RagNa SS: Demons [Last Part, Page 41 updt Dec. 16th] - Page 29

Originally posted by: appyK

Oh so paakhi is back and omg she has brains... Sorry but that's something hard to imagine..

Lol Sammy and his big mouth.. But glad that now atleast paakhi won't be an obstacle.. Her brother would be..

It was all serious and then you made me laugh with that.. 'Kalpi clearly had hung out a lot woth Sammy' and then when Kalpi started telling Rags about prem's proposal thing I had my hand on my mouth and then this again made me laugh

Of course, he also wanted to bang his head in the wall as soon as the words were out of his mouth. What was he doing?! Digging his own grave? At this rate, he might as well give her hand in Prem's and bid adieu to ever seeing another one of her smile.

Isn't he being too good??

Just loving this more and more.. Will be waiting for your update..

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome n intense Update!!!!

Amazing!!!

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautifully written chapter
Wth is wrong with Raghav???
Kalpi is slipping away from him and he isn't doing anything
Poor girl is literally giving him every opportunity to him to confess but he kept screwing up
He better man up and confess before he loose Kalpi forever...
Lovely update

Originally posted by: shoonya9

First of all congrats to both u n hiya for a thoughtful FF.

You have beautifully given the sketch of array of emotions Raghav, Kalpi, Sammy n Prem are going through.

Their journey is not only confined to them bit it touches a'll of us at some or other sphere in life.

we all are somewhere caged by Pavlovian phenomena of conditioning and our whole life is based on it. We all have these demons of insecurities, jealousy, possessiveness, repression deep down hidden in us not allowing us to trust the life nd live it to its fullest.

To an eextent Kalpi, Sammy, Prem n Pakhi hv recognized, accepted n tried to come out of the clutches of these demons nd Sammy n Kalpi are trying to help rags to overcome his ones. But poor fellow is still caught up by his ego nd deep down fear of rejection nd loss of loved ones and hence though striving hard he is not able to succeed n express himself. It seems he will be able to confess his feelings Only when he will be pushed to extreme edge when Kalpi will be about to marry Prem? Are u gonna do that?

It'd really commendable for both of u hv. Written this FF without any melodrama or loud imaginations but simple day to day events n interactions. You hv successfully used subtel humour n wit On every occasion be it b/w RAGNA or SAMNA like dating b/w SAMNA or hidden jealousy track of rags for Sammy.

Really wish EMA cvs could hv explore emotions inthis fashion, alas they were robots not even Knew P of Psychology and emotions.

once again congrats for a wowonderful SS, and look forward for more work from u. Do complete this one soon. Kudos to both of u.