RagNa FF: Mein tumhare saath hoon...last update page 56+epilogue+note - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Wonderful story!! 😳
You've got really good writing talent. I love it please update soon! 😊

thank you! Definitely will!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Good going keep it up please continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
wow too good aur kalpi turned gajini plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manikarnikaa

wow too good aur kalpi turned gajini plzz update soon

thx dear!!! Ur support and encouragement means a lot!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6

Raghav was in shock from kalpana's words "aap kaun hai?" Raghav then said "kalpi, mein, raghav." "Mein kaha hoon? Kaun hoon?" Asked kalpi. Going closer and caressing her face, raghav said "tum kalpi ho! Meri kalpi."" Tho aap mere kaun hai? Aap mere Bhai hai?" Asked a confused kalpi most innocently. "Nahi! Nahi! Nahi! Mein tumhare bhai nahi...tumhara...husband hoon..." Said raghav guiltily. "Oh sorry! Mujhe laga ki...sorry!" Said a confused kalpi. "It's ok kalpi, ab batao, kya kahna hai meri jaan ko?" Asked raghav lovingly. "Mera naam kalpi hai?" Asked kalpi. "Haan. Tum kalpi ho. Acha ab batao." Said raghav. "Aap joh bhi pyaar sein khilaye, mein khaon gi." Said kalpi naughtily smiling, unknown that he wasn't her husband. "Oh ho! Kalpi tum bari besharam ho." Said raghav smiling. Just then raghav walked out and went to the caf to buy some dinner for kalpi. While raghav went to buy dinner for his sweetheart, kalpi sat there trying to remember who she was, who raghav was, what her life is like, but alas, she failed in doing so. Raghav went to the cafe and ordered some rice, sabzi, daal, and roti. Raghav knew this is what kalpi enjoyed most so instead of an extravagant and lavish dinner, he kept it simple. Raghav also picked up some things to have a candlelit dinner such as lavender candles, kalpi loved lavenders, lilacs, and a box of chocolates to make kalpi forget her pain and enjoy a candlelit dinner. While raghav was out preparing for his dinner with kalpi, kalpi fell asleep and was having a dream, in her dream she got blurry images of raghav and paakhi hugging, she kicked her legs due to the fright and was mumbling "no...no...no.." Just then raghav walked in to see her having a nightmare, he didn't want to awake her because she looked like an angel while sleeping, but wanted the nightmare to stop! So he put his hand on his forehead, caressed her face, and kissed her pouting lips. And to his surprise she smiled after the kiss. He then setup the table with food, candles and flowers. He was about to wake her up but before that he gave her a small peck on the lip again, then said "kalpi, kalpi, utho jaan." Kalpi then got up and hugged him tight and said "mein bohut dar gayi thi! Aap mujhe phir chod kein mat jaana!" Brushing her hair with his hands to calm her down he said "don't worry! Mein kabhi nahi jaon ga tum ko chod kar! Ab rona band karo! Mein tumhare saath hoon." He then broke the hug took her face in his hand and kissed her forehead, then cheeks, and then lips. Kalpi seemed to enjoy even in her scared, and obscure state. He then carried the scared kalpi in his arms to the table and sat her in the chair as if she were a little girl. He then started to feed kalpana the dinner and after eating a little she started feeding him. After eating, kalpi went to raghav and sat on his lap and raghav made her sit probably and had his hands on her waist. Kalpi then leaned down and kissed his cheek and gave a small peck on his lip. That turned raghav on. He leaned in and trapped her lips between his, and lip locked. They've been kissing for more than 3 minutes. Kalpi in raghav's lap, raghav's one hand on her waist and one on her back on the hook of her bra, kalpi hands ruffling raghav's hair and enjoying the sensation of his lips. They were lost in each other, but just then the door slammed open, and they had to break away the kiss. Raghav saw who it was and his eyes widened in shock, his body stiffened, and his brain went numb...

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Edited by Ragnaislife - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
looks like you love to keep us hanging, wat a place to stop, its like I am going to have a sleepless night, which devil came to disturb them, awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
lovely post...
cont soon pls ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Anjinie

looks like you love to keep us hanging, wat a place to stop, its like I am going to have a sleepless night, which devil came to disturb them, awesome update

sorry dear! And thank u! Aur wait main hi maza!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: dashyrocks

lovely post...

cont soon pls⭐️

thx dear! Definitely will!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Soo cute and lovely part😳..but eager to know who was that person 😕update soon dear... can't see the cliffhanger😳

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