RagNa SS: Demons [Last Part, Page 41 updt Dec. 16th]

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Omg rags needs to hurry up or he'll lose her. Rags is so slow. Poor kalpi trying to get rags to admit his feelings for her but rags being so rags 😡 but loved the update and can't wait for the next one. But one question did I miss a part? When did prem confess?

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Omg prem & kalpi...no way...

Waiting rags to admitt his feelings ...

Nice update...

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Arpita

@appyK

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Oh so paakhi is back and omg she has brains... Sorry but that's something hard to imagine..

Lol Sammy and his big mouth.. But glad that now atleast paakhi won't be an obstacle.. Her brother would be..

It was all serious and then you made me laugh with that.. 'Kalpi clearly had hung out a lot woth Sammy' and then when Kalpi started telling Rags about prem's proposal thing I had my hand on my mouth and then this again made me laugh

Of course, he also wanted to bang his head in the wall as soon as the words were out of his mouth. What was he doing?! Digging his own grave? At this rate, he might as well give her hand in Prem's and bid adieu to ever seeing another one of her smile.

Isn't he being too good??

Just loving this more and more.. Will be waiting for your update..

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Beautifully written chapter
Wth is wrong with Raghav???
Kalpi is slipping away from him and he isn't doing anything
Poor girl is literally giving him every opportunity to him to confess but he kept screwing up
He better man up and confess before he loose Kalpi forever...
Lovely update

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shoonya9

@shoonya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

First of all congrats to both u n hiya for a thoughtful FF.

You have beautifully given the sketch of array of emotions Raghav, Kalpi, Sammy n Prem are going through.

Their journey is not only confined to them bit it touches a'll of us at some or other sphere in life.

we all are somewhere caged by Pavlovian phenomena of conditioning and our whole life is based on it. We all have these demons of insecurities, jealousy, possessiveness, repression deep down hidden in us not allowing us to trust the life nd live it to its fullest.

To an eextent Kalpi, Sammy, Prem n Pakhi hv recognized, accepted n tried to come out of the clutches of these demons nd Sammy n Kalpi are trying to help rags to overcome his ones. But poor fellow is still caught up by his ego nd deep down fear of rejection nd loss of loved ones and hence though striving hard he is not able to succeed n express himself. It seems he will be able to confess his feelings Only when he will be pushed to extreme edge when Kalpi will be about to marry Prem? Are u gonna do that?

It'd really commendable for both of u hv. Written this FF without any melodrama or loud imaginations but simple day to day events n interactions. You hv successfully used subtel humour n wit On every occasion be it b/w RAGNA or SAMNA like dating b/w SAMNA or hidden jealousy track of rags for Sammy.

Really wish EMA cvs could hv explore emotions inthis fashion, alas they were robots not even Knew P of Psychology and emotions.

once again congrats for a wowonderful SS, and look forward for more work from u. Do complete this one soon. Kudos to both of u.

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: eishe10
Lovely update!! Ragna feelings for each other is slowly coming out.

Thank you! Yup, Raghav is slowly getting there. Won't be long now!

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: riaka
Lovely update.

Thank you! =)

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: mariee
How matured cud somebody's writing be ?? Today i get an answer...It is this maturedd
Had always admired ur wriring skills...simply perfect.
But today the way ull have described every emotion with intensity has left me speechless ...bravo !
i loved raghav's povs & the way his emotions were portrayed ...marvellous !!
It was as if i have this multi-personality disorder where i was 3 ppl at a time ...Raghav , Kalpi & Prem.
At a moment i felt that pinch in my gut ( as ull call it) while i was raghav . The other moment i sensed regret & a longing when i was prem. & ofcourse confused as to why raghav is behaving that way while i was kalpi.
its very rare that this happens to me ... ur update seriously forced me to be attached to it.
awesome ...
i might fall short of adjectives today😆
do continue soon

Wow thank you so much yaar! Your comment just made us both speechless. It's truly a blessing and an honor entertaining you all! =D