RAGNA FF : WHAT TO BELIEVE!! :) LAST PART + EPILOUGE + THANK YOU NOTE - Page 73

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

OMG Panther tried to kill Kalpi...
I like that Raghav came in time
Lovely update



Thank You! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna575

Update next part soon eagerly waiting...



will update in some time
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome! I love the excitement! Can't wait for next update!!



Thank You! :)
will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

It was no doubt a wonderful update;)



Thank You! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
SORRY FOR THE DELAY GUYS...!!!!

Part 27

A few days passed by with peace.One day,Raghav
took Kalpana and Sneha to a park.They had lots of
fun and a wonderful picnic.But things had taken a
drastic turn when Kalpana had gone missing.Kalpana
had seen something move in the bushes a couple
meters away from them.Raghav volunteered to
check but Kalpana told him to stay with Sneha.It
had been an hour since she's been missing and
Raghav didn't know what to do.Sneha had also began
crying.Raghav's phone rang and he picked it up
"Hello"
"Raghav" sobbed Kalpana.
"Kalpi...where are you?Are you okay?"
"Raghav..he came back and took me with him"
"Where?"
"The s-same place where he k-kept Sneha"
Raghav cut the call.He finally managed to hush
Sneha and took her with him to the car.He raced
to the address he had been not too long ago.He
slammed open the door and saw Panther.
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Panther was taking out his gun when he heard the
door slam open "What the?" He swore under his
breath "How the hell did you know we were here?"
"Phone's a common device" Raghav said firmly.
Panther clenched his jaw and narrowed his eyes
when he saw Sneha in a cradle held by Raghav "You
brought the brat" he accused.
"Her name's Sneha"
Panther rolled his eyes "Whatever"
"Where's Kalpana?"
"Somewhere"
"Tell me Panther" Raghav said angrily.
"I am not done with her" Panther claimed.
"She's mine" Raghav growled.
"So what?I need her dead body"
Raghav was shocked "What?Why?"
"Because she is the heiress to billions" he said
casually.
"What are you talking about" Raghav
asked,confused.
"Oh my god..Aaraz.Remember him,the
billionaire...he wrote out a will claiming everything
he owned goes to her BUT if she is not alive,I can
get them transferred on my name"
"Just tell me where Kalpana is" Raghav said.
"No"
Raghav grew angry and lunged at Panther.They
fought.They rolled.Fists connected with each
other's faces and body.They grew angrier and
angrier.Panther took out his pocket-knife and
aimed it for Raghav.But it never touched him.Raghav
closed his eyes fearing it was his end but opened
them when he felt nothing.There was blood but not
his.Raghav pushed Panther off him and stood up.He
looked around and saw Kalpana frozen.He looked
down and saw a gun in her hands "Kalpi" he
whispered,slightly confused.He walked up to her
and took the gun from her grip.He threw it
away.He held her shoulder "Kalpana"
"I-I k-k-killed h-h-im" stammered Kalpana,shocked
"D-Does t-his m-me-an I am a m-murderer?"
"No Kalpi" Raghav assured.He took her in his
embrace "Whatever you did was self defense...well
actually my defense"
"H-He's d-dead"
"Kalpi don't worry..come" Raghav led Kalpana away
from Panther's dead body and picked Sneha's
cradle "Here's Sneha"
That made no effect.Her eyes were still glued to
Panther.Raghav picked Sneha from her cradle and
held her near Kalpana.Sneha cried out loud to grab
Kalpana's attention and it worked "Sneha" Kalpana
took Sneha in her embrace and hugged her "Oh I
missed you so much" Kalpana kissed Sneha's cheeks.
Somehow Raghav managed to drag Kalpana away from
the scene without letting her look back.When they
had reached home,he had sent the girls to their
room to get some rest.Raghav had called the police
and made up a story about Panther dying.He was
surely not going to tell them Kalpana killed him.Once
he was done with the call,he relaxed.Panther was
dead,for real.He would never be coming back and
it was the end.Raghav sighed.Now he and his family
could have some real family bonding time...

*THE END*

THERE IS AN EPILOGUE OF THIS STORY..SCROLL DOWN TO READ :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Small epilogue.

Epilogue

It took some time but Kalpana eventually got over
the trauma of killing somebody.She,Raghav and
Sneha finally began their happy life.

5 Years Later

"Sneha!" Kalpana yelled as she ran after her
daughter "Sneha come on! You have to go to
school"
"No mama!" Sneha replied "I am not leaving"
"It's only for a few hours" Kalpana said.
Sneha shook her head and continued running.She
squealed when she was picked up in mid air "What's
my baby girl up to" Raghav smiled.
"Sneha doesn't want to go to school" Kalpana
complained.
Raghav scrunched his eyes and looked at Sneha "Why
not Sneha?"
"I want to stay here with you,mama, and Sonia"
Sneha pouted.
Sonia was Raghav and Kalpana's two year old
daughter.
Raghav looked at his pouting daughter and looked at
Kalpana "We can her tomorrow,can't we?"
Kalpana widened her eyes "Are you out of your
mind? Has she already brain washed you? Sneha is
going to school today and right now"
She took Sneha from Raghav's arms and took her to
the car,followed by Raghav "I don't want to go"
Sneha whined.
Kalpana looked at her "Oh Sneha,you will love
school.You will make so many friends and learn so
much.In a few years,Sonia will join you"
Sneha gave a small scowl and crossed her arms
against her chest.
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"Bye Sneha" waved Kalpana as her daughter went
inside with the peon.
Sneha waved back and disappeared in the
school.Raghav looked at Kalpana "Are you sure she'll
be fine here alone?"
Kalpana smiled "The teachers and staff are
here.Also children her age"
"Still,I think we could've waited some time before
letting her go to school"
Kalpana laughed and pinched his cheek "You are too
much Raghav"
Sonia giggled in Kalpana's arms and did the same
thing her mother did to him.Raghav glared at Kalpana
"I think our daughters have way too many of your
traits.Sneha always used to pinch my cheeks in her
childhood and still does and Sonia does the absolute
same thing"
Kalpana grinned "It's how they tell their
father,they love him"
"So they love me more than you" Raghav grinned.
Kalpana shook her head "I don't think so"
Raghav chuckled "Whatever makes you sleep at
night" Kalpana widened her eyes and mouth.
Raghav smirked.Seeing Sonia busy playing with her
fingers,he leaned in and kissed Kalpana.She blushed.

Awe.I will miss this story. :):)

DERE IS A THANK YOU NOTE..PLEASE SCROLL DOWN
IfritAmbrose thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK YOU NOTE :--

OK! I don't know from where to start. I am
really humbled that you guys are liking
this story.
I am not a writer, I was never good with
words but my love for Ragna has forced me
to share this with you all. I am just an
college going student and I spent more time
with my laptop than my friends. And the
result you all know. I only want to say that
I am nothing close to a writer. I just write
because I love doing so and still you guys
like it and take your precious time to
comment. For which I am very thankful to
you guys! There are few readers who
always make a point to comment on my
story and it really feels nice to know that I
have some loyal readers, who always
comment.I dont think I need to take their
names, you guys know who you all are ;)
So guys just keep showering your love on
me and in return I will try to keep
entertaining you guys through my words. :)

A Bigwala Thank You to my every reader :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb story 😊
U r very talented. Write more stories,particularly on ragna we r waiting for that 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh so sweet of you. yu eve wrote thank u note. its us readers who have to thank you for your beautiful story. Its really nice. Thank u for the beautiful story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb. Its awsm dear.
Bt m realy feeling bad cz story is over.
U r amazing writer n m realy expecting sum more os ss frm u.
Thanks alot for dis wnderful story. Lv it.

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