another os updated chapter 17 21/6/14

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chapter1:
Index:
chapter1 - page 1
chapter2- page 3
chapter3-page 5
chapter4-page6
chapter5-page8
chapter6-page9
chapter7-page10
chapter 8-page 11
chapter 9-page 12
chapter10: page 14
chapter11-page 15
chapter12-page17
chp 13-page 18
chap14-page21
chap15-page23
chap 16- page 25
chap 17:page 27

so as u know rags wed pakhi and kalpi is heartbroken then she argue with rags by he do this with her and asked him to leave and here kamla maa slap pakhi first time and scoulding her for snatching her daughter happiness and then also scould rags that u said that u love my daughter is this ur love and vithal also scould him and ask him to leave when rags leave kalpi cried hard and she also leave that place and comes to garden where she used to sit when she is upset and then she make a call and say that i need u plz come and again cry.
suddenly a duster car stop there and a guy come out of it and see her crying he runs towards her and hug her and says what happen and she narrates him whole drama that happened with her..

and then that guy asked her to come with him and they go in his house and he show her one room and then he go to chwal and meet vithal & kamla & pakya and ask them to come with hima s now there is no need for u to live here but kamla refuse as she has spend her whole life here and vithal says Abhay(that guy) i know that u r with her so there is no need to worry i know u will handle her well but it better for her to stay away from here for some time.

here in abhay 's house:
kalpi is still crying and abhay comes there & hug and asked her now there is no need for u to work in RS construction now its time to releive ur identity and show him that u r not weak and resign that job

k: no abhay i can't as i have signed a bond with his company for 6 mon if i resign then i have to pay a huge amount to him.

abhay: come on kalpana ur my sister u r the owner of raichand comp there is no need for u to work there. or wese bhi aaj tak mene tumhari sari zidd mani he tumne kaha tumhe chawl me rehna he me maan gaya tumhe common people ki life jeeni he me wo bhi maan gaya but now no ur my sister abhay raichand sister now there is not need for u to work there & now u will not visit chwal as taht chwal still belong to singhani and don't worry about aai baba & pakya i will make them understand they will live with us here . so don't worry.

K: but bhai
abhay: stop meri behan kab se itni kamzoor ho gai ki koi bhi ake uska dil tod dega u r alwys a fighter u took Raichand comp. to no.1 position now no more tear becoz its for them to shed tears who hurt and break ur heart. now i want my kalpi who is strong enough to fight back. now go and take rest.
K:(wipe her tears) ur right bhai why i will cry i love him truely but what he did he ditch for that pakhi . now its time to show him that i'm not coward to elope i will stay here and give his pain back to him what he gives to me now.
And Kalpana leaves from there and changes her dress and pack everything in a packet.
and in morning she call her aai that is coming there as she has to take some stuff from there and tehn she chwal and pack all the dress and ringh which ragahv gave to her and also kept a packet inside her bag. And come downstairs where Abhay is talking with her brother
when she come downstair abhay asked hera bout the bag actually it conatin all he things which mr. singhania gift and now i don't want anything otherwise she will think that i'm greedy so i thought to return it back to him said kalpana.
kamla:careing her duaghter cheeck kalpi tu thik he na beta.
kalpana:holding her hand aai tune hi to kaha ki me strong women hu to dekh me to bilkul bhi ni roo rhi par tu kyu roo rhi he.
vital: haa kamla rona band kar tu meri rajkumari ko kamzor bana rhi he.
abhay asked her to come otherwise u will be late and both kalpana & abhay drove towards RS construction.

Rs construction
where ragahv is restless about kalpana and worried for her and cursing him for hurting her and here pakhi is in her dramland and sammy is annoyed my his friend deed and he is not talking with him
and sammy come to ragahv 's cabin to inform him about the meeting just then raghav intercom rang and secr said sir kalpana mam wants to meet u and he hesistatly said send her in.
kalpana knock his cabin door.
and she is expression less yes she is angry with him it looks in her eyes but she is strong enough not to cry infront of him
sammy: hey kalapna how r u.
kalpana: smile looking at him i'm fine sammy & how ur doing .
sammy: i'm also fine.
ragahv: kalpana
kalpana:interrupt him and Mr. Singhania here is my resignation letter.
and raghav is shocked by seeing her face that she is not even looking at him.
raghav: u can't leave as u signed a bond with my company & if u lave then u have to pay a huge amount.& i don't think taht ur in that state to pay ack.
kalpana(looking straight into his eyes) i know this mr. Singhania so u don't worry becoz i'm going to pay u that huge amount as it's already mention in the contract if i leave this job then i have to pay. 3 lakh rs so here is ur amount and she handover him apacket and asked him to count the amount.
ragahv: who gave u this much money,
k:it's none of ur business Mr. singhania and one more she put that bag down in this bag its contains all ur costly gift which u ahev given to me and thanks for whatever u done to me otherwise i will nevr think that i'm worthy and say good bye.

sammy follow her outside ragahv cabin here ragahv sees that letter and find ring that get flashback when he make her wear that ring.
sammy: kalpi r u really want to leave this job.
kalpana: ha sammy i can't work here and u don't worry i'm not going any whre i'm here only in mumbai and we will meet soon.
then she leave RS construction with abhay.

precap: kalpana releve her identity infront of everyone that she iskalpana raichand owner of raichand & com.
and here ragahv is shocked & sad with her behaviour towards him
guys if u like this os then let me know i will write more.

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very well written...update soon...👍🏼
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brilliant, please update soon, just wish that CV's had your kind of thinking, that would have been awesome.
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awesome! now hope to see something like this in the show as well. hope d cvs are reading this
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chapter2
Then she leaves RS construction with Abhay.

While driving kalpi is still thinking that what happened to him so suddenly still she is not able to believe that Raghav betray her when they reach raichand come. abhay & kalpi both get down of car and Abhay start moving then he turn and find Kalpana is still standing there he go towards her &asked her to come with him
K:actually abhay i have some work so if u don't mind can i take ur leave.
Abhay knows her mental state so he says no ur not going anywhere right now you are coming with me, but Kalpana says no I have an urgent work, please let me go & I know you're worried for me but please don't take tension as see i'm alright and its really important work and she say i will see in the evening and Abhay can't stop her and allow her to go but take care of yourself.
kalpana turn yes bro i will and wink towards him and start moving
Abhay pov: i know ur hurt but u don't want to show other your tears & still you have faith in him, but i don't think u should do this Kalpana it will hurt u more if u find something fishy.

Kalpana drive towards marine beach and sat there and make one call from her phone talk with someone ask him to find out everything ASAP.

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And here on road vital is walking aimlessly, he is very disappointed by all the things happened yesterday he is sad for her rajkumari he is so much lost in his thought that he didn't notice one car come and hit him and he fall on road with a pool of blood.
when sammy raghav& pakhi is going for meeting and suddenly sammy watch vithal laying on road he stop his car and move out
raghav: what happened sammy why u stop car.
Sammy didn't answer his question and go there where so many people surround vital and he shout on their carelessness that they didn't even call ambulance then Raghav or pakhi also come there Raghav help Sammy to lift vital take him to the hospital and where Sammy informed Kamla maa and kamla rushes towards hospital when she reach there she asked sammy about vital condition and he asked Sammy to call Kalpana as she forget her phone in home. So Sammy calls Kalpana but her phone is not reachable he look at her and say phone is not connecting i will try her again.
And Kamla is worried he pacify her and say everything will be alright & pakhi Raghav also come forward to console him, but she moves back because she remembers that they betray her daughter.
Here doctor comes out from emergency and said that he need to operate on a patient as his state is critical and for this you need to pay 3 lakh Rs. So please complete all the formalities
kamla is shocked as she has to pay 3 lakh she is worried from where she get the money and Raghav says don't worry Kamla maa as i will pay the bill, but she says there is no need ragahv baba apke pehle hi bahot ehsan he aapka ab or ni and she asked sammy to dial a number she tell her the number and give phone to kamla
kamla:hello beta kese ho tum
person:i'm ok maa tell why r u worried.
kamal:vital met with an accident and we r here in city hospital plz.
Person interrupts her in between and said i will be there in15 min disconnect the call here Sammy says aunty I will pay the hospital u don't worry
kamla: nhi beta tum chinta mat karo sab ho gaya.
And Abhay comes there and he does all the formality and asked her why she didn't call kalpi, i call her but her number is not reachable said Kamla.

Abhay: ok, I will try.
Abhay call Kalpana and this time her phone connect and he informed her everything and she says she is coming there within an hour .
Abhay ok come soon.

And here operation is successful and Docter shifted vital to other room when he gains consciousness, he asked Kamal about Kalpana she said she is coming and he become frustrated while seeing raghav & pakhi there and Sammy asked them to leave. When they come out ragahv bumps into Kalpana and Kalpana give him an annoyed look and go inside and meet her father & asked him how he met with an accident.
vital:are beta pareshan mat ho dekh me thik hu.
kalpana:aai tune mujhe phone kyu ni kia.
Sammy: kia tha but tumhara not reachable tha.
kalpana: ohh to baba ko yaha kaun laya.
sammy me laya hu mene unhe road par dekha and then hum unhe yaha le aaye.
kalpana thanks him for helping her baba.
sammy say ohh come on kalpana ur like my little sister so plz don't embrass me by saying thanks .
Dr. come there and asked them to leave and allow only one person and kamla says that she will stay here u can go out.
kalpana & sammy come out and Abhay also comes there with medicine and he go in gave that medicine to dr and went out and then kalpana hug him and says thanks for being here when i'm not.
Abhay: ohh ho to meri angle mujhe thanks bol rhi he come on ye mee bhi mom dad he .
sammy raghav , apkhi are shocked by seeing kalpana hug abhay .


precap
kalapna releive her identity



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