another os updated chapter 17 21/6/14 - Page 2

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amazing update... please update soon... dont keep us waiting...
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ohh nicee
wiating for kalpi real identity to be revelaed
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loved both the updates

update soon
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once again, brilliant update, cannot wait to read more.
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Awesome os...👏👏continue soon..
Loved kamla..😊😊
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Chapter 3:
After vital discharged from hospital kalpi asked him to come with her and he did the same becoz he don't want to hurt her princess so all pakya ,kamla & vital shift with kalpi and they live happily now vital is well and pakya is running her own repairing shop becoz he love repairing so he took a loan and start his own shop and kalpi also help him secretly she give him a loan and settle his shop. And one day Vithal is finding her princess there, but she is not in her room and he go see her in the balcony, he goes there and place his hand on her daughter's head and ask her what happen.

k: nothing happen baba i'm just here for fresh air.
v: so u want fresh air right , we can go for walk if u want.
K: i always love that , ok lets go.
they go out and sit on the bench and here vital ask her again what happen to you why r u worried.
k: baba why it's always happen to me first my parent leave me alone and then i lost my best friend and iam relly sorry meri wajah se aapko aapki beti khoni padi.
V: usme teri koi galti ni thi beta or us hadse se tera koi taluk ni he jo hona tha ho gaya or tune to mujhe promise kia tha ki tu kabhi bhi khud blame nhi karegi us chiz ke lie bas tu itna yaad rakh ki tu kalpana raichand he abhay raichand ki behan & raichand company ki soul owner or me chahta hu ki meri rajkumari pehle ki tarah hi apna business sambhale or fir abhay ko bhi to london me business dekhna or agr tu aise hi udaas rahegi to wo kese kar paega sab .
K: i know baba me kal hi bahi ko london wapas jane ke lie keh dungi aap chinta mat karo.
V: or ha aaj me tujhe apni kasam se azaad karta hu ab tujhe kalpana vitahl jadhav banke nhi jina hoga ab tu kalpana raichand banke apni life jii.
K:ni baba is naam se bahot pyaar he mujhe or wese bhi me aapki hi beti hu bhale hi body different par dil to aapki beti ka hi he na.
v: ha meri rajkumari lekin beta me tujhe se teri pehchaan nhi chinna chata hu me chahta hu ki tu un sabko bata de jinhone teri ankho me aasu ale , ek baat to me bahot achse samjh gaya ki is dunia me sab kuch paisa hi he bas or kuch nhi.
K: aisa kuch ni he baba agr sab paisa hi hota to me aapki rajkumari kese hoti.
And they both laugh and go from there.
and here after reaching home kalpi find soemone outside waiting for her.
kalpana: baba aap andar jaie mujhe thoda kaam.
vithal:beta pehle diner kar leti
K:u don't worry baba i will join in 1/1 hour k now go.
vithal go in and that comes towards kalpana
man: mam (handing over one file to her) it contain every information which u want.
K:and what about the other work.
man: mam that's also done and don't worry she is safe and took care of her security & comforts also.
K: thanks aman but plz don't tell anything to bro ok.did u get that.
aman:ok mam .now can i leave.
kalpana come in and go towards her room and keep that file in a safe place.


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Kalpana pov: now everything is sorted now I can go and convince Abhay to leave for London.
Then Kalpana come down and convince abhay and abhay say ok i will but tomorrow's meting u have to attend as kalpana raichand not as kalpana vithal jadhav she promises him and say ok i
will


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Next morning in raichand's company.
various builder are presented as raichand's company is among the top 5 leading company so everyone wants to work with them & prem sahil raghav pakhi & sammy is also there but they reach company soon to create impression where prem is excited as he will only grab that deal becoz now raghav is not his rival so he is happy everyone moves towards reception to ask receptionist about the conference hall and receptionist tell them the direction of confrence hall and they go there and find kalpi is sitting there she is wearing formal dress when prem see kalpi he become mad and come inside and sit infront but she is busy with her laptop so she didn't even pay the heeds towards and sammy comes and tap on her shoulder and smile and asked her how is she, she smile back and said she is fine n what about u he says he is fine too.

And here Prem again in is insulting tone.
prem: (think that she is employee)so u get another job here u bai ki beti how u get this job i know definitely u bribe them for this job.
Well its good for u to left RS construction how u will work there (taunting voice).
Then Kalpana look at him and give him a mischievous smile and put earphone and start working again.and Sammy starts smiling by seeing her behavior and look towards prem and now prime give an irritating look at her.
After some time she finishes her work and place that laptop in her place and stand up to take some file for presentation and Prem start taunting her. But kalpi hears all because in reality she is not listening music, but to avoid him she put earphone.

just then sharma jii come inside (sharma jii kalpi secretary who give his life 10 years to raichand and kalpi respect him for his work and call him sharma ji).
along with more builder and asked her is everything done mam.kalpi yes sharma jii everything is done.

After 10 min the conference is full with business men and kalpi start with her presentation many of them know kalpi and many don't know.
When she finish again prem start again and asked him, will you plz elaborate (pointing on some point in the presentation) that point again.
k:no Mr. prem as i already discuss i know where is mind that time, now I'm going to explain.
P: it's ur work kalpana as u r a employe of this company.
K: ohh really Mr .prem (then she pull chair and sit on that )
which shock prem and again don't u know taht this chair is for company chairperson only.
K: yes , Mr. prem i know that this chair belong to chairperson only, & in the chairperson of this company.so now also u have any prblm.

prem , sahil sammy ragahv pakhi are shocked
p:this is impossible.
K: impossible, says I'm possible. so please don't waste our time its really precious .
And if have any problem then you can leave.Thank you.

and then meeting goes well and kapoor's got that deal which surprise prem but thsi time he didn't say anything as sahil asked him to shutup when all are coming out.


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All hear a voice that someone is screaming that " i love you Kalpana & see I'm here, but receptionist is not allowing me to meet you********
When Kalpana heard that her eyes become wide and she says in her low voice so he is here, oh god, please save me from this idiot and all run out to see who is doing this kalpana is not interested as she know who is he.and all find a dashing and handsome guy is standing on a table and screaming .

When that man sees that everyone is out he think that the meeting is over then his eyes search for Kalpana when he didn't find here there then he again scream " i love you Kalpana & see I'm here, to meet u when he didn't get any reply he again start loud where is my tigress(emphasis on this word) as i want to meet her********
Then Kalpana comes down and place her hand on her hips and says (loudly) you idiot, don't call me that and what the hell are you doing here come on come down.

Guy: again, no i will not what the hell is wrong with ur receptionist, she didn't allow me to meet u.
K: plus jay (that guy's name) comes down don't create a scene here.
jay: no i will not first say u love me then only i get down.
K:(shoot a dagger towards him) and say come down right now in a commanding voice,
jay: no , no first say then only.
K: fine i love you.now come down
jay: no, not in this way you can say this politely also come on say.
K:(smile) and say jay i love you now plz come down everyone is seeing this drama .
and then jay comes down everyone is surprised and start gossiping and Raghav Sammy pakhi Sahil Prem are shocked.

precap: raghav is shocked whe jay gave sharma jii holiday and say he will assist kalpi as he want to spend time with her.




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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Kalpi ignoring Prem was amazing lol
Who is this jay person now?
It look like he is a comedian lol
Awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
it made me laugh going through each sentence...great ...
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#19
An amazing story line!!...loved it! <3
Plzz pm me for d next update!...continue soon
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Superbb updatw dear...👏👏👏
Pls do continue soon...
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