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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 16
Happy and proud was Vitthal on the day he got his two daughters married to the love of their lives.It had been a long wait for Daksh and Kalpi.Workacoholic that she was,Kalpi had insisted that she clear all the backlog in the company before the wedding.Daksh had agreed.But ,these days Daksh always agreed with Kalpi on any issue,teased Disha.If tomorrow Kalpi said the sky was orange,he would still shake his head.Sammy conceded that Daksh was indeed smart.Even before marrying her,he had realised that the key to a successful wedding lay in saying yes to the woman...and so the banter went on and on.
If any one had surmised that the intervening months of separation would take a toll on their long distance relationship,they could not have misjudged more.Daksh and Kalpi only grew closer with each day ,even though they were apart.They came to realise that they were indeed meant to be...how they complemented each other,they were like two parts of a whole.
There was not a single day that Daksh failed to thank his mother for that wonderful advise she had given him...to thank his stars for giving him the brains to follow it...to thank God for sending Kalpana to him.There was nothing more he wanted than to embark on his new life.He now had it all..career,family,love.Only a few fortunate people in the world would be as blessed as him
Kalpi on her part,thanked her luck.She now firmly believed that she was, in fact ,never had been unlucky.Everything that occurs in a person's life,she thought,did so with a purpose.The tragic turn of events that had taken place to put her through such turmoil was convened by the forces to bring Daksh into her life.To make her fall in love with a person who valued relationships just like her,who respected women,who put his family above all.Daksh was like her mirror image on matters of import.That was why they knew that no matter what the times ahead,they would stick together,through thick and thin.
JD constructions would now be managed by Sammy and Disha.Daksh and Kalpi would of course continue to remain on the board,but the field work was now in Sammy's hands.Vitthal had opted to stay back in India.It was a strange mix of both joy and sorrow as he lifted his daughter's dholi to see her off.Many years ago,he had thought that dream was finished.But now,it was a bigger,brighter and better dream...his daughter was starting her journey with a wonderful person,who looked upon his rajkumari like a queen and treated her as one.
Kamala had been right on that one count only..."jab woh seth ke bete ki samajh me aayega,tabtak bahooth dher ho chuki hogi" .it was true.Raghav had realised his mistake.But it had been too late,for kalpi had moved on.
As the flight took off ,Kalpi looked into Daksh' eyes and smiled.he caught her hands in his and raised it to his lips.From now on we are going to fly,sweetheart,"he said,"we will soar up in the sky together,now and forever."
"Anywhere with you,Darling,"she said,resting her head on his shoulder.
She felt she had finally come a gull circle.her life was complete.





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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Dear friends,
The views put forth through the course of this FF are strictly mine .It has not been my intention to sully anyone or hurt .For starters when Disha tells us Raghav is the scum of the earth for having used a woman ,it is what I feel.I strongly believe that the society today is strongly influenced by the visual media.There have been enough atrocities on women in society.Add to this the regressive tracks shown in serials,it does not augur well for the future.I have still to get used to the idea of using Paaki as a tool for revenge...and will probably never come to terms with it.For that alone ,I find it hard to forgive Raghav.
Though the present track highlights Paaki as a scapegoat and in the future,we might get to see more of this in an attempt to garner sympathy,I am still unable to connect with her.She is,in my opinion,selfish and as portrayed in my story not above using people as per her convenience.She will probably,never ever make it to my favourite list,even if she does bring Ragna together.
Kamala has been the most inconsistent character in the serial this far.The creatives are yet to decide whether she is a good mother or not.They might have forgotten what they shot,but we have our video archives.Kamala made no attempt to save Kalpi when she was drowning.So those dialogues of ignoring to give strength was balderdash...an attempt to canonise her into Saint Kamala.
Vitthal and Pakhya are those characters,who given the present track ,will "also be there" in the serial.Do not see any scope for the creatives to give them bigger parts
For those of you who want Prem Kapoor as parallel lead for kalpi,a small word of caution.Prem is inherently bad,he has aquired all the dominant negative genes of both Neetu and Saahil,his upbringing has been in the worst possible way...so he is at present a very bad influence.But who knows,just as they changed Raghav Singhania overnight,they might make Prem turn over a new leaf overnight.Still my personal
opinion is that Kalpi deserves much better
Raghav singhania...the person for whom I actually started watching this serial, is at present also the reason for my watching it online ,at present or reading WU.His character assassination was complete on that fateful Friday night.So ,unless he does somethimg really grandiose and performs a Sorcar act on me, I do not want him for kalpana.His explanation has to be really strong and convincing ,for him to win back my love,leave alone hers.
Finally my kalpi, the girl who makes me cry with her,cry for her,want to reach out and ease her pain,Ido not know whether there will be a disha,daksh or a Rahul Oberoi to help her in her journey.I personally do not care as long as she surges ahead...and yes of one thing I am clear...Raghav should have no hand in her success.Whatever she achieves,it should be on her own merit
Oh before I forget,with the present Raghav , I do not want Ragna ,but in the same vein,I DO NOT WANT RAAkI...I cannot bear them together in the same frame for even a second,so if the plan is to take that track further ,we are going to get an insipid cup of tea...There is no offence meant,but there is absolutely no chemistry,which means I am unable to connect with them...dead couple even before they start...and no I'm not bashing any actor.Sometimes ,no matter h ow much one tries,things just do not fall in place...they look artificial,contrived...raaki to me is like that.
Well,characters in serials these days change as easily as one changes their clothes...so I do not pin much hopes on future tracks.just hope they do no massacre my beautiful Kalpana
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Don't take me wrong.. but honestly, though i should feel great reading the story - kalpi won - got a better bet that Raghav etc... i actually did not feel happy... it was an empty feeling...
Why may be because Raghav isn't so hollow as you have portrayed him to be ... (as of what is shown now) .. and kalpi's love for him was also not skin deep.. it is a connect and another thing is i don't believe in love at first sight ... ("this is the guy/girl" for me that is crap)..

While i will not justify what raghav did.. he has suffered a lot in his life and this is like a death sentence for a 1 wrong step he took.. i know i am ranting.. but i don't want Ragna separated ... at the same time this Raaki marriage is also not digesting for me.. CVs has messed up the story for the sake of messing it up...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u so much for such wonderful FF👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
I loved your story...:)
Great job!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Just loved it...Really speechless..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I must say wonderful story, and story wise its perfect.👏 Thank you for giving us a different view and story. But I only felt that some of the characters were portrayed a bit too much on the grey side, like Kamla, Pakhi & even Raghav. In real life, maybe I'll like to move on and settle for some one as perfect as Daksh. But emotions wise, I could only relate to Ragna together. I really loved Daksh's character. the only thing is here characters seem to be either black, or white. Loved your story,but I still somehow relate to Raghav more.
I hope I did not hurt or offend you.
Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for this beautiful ff. I read all the parts in one go . Wish u were the script writer of ema. I always wanted ragna to happen but it didnit .I started hating raghav the day he ditched kalpi. Like u I dont want rakhi but I want ragna to happen. I know its imoossible considerong the way story is goin. I wudnt ve mind if they portrayed kalpi, her success story and love with new entry. But I guess it is also not pissible as ema is now concerntrating more on revenge plan. I stopped watching ema since last 2 week and ve followed wu and lu and internet only for the scenes I want 2 watch but I guess I ve to stop it also if yhe storu of ema goes the way it is goin. You story was realy refreshing. Thts y I eish u were the script writer of ema.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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To all forummembers who have taken the time to read my FF ,appreciate it .Having a problem with the like tag ,hence this common thank you note
@ newfan,chahat4u,absolutely not offended.Agreed that my characters were not grey...agree that Raghav has many more layers to im than what I have portrayed,but my handling of Kamala ,paaki and Raghav has been influenced by my deep anger at the way they have been handled or have dealt with Kalpi.Also agree with newfan ,that the present mess is by cvs ,just for the sake of messing things up.Whether it recovers wit time or turns into a bigger quagmire is an issue that only time will tell.
@ chahat4u...the other reason my characters are all black and white are because everytime I like a couple and follow them,'interesting twist" separates them and vexes me.This has happened innumerable times...Sidyusha BV,Asya QH,Arvi PR,Ragna EMa and now Rabir SSLK.hence desired a story where there is a fairytale ending.
Edited by bhaironnath - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was simply awesome. The ending was just fabulous. Thank u soo much for writing this.

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