my super girl,kalpi," you actually did all this,vow!!!! Yahooo!!!! Finally you have become human and stopped being mahaan and forgiving,"screamed Disha,jumping on the sofa and hooting with joy and laughter.She told Vitthal that she had always been worried , when the push came to shove,Kalpi would back out.She dare not tell Kalpi ,but she would have given anything in this world to have seen Paaki's expression ,when she knew she had to shift to the chawl.
Daksh was sitting very quietly.Kalpi wondered why he looked so solemn.Daksh knew that Kalpi was doing all this to move on...she had the most important issue to solve, a choice to make...though he had appeared calm in front of Kalpi,he was all knots inside.Now after getting to know Kalpi,he knew he could not bear to lose her,to see her with Raghav would be torture.He closed his eyes and walked away ,lest somebody saw his anguish.

As he stood on the terrace ,a hand reached out and touched him on the shoulder."what is it,Daksh?What is troubling you?"
"Nothing,kalpi.I was just thinking about work.Looks like I will have to go back for a couple of weeks ."
Kalpi was dismayed.He had told them he would stay the next two months,but now hardly two weeks later,he was talking of returning."stop him ,Kalpi.You will miss him", said a voice."no,let him go.Give Raghav a chance,"said another.
Daksh wondered what had come over him.It had been a spur of the moment decision,Yet in retrospect,it seemed the right thing to do,given the current situation.He needed to give her space.If in his absence,she forgot him or chose Singhania,she probably was never meant to be his.When Disha heard the news,she accused him of being a coward and fleeing without a fight. But he reminded her of what his mother always said.if you find the right girl and she is meant to be with you,all forces would conspire to bring you together.If they did not ,you were never meant to be.

Disha purposely did not go to see Daksh off at the airport,feigning illness.So also Vitthal and Pakhya.They had all sincerely wished that Kalpi and Daksh would come together,but looked like their wish would never be fulfilled.Vitthal cursed the day Raghav entered Kalpi's life.The drive to the airport was in total silence.Kalpi's mind was in turmoil.She wondered why she felt so down, wanting to cry.Just before he got down,Daksh reached out and squeezed her hands.Kalpi returned the pressure.He then lifted them to his lips and kissed them.Kalpi' eyes filled with tears which threatened to overflow."i am going to miss you a lot,Daksh,"she blurted out,before she could stop herself.Daksh could bear it no longer.He scooped her into his arms and kissed her on her lips,pouring all his emotion to it.At first,kalpi was stunned.As Daksh continued the onslaught,her mind stopped thinking.Her heart took over.She felt indescribable emotions course through her.As suddenly as he kissed her,Daksh broke off.He was breathing hard.Without so much as a backward glance,he got down and walked off into the airport.

A week later,Raghav took Kalpi on a date.As she walked in gracefully,Raghav was proud of the way ,everybody looked admiringly at her.Handing her the bouquet of white roses,he said,"stunning,as always"Kalpi blushed
Edited by bhaironnath - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Omg I love this story. I love daksh with kalpi. I wish a real daksh would enter ema.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I knew raghav doesn't deserve kalpi after what he had done to her and kalpi deserves better but I always wanted ragna together n there happily ever after n abt daksh he to deserves kalpi but there is saying that we can't forget our first love it leaves a wound or a scar that reminds us of first love n even if we give it a second chance it takes time to heal n I think raghav deserves second chance to mend his ways with kalpi n cherish her forever n after that raghav underestimates kalpi thinks that kalpi will always be his n always will love him as he is the first love of her n she cannot forget him then he is wrong n anyways kalpi deserves so happiness in her life which she deprived of the time from childhood n always wish the best for her
Lovely updt
Continue soon
Eager to knw there destiny n there decisions...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Please no ragna raghav needs to be taught a lesson. Want kalpi-daksh plz plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
I love reading your updates. I am a RagNa fan, however, I stil can't help but wish a character like Daksh actually exists in EMA.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
you have described a girl's emotions, especially a heartbroken girl's emotions very-2 beautifully and practically. I know first love always remains first love, esply if its really love and not infatuation or teenage puppy love. its hard to forget or move on in real sense. when noone is in your life, when you have been forced to move on even from second love...(if at all there is one), many times you go back remembering first love! thats d magic of it. but the question is, r u in love with that love's memory, or u still want that to be ur present too. Its tough to differentiate betwen love, and a person/suport who comes there just to release ur blocked emotions! its tough to know if its love or something else. Thats y love ur FF.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Nice update...continue soon...
I cn see d clear difference between daksh and raghav..
Daksh is thought from childhood as hw to live,respect woman,hw to love ppl nt hurting them...
But but who was there to teach raghav these things n who stayed at him to teach such valuable things of life?? He was always a failure in personal life though he was successful as a business man..he always lost for others n gained nthng n also hurt ppl n get hurt...
Thank you for showing n mentioning this difference...this is to knw dat parents n surrounded ppl r very imp at phase of their growth from childhood to their adulthood to learn d truevalues life...if no such ppl is their to guide obviously they r persons blessed hell throughout their lifes...
No parents love,later surrounded ppl used raghav,he got fed up n bcam arrogant,later wen a person like kalpi cam to teach him abt love again his mom n cam to break his dreams n finally he was nvr loved completely n was nt thought hw to respect ppl n nt to hurt them...

Ur ff vl make ppl y raghav should nt b hate...

But for ur storyline daskh will b gud match to kalpi...

In reality i want aghav to get his love once atleast in his life who cn love n teach him life
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
raghav k saath date tht too after kissing daksh????
i know kalpi khadkaayegi rags ko
update soon

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