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Posted: 11 years ago
Prem get what he deserve lol
Natasha beating him with her hockey stick was hilarious
Omg! Raghav dream is coming through
His Kalpi proposed him...
Beautiful update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: marushkaa

But I remember reading that Raghav knows the trurth dat Natasha is Kalpana...(correct me if I'm wrong)
& since they r same he shouldn't mind as he loves kalpana as a person & not her name !! 😊

πŸ˜› yup u r right πŸ˜†
Edited by kanch1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
πŸ˜ƒ Kalpi/Natasha proposing Raghav! πŸ˜ƒ Nice. Love it. 😊 loved Natasha beating Prem! πŸ˜†πŸ‘ do update soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
When i read prem kalpi fight scene..


Update next chappy asap..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

When i read prem kalpi fight scene..



Update next chappy asap..

thanks yaar πŸ˜† u encourage me to write more
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

πŸ˜ƒ Kalpi/Natasha proposing Raghav! πŸ˜ƒ Nice. Love it. 😊 loved Natasha beating Prem! πŸ˜†πŸ‘ do update soon.😊

thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
rags ko haan bolna hi padega varna iske baad main uske peeche hockey stick leke bhagoongiπŸ˜† oh no abhi yaad aaya i don have hokey stick...ok peeche waale golf course se borrow karke laungiπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 16:

Raghav is standing there dumbstruck where Natasha is looking at her confusingly she is not getting why he is standing like this.

Natasha pov: ohh god his silence is killing me why he taking so much time can't he say yes, first he say I love to me & when I replied him back then he standing here like a statue .

Natasha:raghav will u marry me.

Raghav comes out from his trance and then look into her dark eyes & tears rolled down to his eyes he say yes I will.

Natasha takes a deep breath.

Raghav: what happen?

Natasha: hug him and Raghav kiss her forehead and again he asked her what happen.

Natasha I was afraid becoz u took so long to answer me u know I thought u says no.

Raghav: oh( with smile) what if I said no to u.

Natasha: well in that case I have my hockey stick with me(burst out into laugh).

Raghav(confused): what.

Natasha: nothing, leave this & plz come home tomorrow as my parents want to meet u.

Raghav: ok but after that u has to meet my family also & for that u have to come to Mumbai with me.

Natasha:ok.u know when I met ur family for the first time I thought that u guys are from mental asylum .

Raghav:what .

Natasha:yup even I said this to my parents also & when yesterday I told them about u they are surprised to know that u r the same person whom I used to call mad earlier.

Raghav chuckled at her words and say so u used to call me mad earlier.

And come close to her she feel his hot breath on her shoulder as he leaned towards her.

And It s look like that her heart skip and now she is nervous with his closeness she closed her eyes when Raghav cares her face & tag her hair behind her ear.

Raghav after seeing his effect on her moves back (teasingly) so this is ur planed to call me here & propose me.

Natasha opens her eyes. And say yes.

Raghav: u r so unromantic.

Natasha: ohh really.

Raghav: yes is the way to propose ur lover.

Natasha: yes, now come with me .

Raghav: where:

Natasha:actually I have a surprise for u.

Raghav: and what's that.

Natasha drag raghav towards pool side where raghav is shocked to see the pool side he glanced around to see pool side is beautifully decorated with lights & lit candles floating into the pool everything is decorated beautifully. And the moonlight is adding a dress of sensuality to the arrangement.

And he turns to face her where he notice that his kalpi is trying to read his mind to know how he feels about her surprise,

Raghav:it's beautiful.

Natasha:only beautiful, u know u r not good in praising anything she crossed her arms & show him fake anger,

Raghav smile at this and hug her from behind u know I don't have words to praise this, but yes I have words to praise u.

Natasha: ohh then go head.

Raghav sit there on the floor & then pull Natasha by her hand becoz of this sudden act she lost her balance and fall on his lap. & they both shared an eye lock.

Raghav looking deep inside her eyes bite his lower lip & place a kiss on her cheek.& Natasha start blushing and raghav is admiring her beauty.

Raghav: u know u r my life , without u I'm nothing even I can't imagine my life if ur not around me ( in his mind he always care that he will never call Natasha as kalpi),u r my heart beats Natasha actually when I meet u first time then I thought that I'm the most luckiest person on the earth , I can't even imagine u away from me ( he close his and tears start rolling down his cheek as he had the flashback of kalpi's accident).

Natasha wipe his tears and say u love me so much but I like to clear one thing that I love more than u love me. and she placed a small pack on his cheek.

And he kisses her hand now she become shy, she stood up from there and asked him for dance. They both dance raghav is enjoying every moment after so many times he is so close to her.

plz guys if u all like this os of my then comment becoz now i'm bored with this if i get more comments then only i will update this, if not then this will be my last post for this os so now u all enjoy πŸ˜†

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Posted: 11 years ago
RES
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beautiful update...πŸ‘πŸ‘ accha hua rags ne haan bol diya varna hockey stick ready thaπŸ˜†
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww amazing yaar as usualπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Natasha: well in that case I have my hockey stick with me🀣

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