RagNa FF:Key To My Heart!~ (Chap 18 on Page 65)(Updated on 22/07/2014) - Page 38

Originally posted by: hitler_kamal

unres...
loved the part...
par arjun kisse baat kar rha tha????/
what's his aim ?
do update soon...
n ya sorry fr late reply megs,,,,,

Originally posted by: premap

Wow! I am lucky, to have found this ss. Almost missed. Read it at one go. Plz update soon. Looking 4ward to it ,eagerly.

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

Ressy messy is here to res with a cup of hot chocolate. 😈

Unres with gummy bears 😳

Girl you had me hooked from first word to the last "Kalpi" breathed by Raghav upon her waking up.

I loved the intro between Raghav and Kalpi, the relationship between Gauri and Kalpi (thank god writers here aren't ruining it like the show has😡) and most of all the relationship between Raghav and Kalpi. I love the fun and innocent romance between the two. It's so...chick flicky. I love it!

The realistic touch is one that keeps a reader hooked. They spent a day together but then the storm (in the form of Pakhi) arrives and things go sour between the two. The fact there was slight drama thrown in but a bit of practicality with the two sorting things out by talking was fab!

Now I have to admit each and every RagNa scene was just too romantic and I enjoyed myself thoroughly while reading it. They purity, the emotions, the sweetness..it was all too much and, well to be honest, needed in these dark and brooding times.

Yaar Megs, the act of Raghav dropping a yellow rose at her door for two weeks was just too sweet and now you've raised my expectations from your Jiju. Ab bichaare ko kya kya karna padega mere liye 🥱.

The only thing that had been scratch my head was when Raghav said he broke up with Pakhi. Knowing the Kapoor Chick, I don't think she'll back down easily and will come back for revenge however I'm just praying that I'm wrong. I've had enough of her scheming and if I do see her I will probably go psycho commando on her. 😃

Raila. I did a double take on that name and when I re-read it I was ROFLing. Expect Rails to be the mahaan one and make a dhamaakedaar entry and have a dance with Raghav. 😆😆😆 Ahaha. I loved it though. The surprise entry and the RagNa romantic dance.

Eh, this Arjun character seems a wee bit funny if you ask me. Raghav Baba, if you really love Kalpi at least have some faith in her. Karwa diya na accident. Haaye meri angel. Go away Mr. Singhania. I am angry at you. Hmph.

But Megs mujhe sirf ek shikaayat hai. MHM kahaan hai? 😭😭

P.S.

I love you!

P.P.S.

Update soon!

Originally posted by: idonkno

Where is my update 😡? You kept me awake last night and gave no update 😭

Originally posted by: ForeverFabulous

Sowwie! 😭 Kal mood kharaab ho gaya tha! Then I had to make last minute changes which I didn't finish till today morning! Plus I had to help my dad pack cause he had a flight today morning then I fell asleep while waiting for him to finish packing! I know all faltu excuses! Tonight, pakka promise! After the end of the LU! 😃

Originally posted by: ForeverFabulous

I've already read your comment like 2 times but I guess another one more time won't hurt! 😆 Receiving such a precise and detailed reply from a writer like you, means a lot to me. I enjoy writing but I know I have major room for improvement. And no better way to learn then to read the works of other writers, especially yours. Now I'm not trying to makkhan maro or anything, but I geuinely mean it! 😳

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. What can you expect in the future from which character, naturally you'll find out in the updates to come. Though you already know a teeny bit you sneaky sneaky person! 😉

And haan, agar koi tips ho writing pe toh dil kholke dena! 😃

Rahi baat jiju ki, abhi se bol sakti hoon, haal bura hone wala hai! 😆

P.S: Jiju told me to tell you ki woh park mein wait kar rahe hain! 😉